Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 15

well so here is the nexr part of the story KASHISH PYAAR KI

Lunch ker key jab sarray farigh ho jattay hain to sab log phir ja ker hall main beth jattey hain...Sujal aur Kashish akhatay beth ker baatain kar rahay hotay hain.Angad apnay mobile main busy hai, Mehak Varrun aur Krippa are sitting together.Parvati, eena, Buajee aur Bebe beth ker baaatain ker rahay hain aur Om, Lalit aur Saahil business discuss ker rahey hain...Shruti aur Sameer aapas main baat kar rahay hain aur bachay kehl rahay hain...to ab baat kaisey shurroo ki jaye??...to Veena sey shuroo kartay hain
Veena(to Angad): arey tu kia attay hi mobile main lag gaya...yeh bata keh ab agay kia karnay ka plan hai?/
Angad: jee mumma??
Veena: mera matlab hai keh wapis London jao gay ya yahiin settle ho gay...
Angad: of course mumma main wapis jaon ga...yahan rakha hi kia hai??
Kashish yeh sunti hai...actually she has full belief keh apnay watan amin kaam karna ziada zaroori hai aur insan ko apnay jhi watan main rehna chahiye
Kash: what do u mean...yahan kia rakha hai?
Angad: mera matlab tha keh abroad parhayi ziada high standadrd ki hai...
Now everyone's attention is here
Kash: ap yahan to kabhi parhay hi nahin to ap yahan key standard key barray main kaisey keh saktay hain??
Angad: yeah..tum sahi keh rahi ho lekin the problem is keh main wahan apni parhayi complete kar key hi yahan aker job karoon ga..
Shruti: actually mujhey bhi lagta hai keh insan ko apnay hi watan main rehna chahiye/...
Kash: exactly...ab dekho na wahan abroad main ap apnay mulk key koi bhi traditions nahi nibha saktay...jaisey teej,holi,diwali aur even key behnon ko wahan rehtey huay bhaiyon ko rakhi post karni parti hai...main to hamesha yahiin rahoon gi...yahan ki baat hi aur hai
Sujal: arey wah...tum ney abroad kab dekha hai jo tum aissa ke sakti ho
Kash: dekha nahi hai lekin parha bhut kuch hai...wahan agar ap apni parhayi ko complete karnay ya further studies karnay jattay ho to its no problem...lekin hamesha keh liye wahan settle hona...
Bua-jee: o puttar!! utahy rehan vich ki sawad ay...na sawaday da khanna honda ay tey din raat ik ho janda hai parhayi kardey kardey...tey uthay diyan kurian...unhan ney tey baraye naa hi kapray paye honday ne...
at this evryone laughs
Bebe: Parvati..tu ne teej key liye sarri tayarian kar li hain??
Parvati: jee bebe
Krippa: lekin teej sey pehley to ap logon ko anniversary hai na...
Om: actually hum ap sab k batana chahtay thay keh iss mauqay per hum log apni anniversary koi party dey ker nahi karain gay...sirf family aur kuch kareebi dost
Saahil: arey yeh kia baat hui papa...ap logon ko party to deni chahiye
Varrun: haan papa...
Parvati: arey party nahi chota sa celebration hoga jahan Om key kuh friends ayengay aur humara parivaar hoga..phir Teej per hum log paty den den gay na
Kash: chalo theek hai...to ab yeh celebration kab hai??
Parvati: kal shaam ko
Sameer: umm...mumma actually kal mujhey bhut important meeting attend karni hai..
Kash: ley...jeeju important meeting ahi to cancel kar dijiye...after all in donon se to important nahi hai na
Sameer: theek hai
Sujal aik damm uthata hai aur jaldi sey apnay kamray main chala jata hai..Kashish ko aik damm weird feel hota hai keh ussey kia hua..everyone gets busy in talking, and as no one is looking to woh us key kamray main jati hai...
Kashish dekhti hai keh Sujal apnay kamray main akela betha hai....woh uss ke saath ja ker beth jati hai aur uss key kandhay per haath rakhti hai...Sujal ussey murr ker dekhta hai aur Kashish is shocked to see tears in his eyes
Kash: Sujal...kia baat hai tum yun akeley...kya hua??
Sujal: Kashish woh...woh main...
Kash: tum kia Sujal?
Sujal: kuch nahi....
Kash: mujhey nahi batao gay?? agar mujhey nahi batao gay to aur kissey batao gay Sujal?? batao kia baat hai...shayed tumhari problem main solve kar sakoon
Sujal: nahi...as such koi problem naahi hai..balke problem hai hi nahi...main bass...woh...
Kash: woh kia??
Sujal: kashish...pehley wada karo yeh baat sirf aur sirf hum donon ke beech rahey gi...
Kash: vaada...ab bata bhi do kia baat hai??
Sujal: Kashish...baat yeh hai keh main bhut dinon sey soch raha tha yahan wapis annay per...main chahta tha yahan ka mahol dekhney ko aur tum sab sey milney ko..aur yahan aney key baad mujhey ehsaas hua hai keh main ney kitna kuch kho dia hai...Kashish...main yeh baat tumhain aj nahi bata sakta kyunki iss baat key barray main main sure nahi hoon lekin main promise karta hoon keh sab sey pehkley yeh baat tumhain hi bataon ga
Kash: haye sayapa!!agar pata nahi hai abhi to moun kyun latka key betho ho...sab neechey kia sochain gay keh tum yahan aissey kyun chalay aye...itnay dinnon baad aye ho pata nahi aissey hi tum bhi na...
Sujal: arey...main to bhul hi gaya...madam ap ki cheezen??leni hain ya nahin??
Kash: of course leni hain lekin abhi to neechey chalo..baad main lay loon gi
Sujal: betho na yahan baat kartay hain...neechey koi baat sahi tarah sey ho nahi payi!
Kash: theek hai...to batao kia baatain karni hain??
Sujal: bhut sarri baatain hain...tum batao keh tum aj kal kia kar rahi ho??
Kash: yaar...abhi papers diye hain..ab result ke baad kisi achi internship ke liye apply karoon gi...lekin yahan koi khaas education respnse nahi hai related to interior designing
Sujal: hmmm....to tum London kyun nah jatai?? wahan bhut si universities aur companies interior designing waalon ko jobs aur internships offer kar rahi hain...bass aik saal ka course hai...
Kash: lekin main wahan kaisey.....??
Sujal: tum wahan kaisye matlab?? yar main bhi to wapus ja raha hoon...mera bhi whana aik saal hi rehta hai phir meri parhayi mukamal...aur job yahan achi khaasi mil jayegi..tum merey pass kaer reh lena
Kash: is taht possible??
Sujal: kyun nahi? everything is possible..bass ab mumma papa ko manana hoga
Kash: jee nahi...sirf mumma papa ko nahi balke choti-ma, papa jee, beyji aur bebe...lekin sab sey problem hai Kripa
Sujal: Krippa??kyun ussey kia problem hogi?
Kash: u know...tum to merey beghair reh saktay ho lekin yahan aisssey log hain jo merey beghair nahi reh saktay iss liye...
Sujal: what do u mean main tumharay beghair reh sakta hun??
Kash: matlab keh itnay saal kaat hi liye na tum ney...
Sujal: kashish...aissa nahi hai...main ney tumhain harr aik pal miss kia hai kyunki tum meri yaadon main hamesha bassi ho...woh kya shair tha...MAIN SAANS LETA HUN TERI KHUSHBU ATI HAI, IK MEHKA MEHKA SA PEGHAM LATI HA, MEREY DIL KI DHADKAN BHI TERE GEET GAATI HAI, PAL PAL DIL KEY PASS, TUM REHTI HO (actually this is an old sonG)
Kash: wah wah wah!! bhut khoob, mulana ghalib...acha jhut boltey hain ap...
Sujal: tumhain yaqeen nahi hota?? aik minute...
woh uthata hai aur apnay hand-bag sey aik file si nikalta hai
Sujal: yeh dekh ker batao keh kia main waqayi jhoot bol raha hun?
Kash: yeh kia hai??
Sujal: khud hi dekh lo...
Kashish uss keh haathon sey woh fie leti hai aur ussey kholi hao...uss main harr jagah Sujal-Kashishki pics hoti hain, a very cute diary, jahan kahin jagah likhi hoti hain poems,shair aur bhut kuch...everythinga bt Sujal-Kashish since their childhood...Kash is surprised
Kash: yeh sab kia hai??
Sujal: tumharay liye meri yaadain...
Kash: this is so cute..ab yeh file merey pass rahey gi hamesha...tumhain yaad karron gi isssey dekh ker...thanks a lot Sujal...sach main tum jaissey dost bhut kamm miltey hain..tahnks
Woh ussey hug karti hai an then tey leave yhe file in teh room and go to the halll.....

Aggay celebration amin naye characters kaun kaun sey hain...yeh jananay key liye parhatay rahiye...wat or the next part and please give ur comments luv kiran!!

hi!

Rajeev1 ur story is getting interesting.

Jasmine ur story is jst too good. I read it today morning ans cant wait for the next part eagerly waiting for the next part.

Kashish-rox u r brillant as ever.

ARMAAN

Link:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kahiin-to-hoga/53500/armaan-with-pics

It has been a long time since we last contributed to ARMAAN, I had a chat with Sanjay last night and he's busy spending endless hours with his fianc. Anyways, I have no idea as to when he'll be back. So you guys have to put up with the crap I'll write.

Anyways, in case you've forgotten where we left off, here's a summary:

Sujal & Kashish just got married, after the marriage Sujal had to be taken to the hospital sick, well, Kash, Sam, Niki & Anjali follow others to the hospital, where they are told that Sujal passed away.

At home, it is revealed that the new entrant, Tushaar Pandey who has come from France and is Chetan's friend helped Chetan in getting rid of Sujal by adding rat killing powder in his anti- depressants.

Sujal is not dead although, it turns out that the counter girl had goofed up.

Now read ahead:

Sam: aapko andaaza bhi hai ki aap ne kiya kaha?? voh jo lady yahan collapse hui un ki patni thii, unki aaj hii shaadi hui thii aur…

Neha: jaane de Sam, aap bata sakti hai voh konsey room main hain?

Sam: in se mat poochen mom, ye hamein labour room ki taraf bhej de gi yeh keh kar ki 'mubarak ho, unhein larka hua hai'!!!

Neha: ab bas bhi kar, ji konsay room main?

Girl: ma'am room # 421, Mr. Singhania ke saath wala

Inside Kash's room, everyone is crying… enters family... (!!!, Neha & Co. yaar!)

Neha: kya hua? tum sab to aise ro rahe ho jaise koi mar gaya ho… (then realizes about the counter girls' fake news and is says) arey Sujal theek hai… voh counter vali se galti ho gayee…

Niki: what??? I can't believe this! How responsible can these people get mom! hamari to jaan hi nikal gayee thii!

Neha: haan… hamari bhi, Dr. Prakash meray friend hain is leyee police case nahii hua, varna is larke ne koi kasar nahii chori thii hamein badnaam karne kii… suicide karne kii koshish??? aakhir kyu??? voh bhi apni shaadi ke din!!!

Kashish who listening to all this blabbering speaks up: 'kiya? Suicide? Koi mujhe batey ga kii Sujal ne aisa kyu kia?' (KTH ke CG ka style…)

Pratab: ab voh theek hai, chalo… usse se poochtey hain…

In Sujal's room…

Everyone lashes out at him, he's confused… doesn't know what's happening

Sujal: yeh aap sab kya keh rahe hain?

Neha: suicide karni kii koshish karta hai poochta hai ham kya keh rahe hain?

Kashish is hearing all this standing in a corner, she's crying and thinking: 'meri wajah se hua ye, I shouldn't have forced him to marry me' thinking this she goes from there. No one notices.

Okay, footage bohot ho gaya, so let's get going… the doctor comes in and after examining Sujal tells Neha that she'd better take him home coz he can't enter him in the hospital records to prevent trouble (it's a suicide case naa…) well, as all of them are leaving they notice that Kash is missing.

Dheraj: Varun, ussey call lagao

Varun calls her and Kash tells him that she's on her way home. Everyone starts wondering why she went away without informing anyone, Sujal knows why and says: 'ab hamein ghar chalna chaheye main jaanta hoon us ne aisa kyu kiya, it's okay main samjha doon ga'

Back at home…

Kash gets there, and the victors (at least they think that they're victors) greet her

Paddy: aagee bahu rani???

Chetan: hiya, kaisa hai tumhara pati dev???

Kashish says nothing and goes to her room

TP (Tushaar Pandey I'll call him TP topi, whatever): wow! Teray to mazey lagey Chetan, she's hot! Gusse main itni sexy lagti hai, to romantic mood main to…

Chetan is about to reply when he sees everyone entering, his happiness fades the moment he sets his eyes on Sujal.

Well, everyone settles for the ceremonial discussion 'ye hua thaa, voh hua thaa' and Sujal goes to his room to rest, he enters.

Kashish is packing and crying…

Sujal: Kashish ye tum kya kar rahi ho?

Kashish: main jaanti hoon tumne suicide karne ki koshish kyu ki… isleye, take tum khush raho, zinda raho… (her emphasis is on zinda) main yahan se ja rahi hoon, are you should have thought about your family at least, they need you.

Sujal: main ne suicide karne ki koshish nahii kii! Keh keh kar thak gaya hoon! Koi bhi meri baat nahii maan raha… (sits down on the bed and holds his head in his hands)

Kashish: koi mane bhi kyu? sab bewakoof nahii hain…

Sujal: Kashish please, aaj already bohot tamasha hochuka hai… don't add to my worries, chup karke so jao… (in a commanding tone, ye Sujal Kash kiihar baat nahii mane ga)

Kashish decides to listen to him, changes and comes to sleep…

Note by: no suhaag raat sequence for now, but they'll BOTH sleep on the bed, no sleeping on the sofa here

Sujal is about to consume another dose of his pills (remember that bottle has poison in it) Kashish sees him and snatches it from him.

Kashish: ye kiya hai???

Boring naa??? Well, Mr. Sanjay wanted facts, he promised he'll come ASAP

COMING UP: Detective Sherlock Holmes aka Kash will try and find out the supposed 'killer' and they'll leave for the US, whan new entry hogi…

Kiran you were brilliant as always... 👏

😃 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi se do naam ek jaan ka agla part lekho i m waiting

THODA SA PYAR MILEGA...PART-5..the next day kashish does all the morning pooja as an ideal bahu & wins the hearts of the other members of the house. akshat asks sujal:how was kashish bhabh's response? sujal hides his worries:not terrible as i expected.she was really nice. akshat notices a change in sujal's face:i hope u r not lying.during the pooja sumthing was missingamong u. sujal:during pooja can we hav romance u fool...? akshat gets shy:o!i'm sorry...sujal tells kashish:kashish,i no that u can't luv me.but plz pretend 2 be in luv with me infront of my family members. kashish:so u r telling me also 2 fool ur family like u do? sujal was disappointed:plz try 2 understand.they won't bear it.thats why..kashish:ok..i'll act as ur ideal patni b4 others.not only b4 ur ppl,also b4 my ppl i hav 2 act.bcoz my parents think that their decision was right.poor ppl.they think that i've got a gud husband. her eyes rose up. sujal:what wrong thing did i do as a husband 2 u.i always want 2 make my wife happy. kashish was angry.but she controls herself. they all go 2 kashish's house 4 a party. it was a grand party.akshat wants 2 see charu very badly.so he goes searching 4 her room. he hears a music-my heart is beating....akshat follows the music.he reaches charu's room.charu was singing with a guitar.she was in shorts.akshat smiles at her.she was shocked 2 see him in her room:u here? he:ya..i heard a beautiful music & followed it.thats how i reached here.anyways u sing well. charu smiles:thanku. suddenly her tone changes:u r not shy 2 get inside a girl's room?u go.let me change... he was embarrassed.he goes out.charu wears a shinning jeans& top. akshat smiles at her.every1 was dancing.akshat & charu dance 2gether.akshat notices that sujal-kashish were dull.they were not dancing at all.his mind gets diverted 2 that.

Jasmine Rahul, your story is really very good, but the problem is that I have not read the first two parts, can you post the link to them???

One more thing, when you write your story the next time, please give spaces in between, if you don't understand what I mean, please refer to the other stories.

But your story is excellent!!! 👏

golu plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue ur story.

goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu where r uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu??????????
i m dieing to read the next part of ur story 😭
as for the rest..... U GUYS ROCK!!!!! 👏

Hey natz...the 1st 2 parts of my fanfic will be there in the page 4 or 5. Part-6.......akshat goes next 2 kashish.charu felt awkward that he lost his interest in dancing. akshat asks kashish:bhabhi,why r u not dancing?cum & dance. kashish:no,i dunno 2 dance. akshat:what nonsense...u r dance student.u've dun shows too.how can i believe that u don't dance? kashish becomes wordless. sujal cumes:kashish is not dancing ,bcoz i'm not dancing. akshat:ok,why u r not dancing?plz don't say that u don't no 2 dance. sujal:i'm not feeling well.thats why. akshat:whats this sujal bhayya?bcoz of u,a gud dancer like kashish bhabhi can't dance. u hav 2 dance atleast 4 her sake.plz... kashish:no need. akshat:see how bhabhi cares 4 u.u hav 2 care 4 her also.cum & dance. akshat compels them 2 dance 2gether,finally they dance slowly 2 the song 'thoda sa...'sujal feels romantic in his mind.but kashish felt really uncomfortable. &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; charu was sad,bcoz akshat is not there with her 2 dance. akshat cumes near her with a naughty smile:hi,charu..charu:hy did u go?u don't like 2 dance with me? akshat:what r u telling?if i've no interest in u,wil i cum again? charu smiles. they both dance. 😊 😉 😛 .   ;   ;   ;   ; when they go back kashish lies down on the bed & cries.sujal cumes:why r u crying kashish? kshish:u don't no the reason?tho i hate u i've 2 pretend that i luv u.i had 2 dance standing close 2 a dirty man like u. sujal:kashish....she screams at him:shut up & get lost.i don't want 2 see u. sujal was really sad 😭 .his eyes got filled up with tears.he goes out.he thinks:i got the girl whom i love.but then also why its happening like this? kashish ...can i get sum luv?