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VERONICA

@maes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

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uday-princess wake up!!!!!wake up

wake up sleeping beauty your prince charming has arrived

or should i THE BEAST has arrived with a evil smirk on his face

manyata was exasperated and exhausted

for her udayveer was a nightmare she desperately wished it to be a dream

which will vanish the moment she opens her eyes

When she was small mom used to tell her fairy tales

about cinderella snow white beauty and the beast

she dreamt of her saviour pince charming save her fron this BEAST uday

she was afraid of this menancing deadly creature THE BEAST

manyata was pleading uday to leave her

manyata-uday please hume chod do tum ye theek nahi kar rahe ho tum jaigarh ke badi bahu

ke izzat pe hi nahi pure jaigarh ke astitva par daag laga rahe ho

aakhir chahate kya ho tum humse tumhe toh jo chahiye tha tumhe milgaya jaigarh ka taaj tumne meri behen ka istamaal kar ke use barbaad karliya ab mere sath bhi...

manyata could n't complete her sentence

uday had really turned into a beast he was moving towards manyata a beast ready to pounce on his prey

manyata fell on the bed she could see him approaching her she was silently praying the ALMIGHTY to save her she has seen her di 's condition she was punished for loving that DEVIL

she has seen her di dying every single minute of a day ______________

- she finally knew what to do she has to do this she cant give herself to him and die several times

but once____she has to do it her LOVE for ranveer was less than her hatred for UDAY

uday could n't understand what happened within a minute the bed was flooded with red colour

no it was blood he felt a shrill pain:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

HI guys here is the promo for chapter 3

i know it was n't upto the mark

but your encouragement would make me a better writer:))))))))))))))))

i wont demand any no of liked to proceed coz i know i am a B grade writer lol

anyways i cant update soon because a sad news I HAVE BRUISED MY RIGHT HAND SO DOCTOR HAS ADVISED ME NOT TO USE IT OFTEN HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND

please press LIKES if you like it otherwise dont

and those who want PMs please scroll down

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VERONICA

@maes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

EDITED NOTE ON AUGUST 8TH 2013

guys be happy u dont have to trouble your tiny little fingers bcoz im stopping the ff

be happy u dont have to comment any more

only 21 likes that's not at all appreciable sorry:(((((((( i am dejected and got discouraged

please understand u also would have felt the same

anyways stay well::)

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VERONICA(Zoya

@ZOYA_K

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

i cant believe VER u wrote this one i loved it but i will give a detailed comment only after u update chapter 3 so yipee me first to comment

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VERONICA

@maes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

NOTE Dont think i will PM u if u just LIKE without commenting 😡😉

to all who commented and liked

please be patient my hand is bruised so i will update when i get lil better

guys i want another writer please if any 1 is interested pm me i am finding it hard to continue all alone and you know two heads are better tahn one:))))))))))))))))))))pls help

love

veronica

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VERONICA

@maes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: ZOYA_K

i cant believe VER u wrote this one i loved it but i will give a detailed comment only after u update chapter 3 so yipee me first to comment

THANKS KIARA but i am discontinuing it due to lack of response:(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( somedays before people were behind me to update and if they cant comment on a promo then how will they comment about a chappy i mean it is really disgusting i am planning to delete it now :(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

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angleroops

@angleroops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

hey the promo is fab

i want to knw what did uday did to her sis

i hope both manveer r fine

pls take care of ur self

and update soon

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VERONICA

@maes

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: roopali15
hey the promo is fab
i want to knw what did uday did to her sis

i hope both manveer r fine

pls take care of ur self

and update soon

i would have loved to reveal that but i am discontinuing it due to lack of response for pms last time a number of readers pressed like but now all of sudden al have disappeared i cant do this for a few readers so i dont mind discontinuing it i am doing this despite my bruised hand only for sake of u and some others but now enough this forum lacks members so i am gonna discontinue it

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PrincessSumbal

@PrincessSumbal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

yr promo is fab
yr bus ap jaldi jaldi update karna.Ok.

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VERONICA

@maes

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: PrincessSumbal
yr promo is fab
yr bus ap jaldi jaldi update karna.Ok.

sorry dear i am discontinuing it coz i feel the readers have lost hopes lack of response demotivates me :((((((((((((((((((((( and i updated the promo despite my bruises but if eel the story is not able to entice the readers so im very upset:(

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angleroops

@angleroops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: maes

sorry dear i am discontinuing it coz i feel the readers have lost hopes lack of response demotivates me :((((((((((((((((((((( and i updated the promo despite my bruises but if eel the story is not able to entice the readers so im very upset:(

hey pls wait for 2 to 3 day u will get ggo response

becAUSE NW ONLY U UPDATE U CANT ESCAPE THE RESPONSE SO FAST

SO PLSSS WAIT

ITS A REQUEST