Originally posted by: Cordelia
sabs dear, do you know what the best thing about your updates is...?
there is something good about it π
the reader is swiftly transported away to a world of romance and dreams, but nothing yuckily smushy... it feels like real people, with real feelings, that elicit real reactions - as in, the kind that make my colleague at the desk opposite me wonder why on earth i am laughing, gasping in shock, or staring doe-eyed at the screen... π
not bad guruji, why don't u get ur colleague hooked on too
did any of the above make sense? π€ i thought not!! π
a lot of sense and thank u for ur kind words
anyway, suffice is to say sabs, you absolutely rock! π your stories are great fun to read, totally engrossing, and always leave me praying you are gonna update within the next 5 mins!! π³
now this is something i don't believe π sounds too filmy
i love your Jai so much!! helping his neighbour out, cho chweet with Melissa!! π³ but why doesn't he like sonali?? It's Pia's life he should enjoy making hell!! π
she is his one down, has an eye on him, so i guess it is easier to make her life miserable. Pia is a chipkoo, so he steers clear of her as much as he can
he's a ruthless tycoon who melts like chocolate in the hands of the lovely Bani - who, by the way, is so cool and funny!! love the way she yells at Jai and love the way she gives it to Sahil!! π
woman with some spunk, no rona dhona ........ i like it that way
now i am going to stop rambling. π π€
thanks for taking the time, do appreciate it