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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_piya_ll

Hii mere rabba u forget to update my fav story...
i wanna to kill u ,update this asap sys sambuuul



piya i update this soon plz wait yar don't kill me phirkaun update day ga
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey so sorry for the late comment...!!!
just read last 4 parts together...!!
superb updates...!!!
that shiela girl was very funny...!!!😆
wow so arjun told everyone about their marriage...!!!
and riya kissed him infront of everyone 😲 wow...!!
wow finally chottu married...!!!
ariya romance on terrace was lovely...1!! omg and hsree locked them in room...!!😆 arjun ke to mazze aagye...!!!
rosh arghhh😡 so she was behind riya's life? she wanted to kill her😲
glad riya is okay...!!!
hmm so ariya ki dobara marriage and sath mai simar sam ki bhi shaadi...!! badia hai...
bechare ke reactions when they came to know that they can't meet them😆
glad rosh understands her mistakes and is trying to rectrify that...!!!
kay baat dono milne aaye hai... and mom caught them..
bahut naughty hote jaa rhe h samjun😆
ariya and sam simar romance was lovely...!!
continue soon...!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
i update last part (a) inshallah tonight or tomorrow morning it's my promise please wait
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

hey so sorry for the late comment...!!!

just read last 4 parts together...!!
superb updates...!!!
that shiela girl was very funny...!!!😆
wow so arjun told everyone about their marriage...!!!
and riya kissed him infront of everyone 😲 wow...!!
wow finally chottu married...!!!
ariya romance on terrace was lovely...1!! omg and hsree locked them in room...!!😆 arjun ke to mazze aagye...!!!
rosh arghhh😡 so she was behind riya's life? she wanted to kill her😲
glad riya is okay...!!!
hmm so ariya ki dobara marriage and sath mai simar sam ki bhi shaadi...!! badia hai...
bechare ke reactions when they came to know that they can't meet them😆
glad rosh understands her mistakes and is trying to rectrify that...!!!
kay baat dono milne aaye hai... and mom caught them..
bahut naughty hote jaa rhe h samjun😆
ariya and sam simar romance was lovely...!!
continue soon...!!



thanks devil for such a lovely comments
Please wait for last part, which i posted inshallah tonight
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Posted: 12 years ago


sara i am going to update dear,
After holding my all ongoing SS, and OS
Please wait sara
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

jaldi jaldi update dona



Wait till tonight
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Posted: 12 years ago
friends i know you all are waiting so i decided to first complete this
FF and go towards other SS
So please friends wait for this
This FF inshallah complete with in two to three days
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sumbulqaiser



sara i am going to update dear,
After holding my all ongoing SS, and OS
Please wait sara


Ok api
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART: 52
second last part.

After a long time I update my FF

Suddenly all lights going off , Riya , roshni and Simar scared by sudden action, Riya holds Roshni's hand and Roshni outs her hand over her hand and say Relax to her, but they sees a spot light on staircase , Riya jerk her head What happened now ? a man comes down from stairs and spot light follows him.

Sameer;

Hey hey hey hey, aa aa aa aa
La la la la, aa aa aa

Sameer moves towards her would be wife . But she turns her face to another side.
Main agar saamne aa bhi jaaya karoon
Laazmi hai ke tum mujhse parda karo

Sameer pulls her and takes her in his arms she hits his chest playfully.


Apni shaadi ke din ab nahin door hai

Finally she rested her head on his chest.
Main bhi tadpa karoon, tum bhi tadpa karo

--SIMAR'

She separates her head from his chest and place his hand on her heart.
Badi mushkil hai, yeh mera dil hai

Badi mushkil hai, yeh mera dil hai
Tum hi kaho kaise main chup rahoon

Simar now wrapped again in his arms, and hide herself in his chest.

Tum agar saamne aa bhi jaaya karo
Laazmi hai ke main tumse parda karoon

She moves away from him and hides behind shalini
Apni shaadi ke din ab nahin door hai
Main bhi tadpa karoon, tum bhi tadpa karo

Riya is quietly watching both of them romancing and dancing. But suddenly she feels some movements around her arms. She scared from known touch of unknown person.

--ARJUN'

He turns her towards him, he hits her face from his face.
Badi mushkil hai, yeh mera dil hai

Badi mushkil hai, yeh mera dil hai

Now his thumb brushing her lips.
Tum hi kaho kaise main chup rahoon

--RIYA'

Riya puts her dupatta on her face.
Tum agar saamne aa bhi jaaya karo
Laazmi hai ke main tumse parda karoon

--ARJUN'

Arjun removes her duptta from her face. And going near to kiss her. But she slap him softly and run away . but he holds her again.
Hey hey, eh hey, aa aa, la la la la la
Sataane ke manaane ke

By rubbing his nose on her shoulder.
Yeh din hai aazmaane ke.

Riya again want to go but he pull her again.
Zara samjha karo dilbar, tumhe meri kasam

--SIMAR--

Simar come closer to sameer, but placing her plam on his heart
Yehi meri hai majboori
Sehi jaaye na ab doori
Mera kya haal hai kaise bataaoon main sanam

--SAMEER--
Zameen hogi, gagan hoga
Tera mera milan hoga

Sameers gives a tight hug to simar.

Main agar tumse nazrein milaaya karoon
Laazmi hai ke tum mujhse parda karo


--SIMAR--
Aa aa aa aa aa aa, la la la la, aa aa aa

--ARJUN'

Arjun puts his hand on Riya's shoulder and cupped her face from another hand.
Main duniya se chala jaaoon
Kabhi na lautke aaoon
Karogi kya akele tum, bataao dilrooba


--RIYA'

Riya pushes him and hugs him tightly, she has tears in her eyes.
Main rab se chheen laaoongi
Tujhe apna banaaoongi
Chalegi saans jab tak yeh na honge hum judaa

--SAMEER--
Na apni yeh kasam toote
Jo rab roothe to rab roothe
Main agar tumko milne bulaaya karoon
Laazmi hai ke tum mujhse parda karo
Apni shaadi ke din ab nahin door hai
Main bhi tadpa karoon, tum bhi tadpa karo


--SIMAR--
Badi mushkil hai, yeh mera dil hai
Tum hi kaho kaise main chup rahoon

--ARJUN--
Main agar saamne aa bhi jaaya karoon
Laazmi hai ke tum mujhse parda karo

After finishing the song Shalini holds both ears.

Shalini: Kiya kar rhay ho tum dono yahan.

Arjun: maa kcuh bhi toh nahi bus humain apni biwiyun ki yaad aa rhi thi.

Shalini: lagta hai kal wali baat tum bhool gay ho abhi yaad dilaun kiya, Tanvi suno toh zara.

Arjun: maa aap kiya kar rhi ho marwao gi kiya.

Roshni: Toh saaf saaf bata kyun nahi detay k kyun aaey ho yahan.

Sameer: Rosh Arjun nay kaha na hum sirf Party attened karnay aaey hain, humari shadi hai aur hum hi room mei qaid rehen no or never.

Shalini: lagta hai aab say shadi tak tum dono ko lock kar k rakhna hi paray ga.

Sameer: lekin aunty hum nay abhi aaisa kiya hi kiya hai.

Roshni: ha mom.. I mean mom wo kiya hai ye dono akelay room mei bour ho rhay thay toh mei nay kaha k neechay aa jao kuch rang jamatay hai, party kaafi pheeki pheeki lag rhi thi, waisay bhi maa sangeet aur nach ganay k bina maza hi kiya, kyun Arjun kyun Sammy sahi keh rhi hun na.

Sameer: ha Rosh tum kabhi ghalat keh hi nahi sakti.

Arjun: Maa please.

Tanvi: ha shalini bachay hain apni shadi ka function attend nahi Karen gay toh kiya Karen gay.

Sameer: thanx mom.

Shalini: ye tum keh rhi ho.

Tanvi: ha .

Arjun hugs Tanvi: thanx mom.

Sameer : mei bhi hun Arjun ruk

He also hugs her .

Sameer: mom you are so sweet mom

Tanvi; bus ab buhat khooti tarifein ho gai, kahan hain tum logon k dost wo bhi is party mei ran jamaen gay ya nahi.

Shree: hum yahan hain aunty ji.

Chotu: ha aunty mere peir toh kab say tyar hain nachnay k liay.

Tanvi: phir intezar kis ka hai beta shru ho jao.

Arjun: mom actually kiya hai na Shree ki GF abhi tak nahi aai hai , us k bina shree dace kaisay sakta hai.

Sameer: shree tu nay shiza say baat ki kahan hai wo.

Shree:keh rhi thi traffic mei phans gai hai, bus abhi pohnchti hi hogi.

Ruby: lo shree Tumhari shiza aa gai.

Shree: kahan reh gai thi tum sab tumhain kitna yaad kar rhay thay.

Arjun: aur sab say zayda shree tumhain yaad kar rha tha.

Shiza: kyun shree koi kam tha kiya.

Ruby: tum toh aaisay pooch rhi ho jaisay tumhain kuch oata hi nahi, shree ka dil hi nai lagta tumharay bina.

Shree; aaisi baat nahi hai Ruby bhabhi.

Riya: toh tum hi bata do na shree'..

Shree: yar tum log bhi na, mei ja rha hun.

Sameer; kahan ja rhay ho shree..

Shree: nachanay ganay aur kahan.

" please turns off the light start music"

Shree shouts on shiza ears and she puts her both hands on her ears.

Ishq hai,

Sameer and roshni join dance floor with shree and shiza.

Both couple dancing with their partner.

Teri aankhon ke matvaale
Kaajal ko mera salaam
Zulfon ke kale kale
baadal ko mera salaam

They both bents down on their knees.
ghayal kar de mujhe yaar
tere paayal ke jhankar

Sameer and shree puts their hand around their partners waist.
hey soni sone,teri soni,
har adaa ko salaam

Chotu holds Ruby's hand and come on the dancing floor.
Salaam-e-Ishq.Ishq Ishq
Salaam-e-Ishq,Salaam-e-Ishq Ishq
Salaam-e-Ishq

Riya , simar and Arjun clapping and enjoying their dance.
Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-e-Ishq
Salaam-e-Ishq hai...


Roshni stands in the middle of the floor and some one comes behind her
Ho teri mastaani anjaani
bataon ko mera salaam

He turns this was no other than our Arjun , he sread his hand and Roshni hits her shoulder on his chest , both faces are against each other
Rangon mein doobi doobi
raaton ko mera slaaam

Now Roshni turns to face him, hides herself in Arjun's arms and closes her eyes
Khwaabon mein kho gayi main
deewani ho gayi main
soney soney aisse soney
har adaa ko salaam


Salaam-e-Ishq.Ishq Ishq
Salaam-e-Ishq

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-e-Ishq
Salaam-e-
Ishq hai...

Chotu and Ruby :

Teri meri nazar jo milli pehli baar
ho gaya ho gaya tujhse pyaar...

Roshni and sameer.

dil hai kya dil hai kya
jaan bhi tujhoe nisaar
maine tujhe kiya aitbaar

Shree and Shiza.

ho main bhi toh tujhpe mar gayi
deewanapan kya kar gayi
meri har dhakan betaab hai
palkon vich tera khwaab hai


Arjun and Rosh:
Ho jaan se bhi pyaari pyaari
jaaniya ko salaam

Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-e-Ishq
Salaam-e-Ishq hai...

Now sameer turns to move near simar , sits on his knees and offers her his hand.

Main tere ishq mein do jahan vaar doon
mere vaade pe kar le yakeen

She gives her hand on his hand

keh raha aasman keh rahe hai zameen
tere jaissa dooja nahin


Simar pulls her hand from his hand and thumbs down.

Ho aisse jaadoon na daal ve
naa aaon tere naal ve

Sameer stands but simar puts his hand in her hand and first placed their hand on sameer's heart and then on her heart

jhooti tereefein chodh de
ab dil mere dil se jod de

Arjun puts his hand on sameer and simar shoulder.

ho jo abhi hai dil se
nikli uss dua ko salaam


Arjun and Rosh, Shree and Shiza , Ruby and chotu , sameer and simar dancing as a couple while Riya quietly watching them and clapping on their dance.

Salaam-E-Ishq
Salaam-E-Ishq,Ishq,Ishq...Salaam-E-Ishq
Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-e-Ishq
Salaam-e-Ishq hai...


Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E.
Ishq hai

Now Roshni pushes Arjun towards Riya, Arjun hits with Riya. He puts his both hand on his ears .

Rab se hai iltija maaf kar de mujhe

Arjun cupped Riya's face

main toh teri ibaadat karoon.

Arjun puts Riya hairs back on her ears.

Aye meri soniye na khabar hai tujhe

Again cupped her face

Tujhese Kitni mohobbat karoon


Riya closes her eyes.

Tere bin sab kuch benoor hai

Riya puts her hand on her Part.

Meri Maang Mein tere sindoor hai

Now place her plam over her heart.

sanson mein yehi paigaam hai

By spreading her both arms

Mera sab kuch tere naam hai

Arjun puts his arms around her and pulls her near him.

Ho dhadkanon mein rehne
waali soniye ko salaam

Salaam-e-ishq

Roshni hugs Arjun and Riya and congras both of them , finally their sangeet ceremony is near to end

Shalini is happy after seeing both couples happy .

The next day:

Arjun , sameer , simar and Riya are happy because this day which they waiting for long time ya this day is their marriage day, Arjun wakes early in morning and start decorating his room with flowers , arrange things like Riya wants, He choose the Riya favourite color curtains and wallpapers according to her desires, he places the bedsheet on his bed and arrange candle on his rooms, he cleans the dust from each and every corner of the room because he knows that Riya hates dust and untidy place, between Roshni enters in his room she sees the changes in his room, she first upset because Arjun changes their bedroom completely then she smiles after seeing him happy. She also joins him in decorating room.

Arjun: rosh please usay wahan nahi rakho ye Riya ko pasand nahi hai.

Roshni: oh mei toh bhool hi gai thi k ab ye aapka room nahi balkay aapki riya ka room hai.

Arjun: sorry rosh bus mei uis room ko Riya k accordingly sajana chahta tha.

Roshni: Arjun mei mazak kar rhi hun, tum bhi na. Chalo mujhe jaldi jaldi bataotumhari Riya ko kiya kiya pasand hai ta kay mei is room ki decoration usi tarha karo.

Arjun: really you want to help me

Roshni: of course Arjun

Arjun ordered her few task and starts their respective task

After few minutes, they complete their task.

Roshni: Arjun Done

Arjun: wow kitna haseen lag rha hai na humara room

Roshni: yes

Arjun: thanks Rosh

Roshni: in friendship no sorry no thanks, ab chalo saam ki help kartay hain

Arjun: let's go .

In sameer room:

Sameer: kiya huwa kyun aaey ho tum dono.

Arjun: Rosh nay mera room decorate karnay mei meri help kit hi, mei nay socha k kyun na mei aur rosh mil k tumhara room bhi decorate kar dyn.

Sameer: nahi Arjun mei room aisay hi theek hai

Arjun: aaisay kaisay saam , simar bhabhi ko kitna bura lagay ga itni untidy place deekh kar, kyun Rosh.

Roshni: yes Arjun, chalo saam bahir niklo aur humain decorate karnay do

Sameer: ok

Arjun and roshni also decorates sameers's room.

In evening:

Arjun and sameer changes their dress, they looks like princess, tanvi enters and sees both of them in their wedding dress she can't control her tears she wipes them and hug their both sons and kisses on their forhead.

Tanvi: meri aankhen taras gai thi tum logon ko is dress mei dekhnay k liay , aakhir wo din aa hi gaya jab mere betay dulhay ban k mere samnay kharay hain, mei buhat khushnaseeb hun k mujhe ye khushi dekhnay ko mil rhi hai, mera khayal tha k mei kabhi ye khushi nahi deekh paun gi

Arjun: maa aap aaisa kyun keh rhi ho, I promise mei saam ki har saal isi tarha shadi karwata rahun ga, phir toh aap khush hogi na.

Sameer: abay Arjun ye kiya bol rha hai.

Tanvi: Arjun tu bara natkhat hai.

Sameer: sari aapki bahu ka asar hai.

Tanvi: ha uski ehsan hai k mujhe mera purana hasta kheelta beta wapis mil gaya.

Arjun: maa isi tarha roti raho gi ya barat lay k nikalnay ka irada bhi hai, warna aapki sari khushi adhori reh jaey gi aur simar kisi aur ki ho jaey gi.

Sameer: ye kiya bol raha hai tu, Riya bhi toh hai.

Arjun: mujhe Riyu par bharosa hai, wo meri patni hai girlfriend nahi.

Sameer; maa ye hamesha mujhe isi baat par tang karta hai, don't worry aaj simar bhi meri patni ban jaey gi.

Arjun: banay gi tab jab tu barat lay k us k ghar jaey ga, par aasar mujhe kuch theek nahi lagtay.

Sameer: maaa

Tanvi: bus kar aab chal tere dad tum dono ka neechay intezar kar rhay hain, sab mehman bhi aa gay hai, bus hum kuch hi dyar mei nikal jaen gay.

Sameer: sachi, deekh Arjun mei chala apni simar k pass.

Arjun: abay ruk mei bhi aaya.

Riya: simar mei kaisi lag rhi hun.

Simar: sach batun ya jhoot.

Riya: jhoot.

Simar: sach bolun tu buhat payari lag rhi hai, par mei kaisi dekh rhi hun.

Riya: Sameer bhaiya say pooch lo.

Simar: sshhh.

Riya: mei nay tumhari pics Sameer bhaiya ko MMS kar di hai, ye lay tu in say baat kar lay.

Simar: nahi Riya mei kaisay.

Riya: baat toh kar.

Simar: hello saaameer.

Sameer: buhat pyari lag rhi ho tum mujh say aur intezar nahi hota, I love you.

Simar: love you too.

Riya: ohhooo pyar mohabat ki batein.

Simar: ssshhh.

Riya: carryon mei abhi aai.

Some girls shouting: barat aa gai barat aa gai.

Arjun and Sameer are on the horse while Shree and Sameer's father dancing infront of bridal home.



PRECAP:
Ariya and sameer & Simar wedding night.

Edited by sumbulqaiser - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Update... Update... Update...


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