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Posted: 12 years ago
Res =)

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Loved loved loved their phone conversation. So beautifully written!

Arnav has a bad past. I wonder what it is. Looking forward to the revelation :)
He was helpless. He couldn't give her what she wanted. Marriage. And he decided to let her go. But he hasn't realized that what he's doing is actually the biggest evidence that he loves her. He is not being selfish..

Loved the way he was honest with Khushi. Telling her that her statement confused him. Shocked him.
"I want you" in ASR's vocabulary = I love you in the real sense 😆
He just has to understand that.

Loved the ending. He was happy on seeing her 😳
Looking forward to see what will happen next!

Loved it!!

Eid Mubarak Farha!! 🤗
And enjoy your vacation! :)


Edited by .sobtian. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
unres

Finally, after a lot of stalking... you updated 👏

That discussion was intense... ! It was sad that they are to able to find a middle ground. I felt really bad for Khushi...kinda relate to her feelings... ! I like Arnav's character in this FF...he is stubborn but still he did not run away from his feelings ( which he could not name...😉 Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon 😛 ).
The best part when he realized that they were two sides of a same coin... if he has his beliefs then so do Khushi... and he has no right to force his beliefs on her.

All in all... I totally loved it... You're such an amazing writer...😊 I wanted to get 'res' the first place...but could not unfortunately.
But, its okay.. I enjoyed the update.😃 So, I'll try next time😊

Love
Snape😊
Edited by snapeseverus - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
You girls flatter me big time, you know that?? 😆😳

🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
perfect points, she was able to explain to him why, i really liked that

Now is a day enough for him to decide what he wants and he is already here,

wow love really makes you do anything 😆

So chweeet Arnav
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Posted: 12 years ago
this update was WOW!!!!
i luv arnav but i support khushi.
eagerly waiting for arhi meeting :)
Edited by -HEAVEN- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES

Need I say I LOVED the update? You must be getting pretty tired of me saying that so let me change my first line of praise and Thank you for that SUPER GIANT cliff hanger! Arnav is there at Khushi's meeting, can things get any more perfect! I have that stupid wala Grin on my face again!😃

Onto the chapter can anyone else make a single telephone conversation as engaging, intriguing, real, emotional and painful as you did just then? I highly doubt it Sista, I truly do! You basically covered everything in that phone call, everything that was not even discussed in their parting conversation in the earlier update and we got their reasoning for this too. The fact that Arnav was taken by surprise and Khushi well Khushi will not settle for anything but the long live commitment that she knows Arnav will not be able to give her. The question is can they have a middle ground?

LOVED the way you made Khushi question Arnav first thing, let me quote you:

Why now?" She asked softly, almost in a whisper.

"Sorry?" Arnav was not sure what she was asking.

"You heard what I had said last night." Khushi explained slowly. "And then you agreed to not contact me again. Why are you asking me now? Why didn't you ask me then?"

^^ You go girl, yes I mean you Farah for making Khushi say the above! She definitely asked all the right questions. And to Arnav's credit he did as best as he could, without sounding like a complete jerk. Love the fact that your Arnav is ASR but he is never a jerk. Though when he first said what I told you I loved you too ( when he doesn't even believe in it) and then said "I want you dammit" he did cross a little line. She did seem flatered by that blunt outburst but at the end of the day "I want you" doesn't really translate into I love you or care for you. I suppose in this case since Khushi was totally fangirling over this guy, I must say kudos to her for sticking to her beliefs and still refusing the guy! And our lovely guy is not going to give up still but he realized that maybe he is being a tad selfish by asking her to comprise her belifes when he is not going to budge even a little bit himself!

Ok rambling session is done I must really sleep now! Thank you for catching us off guard and surprising us with this wonderful early update! LOVED it and can't wait to read more! If you can manage Once a week updates, then it will be brilliant!🤗

Edited by Arshix144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
How will ASR leave her alone?😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
now he is here
what a surprise ?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.. Loved how khushi explained importance of marriage.. Arnav reached lucknow.. Cnt wait for the nxt update.. But wil wait til u update..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

You girls flatter me big time, you know that?? 😆😳


🤗

Do you think its fair to leave us like this for 10 days? I think 1000 words will do on Saturday..what do you say? ask other girls..see what they have to say 😉

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