One Last Betrayal: Arshi ff (NEW AUTHOR'S NOTE! 8/4. Page 157)

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#851

OMG I am speechless! That was just so beautifully written
I am at work I should be worming but instead I am sitting on my desk reading this.
Is 13 the last chappy? I am making sure cos I dont wanna miss a single word of this FF.

I hope you update doon. And please may I be Pmed gor updates.

Standing ovation to you for this FF 👍🏼

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sheenal

@sheenalipkknd

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#852

hey I just found this FF and its amazingly amazing

and please update soon 😃

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#853

omg this story is amazinggg

plzzz update sooonnn

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Hina

@hinasadiq

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Posted: 12 years ago

#854

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#855

Lagta hai behoosh hogi tum. Kahan ho? Please update kardo yaar.

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Claudia

@amaia

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#856

I just found this FF and its amazing ...😊plzzz update sooonnn...Plz pm me when u update next...

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#857

I'm gonna sound really reude here, I'm sorry in advance but I'm kinda in a hurry. so in short you got a good story here and I need you to update and PM me. please? capisce?! :D

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barunkidiwaani

@barunkidiwaani

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#858

When will you post the next part ! ? :(

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#859

Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Came across your FF and read all the updates in one go!!!!!!!!!!!
Even though a dark FF it had qualities to grip!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved your characterisation of NK and the strong Khushi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What more does she have in store????????????
A husband who not only hates but is slao insensitive and a maniac wanting to possess her!!!!!!!!
When do her misfortunes end?????????????
Please do PM me further updates!!!!!!!!!!!!