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JENNY IF U DONT CONTINUE THIS ME AND SAAVI WILL KILL U :D :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was really very cute story!
Loved the update!

Please continue it soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...
awwiieee nishi...
y r u endng dis ff..
its amazng...
plz plzupdate
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweet and happy ending but will be more happy if u continue it...thnx for pm...and thnx for giving one more memorable character i.e. nishi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jenny Jenny Jenny Jenny
My pyaari sweet cute behna, missh u so much and ur story to and finally i got time to read it but m extremely upset tht ur wnding... No plshhh dont do that u noe this ff is my favorite and i love it frm bottom Of my heart and if u end this ff i will be so depress and senti... Plshh for my sake or for ur readers sake dont end this ff yaar plshhh i beggg uuu... I m extremly sorry for not commenting or reading as u noe i was away... M really sorry plshh behna mat end karo plshhh...
The updates were
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Cute
Loving
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Outstanding
Out of the world
Love
Nishi
Virika
Rain
Sleep
Hug
Kisses
Pregnant but not
Nishi gets bigger...
Seriously jenny i cant express how i miss this ff and u... M once again really sorry and plshhh dont end the ff meri galti hain par plshhh end mat karo plshhh... The updates were all so cute loving... Hayee the romance between virika eeksss... Mar gayi loot gayi... Jenny u superbbb writter and plsh dont stop this ff plshhh yaar m really sad if u end it.. I noe the respomce its not gud par plshhh hum mare liya jo ye ff read karte hain... Ek baar phir se sorry... N i really mishhh u ... Plshhh com online on fb if u have time wannnaa chat with u alot... Thanks for sending me pms... Loveee uuu f bottom of my heart jenny plsh meri kathir mat end karna plshhh a beg frm ur dearest friend nd sis... Plshhh .. I will promote ur story but plshhh dont end ittt it is really unique plshh
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Posted: 12 years ago
StoRy continue kr varNa um gonnA haunT u in ur dreaMs...i love ur stoRy more than uhh :P
Isliye pleaase ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jennyyy :@
Continue kArr naaaHhh !
Update fastt or else ek thappaD pdegaaa 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 22
credit : nishtha di muahh di thanks for the edit 🤗
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holllaaa friends i know u all r surprised as i am going 2 continue this FF just coz of my readers n nishtha di just for u n my bitches Millie,Ashna,Grusha and sabse badi Saavi kammoo abh khush !!!
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nishi-(angry) u r very bad dada u sent me to bhagwaan in ur marriage now wait i will sent u to bhagwaan in my marriage !!
everyone bursted vaani started rolling with laughter
shlok-viren bhaiya its sunday 2day !!!
keith-so wat!
shlok-viren bhaiya aaj sunday hai ( 2day is sunday)
viren-yes yes i know ... i didnt forget
every sunday viren would take shlok,meera,vaani,nishi 2 super market for a mini picnic and every sunday nishi would fly away her dada's money
viren-bacha party ! lets go
nishi-yayy !! (nishi screams n jumps n in a way her juice got spilled on viren's shirt )
viren- nishi...
jeevika-(screaming) nishi ! what is this beta ... i said u many times dont jump like this ...if u
nishi-(start crying) pappp...aa
viren-(melted) jeevika... nishi its ok now...let me change my shirt n come till that time u all should be ready ! and keith n virat do u guys wanna come with us?
keith + virat - sure !
keith- now go n change ur shirt
viren goes in his room
maanvi- di go help jiju change his shirt (smirks)
jeevika- chup kar ( shut up)
jeevika went to her room n saw viren shirtless ! (viren saw her through the mirror)
viren-jeevika come fast n help me find my wallet n oh i have to change my shirt ...comeon help me
jeevika- ji
jeevika went n started buttoning viren's shirt n his romantic mood was on
viren- jeevika aaj sunday hai ( 2day is sunday)...
jeevika- so...
viren-i was planning to sleep n enjoy my sunday ...
jeevika- (hits him on his chest) hatiye (move) ...
viren-dont worry mrs.vadhera i will not leave you once i am back...
jeevika-(blushing)
viren- by the way do you want anything ...tell me i will bring it !
jeevika- no i dont want anything ! but just want to warn you ! pls dont buy many things for nishi pls ...
nishi- mamma i heard my name !
jeevika-ufff naam liya shaitaan hazir! (think of the devil n the devil is here)
nishi-mamma what do u mean ?
viren-nishi lets go ( picks her up)
virika along with nishi went in the hall
viren-so lets go
in the mall
viren-shlok,meera,vaani u all go n get ur stuff...
nishi- n me pappa
viren- u will come with me nishi !
nishi- umm ok pappa
shlok,meera,vaani went in 3 different directions n keith n virat went in perfume shop n viren was with nishi
viren-nishi what do u want baby!
nishi- pappa i want that n that n that n
viren- nishi no u know ur mamma will kill me if i buy u more than 1 toy
nishi-ok pappa ...i want ..(thinking)
umm nishi saw a big toy it was a family set ... (same like vadheras)
nishi- yayy i want that !
viren- oh my god its sooo big...
nishi-pappa i want ( crying)
viren-ok ok bt if ur mamma...
nishi-pappa u can say her sorry n kiss her n ...(remembering what all she saw virika doing together)
viren-(embarassed)oh ok ok i know now lets go
viren took that huge family set n went at the counter n saw meera,shlok and vaani
viren paid for the stuff n took the kids in the car keith and virat also joined them..
nishi-pappa lets go home fast !! i want to open my toy fast
virat- ok nish ! pappa is driving no, so wait
viren drove home n nishi ran n hugged swamini
nishi- badi dadi! badi dadi ! (jumps on swamini)
swamini- ohhh nishi ! wht happened ?
nishi - look ( shows her the toy)
keith,virat,meera,vaani,shlok and viren entered the house
viren-huhhh i am tired !
badi maa-viren why dont u go n take a nap !
viren- umm ok badi maa
keith- where r everyone !
swamini-bauji is in library n anu and maanvi are in jeevika's room n bhabhi has gone to mandir
virat- ohh me 2 bhai even i am tired
keith-if u both r feeling tired then even i am tired hehehe
viren+virat- hahahahaha
viren-i am going to sleep bye everyone
viren went in his room and saw maanvi and anu sitting on the sofa viren quitely went n layed in the bed anu and maanvi decided to give virika some privacy n they went out teasing jeevika
as soon as they left viren ran n locked the door leaving a shocked jeevika
jeevika-virenji ! what r u doing
viren-huhh i want to spend my sunday with my wife ...u see i am very tired now
jeevika- soo...
viren-sooo. (brings her closer)
jeevika-virenji move ...
viren pulled jeevika close n kept his hands on her waist and kissed her cheeks and she blushed
and she tried to escape
viren-huhh not soo fast mrs.vadhera
viren pushed her on the bed n went on top of her n he tightened the grip of his hands on her wrists n started nuzzling her neck with his nose
jeevika- viii rreeen ji pls... moooveee
viren wasnt replying he was just enjoying
viren kissed her blushing cheeks n he started giving wet kisses on her lips ! n he was about to open her dress's doori but ...
KNOCK ! KNOCK !
viren-(screaming) kon hai ? (who is this )
maanvi- its me maanvi and anu is with me
jeevika was trying really hard to escape from his tight grip bt she couldnt
viren-umm maanvi tell nishi that i am sleeping!
maanvi- jijj...
jeevika bit viren's finger n ran to open the door !
maanvi- di !
maanvi and anu were shocked to see jeevika in messy hairs n her dupatta was lying on viren's side!
anu- jeevika looks like we disturbed u
jeevika- ohh sorry ! (runs n grabs her dupatta n wears it !)
jeevika- actually ...
maanvi- di we can understand ( smirks)
jeevika blushing + embarassed - ok u 2 go we r coming
maanvi and anu made their way to hall
jeevika closed the door n went to viren to wake him up !
jeevika- virenji now enough u had enough sleep ! now get up pls
viren-no jeevika ! unless n until u dont give me my gud nap kiss i wont get up !
jeevika-what again u want a kiss ! just now you ...
viren-what ! complete it !
jeevika- no !
viren- jeevika i am saying complete it if u wont then wait till tonight ...
jeevika-(sticks her tongue out) na nannna na na ! i wont
jeevika went near the dressing table n combed her hairs n got ready ...
by the time even viren came out from the bathroom looking fresh !
jeevika-lets go !
viren- mrs.vadhera i am not gonna spare u tonight .just wait n watch
viren left along with jeevika
everyone were present as nishi was opening her toy so she wanted everyone to see the enaugration hahahha
viren- so my nishu called everyone for what ?
nishi- i called everyone so that they all can see innogaon (enaugratation)
viren-ok so start ur work!
nishi enaughrated her toy (hahahahhahaa)
n she was introducing the characters in her family set
nishi-(while showing the tiny dolls) this is bade dadaji...this is badi dadi ...this is dadi...this is keith chachu.this is anu chachi ...this is...(and it went on n every member of the vadhera had a tiny doll of their own ...but)
nishi- and this is nichi ...
but there was another tiny doll n it was a doll of an infant incolour blue... nishi got confused n she asked viren
nishi-pappa who is this !
viren was speechless he didnt knew what to say n others were giggling while jeevika was blushing
viren-umm nishi this is umm ur future brother !
nishi- brother ! who brother
viren-umm nishi brother is he who will play with u ...
nishi-really !!!! then pappa lets go n get him from the mall
viren-what !! no nishi ur brother is not on sale ...
nishi-(sad)- when i will get my brother...
viren looked at jeevika who was blushing !
viren-umm ask your mamma ! she will tell u
nishi-mamma ! when will i get brother
jeevika-umm nishi ...
nishi-i want my brother ( shouting)
everyone were blushing n nishi was very stubborn n she started demanding
nishi- i want a brother (crying ) !!
virika were shocked n everyone tried their best to stop her crying bt she didnt
keith come her my superwoman
keith took her n flew her it the air
bt still she was crying

n soo viren had to promise her
viren-ok ok !! i will get u a brother !
nishi- when ?
viren- umm next year!
nishi -nooo !! me want now !
viren-nishi i said no baby next year !
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PRECAP-
viren brought a plumber home as kitchen sink was leaking
nishi- chone (shona) what r u doing
viren-hmm
n the plumber was from china n he didnt knew shona was a romantic name n so even he started calling viren shona
plumber-shona bhai i am going
viren- (shocked) what !
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i know its a crap bt just for u guys i continued this FF muahhh love u my readers 🤗
Edited by JennyKryan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome awesome awesome!!! i loved it.

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