virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 78

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Posted: 12 years ago
i do have a very imporatnt question nainu 😲 see pyaallli saya virat as vilat...toh phr manvi ko manli kyu nahi 🤣
similarly if she'l call jeevika by her name toh it must be jeelika 🤣 *it sounds lyk jaol na* 🤣 n vilen aww 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima06

i do have a very imporatnt question nainu 😲 see pyaallli saya virat as vilat...toh phr manvi ko manli kyu nahi 🤣
similarly if she'l call jeevika by her name toh it must be jeelika 🤣 *it sounds lyk jaol na* 🤣 n vilen aww 🤣 🤣

jalebi i never thought u could ask this... 😡
piyali pronounces r as l
thats why VIRAT as VILAT...
she never calls her parents by their name
😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

Sorry naina now days i m very bzy n plus its RAMADAN tyming prblm i understand... no stress 😊
Part 23 : Superb update 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 virman n piyali were 2 much nautanki family luved dere plan , kabir seems a nice guy he truly cares 4 maanvi n her happiness but maya 😡😡😡😡😡😡 was such a fool she was enjoying virman fight n trying 2 create a misunderstanding btw dem n virat's reaction was unexpected 4 maya 😡😡😡 words thank u soo much 😊 maya is such a bi*ch and kabir is nyc...
Part 24 : Lovely update 😊 glad dat virat talk 2 maanvi n clear his all confusions before it turns into misunderstanding ,luved maanvi's reaction whn she came 2 know dat maya was d1 who create a confusion in his mind , piyali was cute n adorable now just waiting how dey unfolds dere plan n wht will happened n how it effect dere relation 😊😊😊 thank u again 😊 just stay tuned and hope u enjoy the remaining journey as well...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927


jalebi i never thought u could ask this... 😡
piyali pronounces r as l
thats why VIRAT as VILAT...
she never calls her parents by their name
😆 😆

haww nain tu meri intelligence pe doubt mat kar 🤣 mera brain aj kaam nhi karing bilkul 🤣
btw me toh v ko b l bana rahe the 🤣 phr virat ban jata lilat 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kidrauhl

NAINA! Shsyhstzhafaga

naina what...????? 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 25

maya came down and was moving along the swimming pool area when she something she least expected. her mouth opened on seeing virat kissing ah.. somebody... maya couldnt see who the girl was and she got jealous wishing she was that somebody. she controlled her jealousy and her evil mind took over and she clicked snap of the scene in front of her. she wickedly smiled and went to look for manvi.
after sometime maya got changed into a knee length dress and went to manvi's room.
"knock knock"
"kaun aya...??? kaun aya...?? " piyali came running and opened the door.
"hii baby... " maya said trying to be nice to piyali.
" maya aunty... " piyali said.
" baby dont call me aunty... call me maya... and where is your mommy...?? " maya replied.
" she is here only... come maya.. " piyali held maya's finger and lead her inside the room.
manvi : maya...
maya : hii manvi... why are you sitting in the room like this...???
manvi : nothing... you tell...?? where is kabir...???
maya : he is in the room... actually i want to talk to you about something... something really important...
manvi : hmm... okk... but piya...
maya : i will take her to my room... she can play with kabir...
manvi : hmm...
maya took piyali to her room and came back.
manvi : so what did u want to talk maya...??
maya : actually manvi i saw something that bothered me so i thought of telling it to you... you have all yhe right to know u see...
manvi : please come straight to the point...
maya : see this... (giving her mobile to manvi)
manvi : please delete this and keep it to yourself...
maya : but why are you behaving like this...??
manvi : because i am used to it... i know my husband well...
maya : sorry... what are u trying to say..??
manvi : maya... promise me you would keep it to yourself...
maya : i promise...
manvi : actually i dont know why i am sharing this with you...
maya : cmon... you can trust me...
manvi : actually me and virat arent together in real sense... i love him maya and i dont know about him. one moment he says he love me like i am his most precious possession and sometimes i feel as if i am no one in his life... we got married hurriedly and u know why... because that time i was carrying piyali in my womb... piyali who according to me, is the epitome of love i have for virat and for virat piyali at a time was nothing but his mistake... but now i am happy that he loves piyali so much... we havent been like this madly in love couple but trust me i am trying hard... trying hard to make virat only and only love me... trying hard to be whatever he wants... but i think i am failing... failing everytime i try... i am not enough for my husband... i think i fail to satisfy him... maya... maya i really feel suffocated but now i cant do anything... i cant break this marriage... i cant do it because i cant risk the future of my children... and what is the fault of this little life taking shape inside me... i have to live this life and have to work on my marriage every minute...
manvi burst into tears while maya unbelievingly also had tears in her eyes...
maya : manvi... please dont cry...
manvi : how can i not cry maya...?? i feel like i am a burden on virat...
maya : think about your baby... or if u arent happy at all... then do something for your happiness...
manvi : i can do nothing...nothing at all...
maya : then should i talk to virat...?? i should -
manvi : please... please dont do this maya... this time virat is really happy with this child... a wrong step would ruin everything...
maya : hmm... u should rest... take care manvi...
manvi : hmm...

scene shifts
piyali : u didnt give me ice cream after that... why...???
kabir : because you didnt come to me... you were so busy...
piyali : haww... jhooth...
kabir : nahi... sachi..
piyali : toh aaj toh aai hoon na uncle...
kabir : hmm... toh fir aaj chalte hai blueberry ice cream khane...
maya opened the door and entered quietly. she sat on the couch thinking about what all happened.
piyali : woww... no... dad gussa karenge...
kabir : kya...???
piyali : secet hai... uss din na vilat ne mujhpe bahut sala guchha kia... he said he is my father and he will take me out...
maya : sacchi...?? he doesnt love me any longer... you know maya he loves that small baby...
kabir : maya...??
maya : she is right kabir... i trust her... this might have happened...
kabir : no baby... virat loves you too... dont think like that...
piyali : mujhe mumma ke paas jaana hai...
kabir : come i will take you...

scene shifts
kabir : manvi open the door...
manvi : kabir... piya...
piyali : mom... (piyali hugged manvi lower body)
manvi : kabir... is she okk...?? piya... what happened baby...??
kabir : nothing happened... are you happy manvi...??
manvi : what...??
kabir : i mean congrats...
manvi : ohh... thanks kabir..
kabir : anytime mani...
virat : enough... will you please leave kabir...?? (coming at the door and standing in front of manvi)
kabir : actually i only came to...
virat : i am not interested...
virat closed the door and the trio burst into laughter...
manvi : oh my god... this is fun virat... i was wanted to be in this acting field... and now...
virat : n now meri madhubala sach mein actress ban gayi hai...
piyali : aul main bhi vilat...
virat : haan meri jaan... tum toh superstar ho... (virat picked piyali in his arms and kissed her cheek)
piyali : thank u virat... (piyali kissed virat's cheek)
manvi : no one gives me kissy... (hugging virat and piyali)
piyali : i will u kissey manvi... (piyali kissed manvi's cheek)
virat leaned ahead and whispered into manvi;s ear "aur main raat ko... "
manvi slapped his arm and said " besharam kahin ke... "
piyali giggled on seeing this and went to watch her cartoon...
manvi : you know thank god u saw maya at the swimming pool and you knwo she really believed that you were kissing some random girl... hehe... you should have seen her face virat...
virat : hehe... she would never know that that girl was you...
manvi : and uske upar jo maine usko kahani sunai na... wo sapne mein bhi tumhare aas paas nahi bhatkegi... trust me...
virat : what...?? what did you say...??
manvi : hehe... let it be na...
virat : tell me... right now...
manvi told virat everything and he was looking at manvi with eyes popped out...
manvi : hello... virat... helllo... (waving her hand in front of him)
virat : kis ghatiya hindi movie ki kahani hai ye...??
manvi : its a mash up...
virat : toh according to your story i am complete jerk who is all interested in other girls except his wife and he isnt happy with his marriage at all... claps ms javed salim... what a script...!!!
manvi : thanks... but i love you... (BILU ;) )
virat : i love you too meri nautanki...

scene shift
maya : i dont wanna do it anymore...
kabir : excuse me...
maya : i dont want to spoil something which already is messed up...
kabir : no... mani isnt happy... i dont want her to be with that man...
maya : virat n manvi are married and its their personal issue...
kabir : why are u backing out now...???
maya : because i dont wanna be with him... i never thought virat could behave like this...
kabir : what are you saying...???
maya : a guy who cannot love his own daighter... how will he love me...?? i am done with all this... i dont want this virat...
kabir : and what about mani...??
maya : your mani is pregnant an she is trying hard to make her marriage work...
kabir : yeah... trying hard and all...
maya : you are talking as if you would accept her with the baby groing inside her...
kabir : yes i would...
maya : you are really great kabir... while i am not stupid to riun my life... let them be... i call off this plan...
kabir : i am just saying that i want mani's happiness...
maya : whatever...

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could come up with this only... sorry
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
arrey aaj kaun aya hai res karne...!!!!
AM I DREAMING...???? ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dis was fab lolll.. u added Bilu in it..hahaha.. And Piyali nd Manvi's mashup was hilarious.. poor Maya.. already given up.. Cant wait to read more.. loving d way dey r band bajaoying hahaha
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Posted: 12 years ago
manvi trying hard and hard and trying to stop my laugh yaar kya nautanki hai yeh dono bechari maya kinke beech phas gayi ab toh woh jald se jald bhaag jayegi yahan se 😆😆😆
and yu added BILU 😃
piyali and manvi are sooo cute ...virat the luckiest guy coz he got two such dramebaaz nautankis besides him😆😆
waiting for the next naina 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab update naina
tumne maya ko thori akkal de di *claps* lol
really love this drama virman n piya r doing
eager for next part
continue soon 😉

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