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teja21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

awesome

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CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

awesome.

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

so it seems he wants to be 100% sure that she is innocent and all
and not just fooling him
well she isnt
and you will know soon enough
that she aint pretending
awww so cute her talking to the baby
and calling it shonu right
and her not knowing maan name
gosh this innocent child shall be the death of him
seems he will know more about her and soon
and cant wait for that

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Awesome Part 😉

Your Qouta is completed 😃
Update next part soon 😛

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Superb update. Maan is really possessive about his wife and child. Loved that Geet was caught talking to the baby as well. Fab job and looking forward to what is in store next.

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

**MENDING HEARTS**

part 14

geet was dressed in a bottle green anarkali he had already gotten her the clothes and the style and designs she would prefer to wea.. She was just a plain beauty ready to kill him with her innocence.. He knew that she wouldnt even wear those frocks he was just looking at her reaction and now he found something important she was talking about some a month ago and he knew that she was there and the names she took were of her cousins.. Somewhere he was having an intution that her brother would be involved but her sister too made him angry.. How can they do this to her .. Even if she wasnt their own blood but does humanity is lost.. Looks like who is talking about being righteous the man who never took any step.. He just knew his growth and his hands himself manupulated things .. Isnt he involed in illegal dealings isnt he the one who used to have almost every day a new woman in his bed to satisfy his lust .. Conscience pricked numerous thoughts evolved in his mind which were shut seeing her glowing and shying.. She was holding on the nurse hands and seems to be terrified.. New people new surroundings and a big place to get lost ...
geet : hey babaji wo yahan rehte hain .. Itna bada ghar hai.. What if i get lost here ...nahi nahi i wont be able to locate myself then.. I wont live here..
maan was looking at her slow and steady move and asked the nurse to go..
maan : geet come and have your breakfast.. Geet nodded and looked around she was finding the way to kitchen she need to make breakfast tabhi toh khayegi..
maan looked at her searching something ..he asked her..
maan : geet kuch chahiye tumhe..
geet looke at him with fear she was thinking maybe he will also shout at her and beat her for she dont know anything .. She lowered her eyes and tears sting in her eyes she was used to this kind of brutal treatment at her place back home only daarji used to save her but with her uncle and mostly aunt's dominance he sometimes fails to protect her..
maan lifted her chin and he saw her weeping a sudden panic surged through him.. He wiped those traces of discomfort and asked her
maan : geet kya hua .. Why are you crying kisi ne kaha kuch tumse or are you feeling uneasy..
geet : woh mujhe nahi pata where is kitchen.. Maan knew that she was a unique creation of god but having her in his life will surely make him mad..
maan : do you need anything.. Why are you looking for kitchen..
geet : for breakfast.. Wo banan bhi toh hoga.. You said na that i will work for you so..
maan was irritated now.. This child woman will make him to loose his control someday..
maan : did i tell you that you will do any kind of household work.. And you want too cook with your bandaged hand .. Are you mad.
geet : phir kya karna hai mujhe ..
maan : will tell you later now come and have breakfast and you dont have to do anything there are servants lined up just say them what do you want or need..
geet just nodded.. The breakfast completed with maan feeding geet and she telling him to eat in between too.. All the eyes were on the couple the servants were gaping with open mouth at the couple which were lost in themselves..
deepak one of the servant of KM whispered..
deepak: maan sir is feding the girl.. He never brought any of the girl in mansion par ye kon hai..
chandu: haan ye kya maan sir consoling.. Ye kya ho raha hai... He didnt even yelled at us also..
nakul who was the head servant shood off the other two telling them the consequence of maan sir knowing there talks..
nakul: agar sir ko pata chala then be ready to be thrown out of KM..
the two rushed just like if they were having fire in their tails... And nakul was called by maan..
nakul came and stood beside his master.. Well maan was more conscious for geet as his baby's mama was looking down and she was not paying any attention of what he was doing he was telling her something and she was doing just opposite sitting quite instead of giving him any kind of response..
maan : geet.. Kya soch rahi ho.. Geet suddenly jumped on her spot and made a baby face she just looked away she knew that she was at fault she didnt listened to him she was busy thinking what work he will assign her since she was still not competant enough to do all the work..
maan : geet.. Listen to me.. This time he was slow and sure that she will be responsive..
gee2: jee..
nakul snapped hs eyes open seeing the scene a rare one..
maan looking at nakul and geet..
maan : geet this is nakul and he is the head cook here you can tell me anything you want am i clear.. He asked and the adorable girl nodded
maan to nakul..
maan : nakul this is geet and madam will stay here from nowonwards.. The nurse is there to take care of her and you make you that she remains here and if she have any kind of discomfort inform me immediately..
nakul: ji sir..

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

**MENDING HEARTS**

part 15

the week passed with her as she made her appearance officially at his place and life.. They used to have their breakfast and dinner together and that too at late night with maan's arrival now.. She was now managing his life so well his care for her and their unborn can also be not neglected .. Geet used to sleep with him on his bed but with the barrier of those pillows which were day by day vanishing as she was getting used to him.. Her night dress still consist of his shirt but now with a silk wrap around beneath.. Day by day she was glowing with the physical tortures reduced and almost the hurt and wounds were curing and not to forget when geet starts to crib and starts to cry like a baby then maan feels that someone should hang him..
just like it was another day when maan was still in office and his lady was at home she was waiting for him at dinner least she know that her suniye ji was not like someone who would comply to anyone' s needs and demands.. The first time when geet called suniye ji was something that made him astonished and finally realized that his shona's mum doesnt call him with his name ..
the same day when maan introduced geet to nakul , geet was still thinking how to ask him .. There was definitely a problem with her she was feeling shy and flushed asking him his name .. She knew that he is THE one whom she shouldnt address by his name.. And even the servants doesnt call him by his name .. They just call him sir and geet thought to address him with same as she is also like them.. His employ..
that day geet was finally talking with the baby afterall she has decided baby's name and this will be good if she calls her baby by his name..
geet: shonu , dont get mad at mama .. I know my shonu is hungry but baby we should wait for for daddy na.. Or he will feel bad..
geet was sitting on the couch with her hands holding maan's pillow and she was talking cutely to her little one..
geet : shonu aapke daddy ka naam kya hai.. Mujhe toh wo bhi nahi pata aapki mama ko toh kuch bhi nahi pata hai...
she looked gloomy and sad.. She didnt knew his name was something atrocious for her..
later that night maan reached at mansion he had expected his little woman be sleeping soundly but looks like his assumption went wrong.. His saw her sitting on the couch in his room.. And as soon as she saw him.. She smiled a gentle yet melting smile she was already in her night suit and dragged him with her.. She first handed him his clothes to change..
geet : aap change karlo.. Main na dinner lagati hun... And if her sugar dipped order was not enough for him she literally sent him to the washroom and he was left alone in the room..
maan : what is she doing.. And .. His thoughts even refused to come out.. She was ruling his life his senses and now she was looking after his diselved life..
geet came with nakul managing the food nicely arranged in a trolley..
geet saw maan and she without saying anything started arranging two plates.. Maan was having no idea what was going on he hardly have his dinner at home and this will be record of a time that he is at his home having food with HER
maan sat on the couch as she was just filling his plate .. And the second plate was too having same contents with made him astonished..
maan : ye kiski plate hai..
geet without at him.. She managed to get food for her and shonu as her little one was fond of his father's taste and choice..
geet : mere liye hai...mmujhe bhi bhook lagi hai..
maan looked at her confused.. She was looking at him waiting for him to start and the next moment he looked at her with his pierching yes boring into the soul of that distrauted damsel that the devil himself was aware that what effect he is creating on the poor child woman...
maan : and why didnt you have your dinner...
geet : mujhe aur shonu ko aapke saath dinner karna tha but nakul bhaiya ne kaha ki aap busy hai.. So maine shonu ko bhi samjha diya.. He wont have any problem waiting for you...
maan looked at her in a astonished way his eyes having a guilt yet the admiration for her innocence..
geet poked his shoulder when she looked at him not eating..
geet : suniye..
when maan didnt listened she with her baby angry voice scolded him..
geet : khaiye na... Mujhe aur shonu ko bhi bhook lagi hai.. Aur aap hain ki.. She kept her hand cutely on her tummy and herself started feeding him... Just one morsel she was about to make him eat when he stopped her...
maan : aur tumne time par kyun nahi khaya. You know that it is important for you to eat on time... But no you are too careless... Making yourself and baby starve.. Just because you wanted to eat with me... Geet grow up.. I am not free to baby sit you all the time..
geet had tears filled in her eyes... She burst out crying and was about to go.. When he got to know his mistake..
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