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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
Promo

Nandini is sitting in the window wearing white churidar and having a netted white dupatta……………….touching soft handedly a Rose flower………..smiling on seeing the sun who has make the sky red

"abh meri zindagi bhi iss phool ki tarhan hogi……………jo k sab se khoobsurat hai………..or yeh suraj………….mere pyaar ka……………mere jeevan ka……..meri hansi ka……………meri abad zindagi ka gawah hoo ga"

But right then a throne just pinched in her finger and blood start coming out of that

"kia aisa nahin"a tear fell from her eyes and saying this the flower fell down from her hand and the sun sets

On the other side

A guy was walking through a corridor and called someone………

"haan haan………………kaam hogaya hai……………abh nandini se meri shadi honay se koi nahin rok sakta……………us ka baap bhi nahin………………or haan……daheej tau main accha hasa mangoon ga……………..akhir who singhania kab kaam aye ga"

saying this he smiles widly

and the screen dvided into two parts…………………

One showing Nandini with teary eyes watching the felled flower and Other showing a laughing guy lips

lolz
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
ana yaar kya baat hai awesome promo app toh toooo goooood hai very creative , fantastic , amazing, wonderful 👏 ab continue soon hum intezar karenge 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
👏 too good ana 👏 👏 i loved the comparison to the rose. 👏 i hope karan changes his mind 😊 😊 😉 cont soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Honii

ana yaar kya baat hai awesome promo app toh toooo goooood hai very creative , fantastic , amazing, wonderful 👏 ab continue soon hum intezar karenge 😳



thanx Honii
hope u will like it further
will try to cont today
😳

lolz
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Paru_M

👏 too good ana 👏 👏 i loved the comparison to the rose. 👏 i hope karan changes his mind 😊 😊 😉 cont soon 😃



thanx parvati dear
😛
lets see what will happen

lolz
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
ana yaar bohat hi intresting promo hain... ek taraf nandini apne aane waale haseen kal ke sapne dekh rahi hain... aur dusari taraf woh karan uske sapne thodne ki taiyaari kar raha hain... really very damn interesting....amazing.... u keep up the good work going... your work is completely commendable.... 👏
ab please part jaldi se post karo na.. intezaar nahi ho raha hain.... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: sun_423

ana yaar bohat hi intresting promo hain... ek taraf nandini apne aane waale haseen kal ke sapne dekh rahi hain... aur dusari taraf woh karan uske sapne thodne ki taiyaari kar raha hain... really very damn interesting....amazing.... u keep up the good work going... your work is completely commendable.... 👏
ab please part jaldi se post karo na.. intezaar nahi ho raha hain.... 😃



no thanx suri dii
i m very happy on seeing that u like it
it is coming her in few mins
😛

love u

lolz
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28

Chapter 2


Ah the chilled night……………..and a lil warmness giving by the fire…………was just awesome……….

All the five girls worn a blue pair of jeans and full sleeved tops………..and had covered themselves with shawls………..Mrs.Oberoi had worn a saree and Mr.Oberoi worn a simple kurta pajama……

Nandini, Ksshish and Gauri were sitting on one "Charpai" and Kripa, Anjali and Mrs. Oberoi on other…………Mr. Oberoi preferred to sit on a chair……….the wood were lit near bye and a table was placed b/w the two "Charpaies"………

Mr.Oberoi ordered Glasses of "Lassi", "Sarsoon ka saag" with "Makki ki Roti" and "biryani"……………..As the family preffered to live simple so there food was also simple.

As the dinner arrive…………..Mr. Oberoi said to their twins daughter

"Aj main chahta hoon k khanay ki shuruwat tum donon se ki jaye…………har dafa main shuru karta hoon………..likin kyoun k hoo sakta hai k yeh tum donon ka shadi se pehlay hamaray saath last dinner ho so tum donon shuru karoo"

Both girls get a small smile and get up and hugged there father from the neck and give him a kiss

"Papa………….hum iss dinner ko kabhi nahin bhool pain gain" Nandini said as she was still hugging Mr.Oberoi………

"My sweet baby"………….Mr.Oberoi kissed Nandini too on her cheek………..while kashish make a face

"am I not ur sweet baby?"…………she stand straight and make a face

"No"……..Mr.Oberoi said smiling at her

"What?" kashish said shocked

"Coz u r my sweetest baby"…………..Kashish get a smile on hearing that and hugged her father again and Mr.Oberoi kissed her too

"Ok ………..aj tum donon ko first bite main apnay hathoon se khilaoon ga"

Mr Oberoi make a bite and then another and took one in left hand and other in right hand and feed them at a time……………the Kashish and nandini make a bite and they both too feed him at a time and Mr.Oberoi's face was fully filled

On seeing that all other laughed at him…………………

Then all eat the dinner and enjoyed it very much……………as they were about to finish………..a punjabi dancing flock came their wearing punjabi dresses and having dhols in there hand and some guys were beating them very energetically and the girls along with the flock…………..started dancing with there partners in typical Punjabi style…………They have created a beautiful scene……………the girls started claping on seeing them dancing…….

After some time, some of the girls of the dancing flock came to nandini kashish and gauri and forced them to come and dance………….to kashish nandini and gauri had left no option but to dance so they went with them and start dancing too……….Mr.Oberoi was quite happy on seeing there daughters having fun………….

Some time later, kashish and gauri come and take anjali and kripa too to dance………………all were having fun………when nandini come and asked her parents to come along…………

"nahi beta……………..tum loog jaoo…………..hum yahin theek hain………..or waisay bhi abh hamari umar nahin nachnay wachnay ki"……….Mrs.Oberoi said to nandini

"array ji kaun si umar……………app ka tau patah nahin likin hum tau abhi bhi jawan hain………….app bethi rahian yahin………..main chalta hoon apni betiyon k pass"….mr.Oberoi said to her mrs and went with nandini to dance with their daughters

On seeing him in flock all the girls scream out in joy and dance with him

And their……………Mrs.Oberoi get teary on seeing her family's happiness and pray to God to give happiness to her family, more and more.

But she didn't know that someone, somewhere was in mission to take her happiness.

A Guy was sitting with his mother…

"Maa………..tum jaldi se meri or nandini ki shadi ki date fix karoo………kyoun k main nahin chahta k abh or deer hoo…………..or haan……….daheej ki baat tum kar leyna………kyoun k main nahin chahata k kuch bhi tumhari marzi k khilaf hoo" ah…..the guy was karan…………who was right now seemed to be a well-behaved son.

"jeetay rahoo beta………..mujhay tujh se yehi umeed thi…………Nandini tera pyar hai……….mujhe iss se kuch nahin………..mujhey tau bass teri khushiyan chahiye…………or daheej bhi tau main tere liye hi mang rahi hoon na………ta k tu agay koi taqleef na uthayee"…………..the Mother said in the concern tone

"janta hoon maa…………..or main tere saath hoon"……….karan hugged her mother with this and her mother got a smile on her face……..a wicked one

the next day………….nandini was sitting in the window with a flower in her hand and was deeply engrossed in her thoughts when some one tucked her and she got scared………………..then a laughing anjali come forward

"kia dina dii……………dar gaiee…"……….nandini was breathless……….and anjali was continuously laughing

when kripa come inside anjali told her this and explain nandini's face expression and kripa too join her in laughing

On seeing giggling voices kashish too come there and asked what happened………anjali told her too………..and after telling her…………when anjali got no response and on seeing her serious face, she and kripa stopped laughing and became serious

"anju, kripss…………tumhain patah nahin nandini ko heights se darr lagta hai………tum ne jo kia………..us se who gir bhi sakti thi…………."

After knowing the serious effect of tucking her……………anjali got serious

"I m sorry dina dii"………..she kept her eyes lowered when nandini come to her and hugged her and said "no problem"……..

kripa too said sorry

"but 4 what"

"maine anju ka saath diya"…………"oh……."nandini hugged her too………..

"I m sorry ish dii"……….anjali and kripa said to kashish

"dekho……..mazaq karoo……….likin aik limit main…………"

"ok………main agay se aisa nahin karoon gii"………anjali said holding her ears

kashish hugged her sisters

"or zara socho……….agar nandini gir jati or us ko fracture hota tau iss ki shadi ki date or agay hoo jati………."…………kripa nad nandini nodded in yes and nandini looked at her seriously…………kashish tured and move towards door but at door step she turned back and said

"or phir humain or wait karna parta ……..k kab yeh hamri jaan choorti hai or humain chutkara deti hai"……..on saying that she winked at three of them and on hearing this nandini run towards her…………kashish run fast and turn towards kitchen where her mother was making food…………or kashish us k peechay ja k khari hoo jati hai

"kashish ki bachi……………main tumhain chooron gi nahin"…………..nandini said as she run towards her

"mama hatoo"….nandini said

"haila…………….humain nahin choroo gii tau karan jeeju ko kaisay pakroo gii"………..she smiled widly and her mother too smild on that and kripa nad anjali held there tummy's as they were not able to control their laughter

all this was going on in the house

when on the third side……………….gauri was sitting in her hose with her parents and her 10 years bro around………they just came back from a trip and asked their buttler to make tea

"gauri ………..humain tum se aik baat kehni hai"…….Mr.Singhania (gauri's father) said to her looking at his wife.

"abhi"………..gauri said as she looked towards the clock who was strucking 3:30pm.

"haan………….koi kaam hai"…….he asked in a concerning tone

"who mujhay dina dii or ish dii nay bulaya tha…………..aj shopping pay jana tha………..who dina dii ki shadi ix honay wali hai na tau aunty keh rahi theen k shopping pa main bhi saath jaoon……………or main pehlay hi late hoo chuki hoon"

after listening her his father said "theek hai tum chali jaoo…………..hum baad main baat kartay hain"……………gauri was shocked coz 1st time ever his father talked to her softly……….

Gauri left the house immediately confused…………..and pick up nandini and kashish and went 4 shopping.

ok guys..............2nd part is here.........it is my treat for u guys of my birthday which was on 27th..........taste it and tell me.........

k

lolz
ana


Edited by cool_SK - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
nice part ana
ab jaldi se dusra part likho 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
👏 very gooood....loved it...commented for the first time...keep it up anaa....lovelyy!!!

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