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Part 19 A-

The next morning,
Rey woke up early & was about to go for his morning jog & came to wake Sanchita up. He knocked once n no response…. He knocked thrice… still no response. He looked at the time- 5.30 a.m.
Rey: Har din toh yeh mere saath morning jog pe jaane ke liye mujhse ladti rehti hain! Aaj kya ho gaya??? Mujhse pehle toh nahi uth gayi???? Nahi nahi…. She never does that. Phir aaj kya hua? Check kar leta hu…
He opened her door and found her sleeping. He leaned a bit alongside the door and had a soft smile on his face seeing his sister sleep.😊
Rey: Jhalli!
Quietly shutting her door, he plugged in some music and left. When he returned back from his jog, he promptly dialed a no.
Voice: hello…
Rey: gud morning my baat-cutter…. 😊
*who else! HAD TO BE KRIYA 😉*
Kriya *sleepily*: gud morning Reyyy….
Rey: oye hoye! Itni cutely mera naam logi na, kahi mujhe khud apne naam se sharma na aane lag jaaye…..
Kriya: Rey aap bhi na! Subah-subah pata nahi kya baat leke baith gaye ho….
Rey: Baat-cutter, mein abhi shuru hi kaha hua hu… tum ek chance phir dekho!
Kriya: My sweet assistant, apni limit mein raho. Warna kahi aisa na ho jaaye, ki aaj poora din tumhe mera chehra bina dekhe hi guzaarna padey….
Rey: Arrey meri miss Dehradun pls… aisa mat karna! Full day tumhara face nahi dekhunga toh I'll die!!!
Kriya *gets up & sits cross-legged*: Hey! Don't die bcz of me *pouts*… m not that worth it!
Rey: Tumhaari ACTUAL worth kya hain yeh sirf mein jaanta hu! N trust me Kriya, U'RE TOTALLY WORTH IT!
*KR bg tune- oh ho ho…*
Kriya: Waise bhi, aggar mein khud aapka chehra na dekhu na, toh mera din ekdum incomplete lagta hain!
Rey: Matlab ki mera chehra hi kaafi hain tumhaara din complete karne ke liye, mein khud nahi!
Kriya: Rey aap toh bura maan gaye!
Rey: Toh aur kya karu? Ek toh meri gf ko mujhse zyada uss "phatte huye dhol" Himesh Reshamiya main interest hain *Kriya giggles remembering dat incident 😆* aur upar se mujhse mina acha nahi lagta sirf meri shakkal main interest hain!!
Kriya: Rey mera woh matlab nahi tha… *Rey cuts call* Cut kar diya. Ab toh unko manana padega! Universe ji, pls saath dena! Chal Kriya, "Mission Reyaansh ko manana" shuru kiya jaaye!😭
Kriya gets up n gets ready for the college. She wears a white with black stripes dress n brown gladiators & flower studs. Kriya reached college by 6… which was way before than anyone cud even think of coming. She then began her preparations for manaoing Rey. By 7.30 a.m., everything was set.
Kriya *smiling to herself*: Ab dekhte hain Mr. Assistant… aap apni iss boss se kab tak naraaz honge.😃

Morning 9 a.m. -
In BLR,
Rey and the boys entered d LR laughing as they had won in d Girls vs Boys in their Rehearsals dat day. Rey went up to his locker & opened it. He found red colored envelope next to his OC book. Curiosity got into him & he opened d envelope & found tickets to a dance ball which he really wanted to go since past few weeks. A small note falls down; Rey quietly picks it up & opens it-
"So whats say Mr. AGS? Line-Cutter aur Baat-Cutter usske Line-Cutter ke favourite dance ball main! AS A COUPLE? Humaari first OFFICIAL DATE! See ya at 8 tonight!
I love you mere chabilal…😳"

Rey had a smile on his face after reading this note.
Rey *smirking*: First date huh! Looking forward to it…😊
Rey then received a text from Sanchita-
"cover for me pls… me off to NY for a week! Sorry ki end moment pe plan banana pada… c ya next week! Love u"
Rey immediately called up Sanchita.
Sanchita: hey my romeo of a bhai…
Rey *kinda whining*: What the hell yaar Sanchu! Tu mujhe bina bataye NY bhaag gayi phirse?😲
Sanchita: arrey babu! Mujhe…. Mujhe na actually kuch adhoore kaam ko poora karna hain… issliye, I… I HAVE TO LEAVE FOR NY!😭
Just then, Sanchita & Rey heard the announcement of a flight in the background.
Sanchita: Lo. Meri flight ki announcement bhi ho chuki hain. Bye… c ya next week sweetu… muaaah! *she cuts d call*
Rey *puts d phone down*: Bye…. Gonna miss u sis!
Rey puts the envelope with the note inside his locker, takes his books & leaves for the class feeling low.
Kriya was chatting with Neha & Sharon when she spotted Rey coming out of the BLR with a glum look on his face.
Kriya *in her mind*: Kyaa yaar! Itni mushkil se meine woh dance ball ki tickets arrange ki the! Rey unse bhi khush nahi huye? Aur yeh toh Rey ke fav dance ball ke tickets hain yaar!! Universe ji, pls help me!!
Rey saw Kriya talking with Sharon n Neha & was really lost in her beauty.
Dress-
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glads-
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studs-
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Rey *for Kriya*: Beautiful!
All the girls stopped talking- Kriya was blushing while NeSha were looking at Rey.
Rey *realizing the blunder he almost made*: I mean… ummm…. Hey beautiful ladies!
Neha *acting all dramatic*: haaa….. OMG! Reyaansh Singhania telling Neha beautiful???
Rey: Arrey Neha, jo log beautiful hotey hain unhe beautiful kehlaane ka full right hain!
Neha: Thank you…
Sharon: Chal hatt! Jhoota kahin ka! Humein khoob pata hain ki tera ishara *looking at Kriya* kis taraf tha!
*KR share a look-look*
The girls were about to interrupt when the bell rang bringing KR out of their moment. All the four of them went back to their seats. ShaRey & KriYam were sitting together *both the couples sitting in the middle row, SR on the front bench & KS sitting on the second bench* & throughout the whole class Kriya was not able to concentrate as Rey was not talking to her.
Kriya *in mind*: Kya karun? Rey toh meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahe hain! *idea strikes her mind* IDEA! Rey ko manane ka Step 2!
After class, the whole gang was going towards the canteen when Rey felt someone pulling him inside an empty classroom.
Rey: hello! Koi hain?
Before Rey could say anything, the light & fan above him were on & he felt something soft on his face…. When he looked up, fan se paper hearts ki bearish ho rahi thi!
*A/N- Cm'on guys! Yeh sab cheezein ladko ko bhi achchi lagti hain!*
Rey immediately understood ki yeh kiska plan hoga.
Rey *chuckling to himself*: Kriya Ghai! U ARE SO UNPREDICTABLE!😃
He felt a heart *slightly big in size n shape* fall on him on which was written-
"Kriya + Reyaansh= KriYaansh! ❤️"
Rey's smile widened as he read it.
Rey: Yeh Miss Dehradun surely knows how to make me smile.
Rey took the heart & went 2wds d BLR… there, he opened his locker, put the heart inside it & reached d canteen.
Kriya was waiting for Rey to come & was trying to be with the gang…. When Rey entered, she feels his presence.
Rey *enters the canteen*: hey guys… wassup?
Gang: hey R…
Rey straight away goes near Kriya, almost snaking his arms on her waist hugging her possessively in front of everyone.
Kriya & Gang: 😲
Rey: kya hua? Aise kyun dekh rahe ho? Duniya ki kaunsi rulebook kehti hain ki ek ladka apni gf ke saath romance nahi kar sakta?
Kriya was loving this side of Rey. Kriya hugged back & did something which no one expected!
Kriya: Rey?
Rey: Kya hua?
Kriya gestures him to come closer, he leans a bit & Kriya pecks him on his cheek whispering- "I love you Rey."
Rey & gang: 😲
Rey was pleasantly surprised & he too pecks Kriya while she was not expecting it.
Kriya & gang: 😲
Swayam: Ok now! Issey pehle ki canteen ka temperature tum dono ke romance ke wajah se badh jaaye, go & get a room guys!😆
The gang laughed at Swayam's joke, while Rey glared at him & Kriya was feeling a bit shy.

Evening 8 p.m.-
Rey was waiting for Kriya inside her house. He was looking really handsome in a black waist coast.
Rey date dress-

Smriti *impressed*: Not bad!! Aaj toh Kriya bhi tumhe dekhke flat ho jaayegi!
Rey: Aunty woh tab na!!! Itna time…
Rey was about to complete his sentence when Kriya's presence made him shut up!
She was wearing a beautiful peach colored strapless ball gown with diamond drop ear-rings & a butterfly cuff.
Kriya date dress-

accessories-



Rey: DROP DEAD GORGEOUS!
Kriya could only blush at his compliment. Rey looked at Smriti for approval & she nodded her head & gestured "10 at home." Rey understood & nodded his head.
Rey *goes down on one knee & forwards his hand*: Miss Kriya Ghai, may I have the opportunity of taking you out for a dance ball pls?
Kriya *putting her hand on his*: Pleasure is all mine Mr. Reyaansh Singhania.
Rey takes Kriya to the ball where they share their first dance together & have a lot of fun.
Around 10, Rey is near her building & it's time for them to part *both are standing outside Rey's car*.
Rey: I had the best time of my life tonight.
Kriya: Me too.
Rey *sounding a bit naughty*: Waise… mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itni romantic aur jugaadu ho!
Kriya was not able to understand what Rey meant…
Rey: Woh…. Red envelope, ball tickets & woh hearts ki baarish… not bad!
Kriya just smiled. Rey had an idea & he turned around.
Rey: OW!!!
Kriya: Kya hua?
Rey: Shit! I… I think I snapped my neck!
Kriya: Rey aap bhi na! Hang on, dekhne do mujhe!
That's exactly what Rey wanted! Kriya came closer to him but soon realized it was all a setup to kiss her.
Well, Kriya bhi kuch kam thodi na hain! She comes even more closer & just blows on his neck. Her hot-n-cold breath gives goosebumps to Rey & he closes his eyes to engulf the feeling more.
Kriya *smiling, she backs out*: Ho gaya Rey! Theekh ho gaya…
Rey opens his eyes & sees Kriya smiling.
Rey *fake smile*: Thanks…
Kriya: bye Rey. Kal milte hain.
Rey: bye!
Kriya leaves but stops mid-way. She turns around to see Rey slightly dejected with his plan. She runs back to him & gives him a passionate kiss. Rey kisses her back with equal intensity & soon both pull apart bcz of lack of air. She pecks on his lips, murmurs a good night & rushes back home.
Rey soon reaches his place & sleeps late bcz of thinking abt his baat-cutter. On the other hand, Kriya also thinks about her line-cutter n sleeps late.

that's it guys!
Part B *only SWARON* on pg 110.
"like" n comment pls...
taniya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres...
amazing update...
kriyaansh ka ph convo..gosh dam cute...
loved the way kria was trying to convince rey...
canteen part was superb...
loved it...
update soon...
Edited by kriyansh_Alisha - 12 years ago
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superb update
kriyansh ki convo ws awsm
loved kriyansh
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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that was entirely superb and fabulous loved it everything...
rey was low down because of her sis as she went back to ny for works...
i loved all the trick and tactics used to get rey back to a smile face...
do continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres...

haaye.. kitta cute chappy tha...

i loved it...


especially this whole part...


Kriya *sleepily*: gud morning Reyyy….
Rey: oye hoye! Itni cutely mera naam logi na, kahi mujhe khud apne naam se sharma na aane lag jaaye….



i loved it.. der ph convo was super cuteee... 😳



uske baad Kria trying to manaofy Rey... haaye... even girls can be Romantic... lol... 😆

and der date... jo tune dikhayi nahi...

but kiss toh dikhayi atleast... 🤣


in all cute chappy...

loved it... 😃




Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res plz Done
loved the way kria was trying to convince rey...
canteen part was superb...👏👏👏
loved it...😳
update soon...😉
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago

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