SS (Completed): Of Lemons & Limes #6 (Ch 23 - 24/ Epilogue) - Page 48

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: horizon123

mind blowing update, felt nostalgic hearing the dialogues😊.


Originally posted by: SaRunHolicc

amazing update.loved it to the core


Originally posted by: littlemissstar

Awesome loved it... 😉
this is one of the first stories i read on if..
it was a treat reading it..


Originally posted by: ppriyaa02

Good update..

Feeling sad its over...

Hope u start a new story...


Originally posted by: Kathy_D

Wonderful FF.Read all parts in one go.Amazing narration.


Originally posted by: barunmaniac

mind blowing update

finally they are together..
waiting for the next part
plzzz update soon
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Originally posted by: rupamudra

awsm update

its payal marriage good
finally arshi is together
loved the update update soon


Thank you for reading and the wonderful words! 🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: incandescent

That was beautiful...a perfect end to the story. 👏👏👏

I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and I am definitely going to reread this story.

I loved your refreshing take to Arhi's story and I loved the idea of lemon fragrance. It's a unique concept and a unique title for a story. When I first came across this I actually thought Khushi was pregnant in this one'.I just connected the lemons and limes with pickles and all. 😳 I am so silly.😆 I was pleasantly surprised to find out that it's actually about Khushi's lemony fragrance and how it took over the mighty ASR's senses.

I loved your version of Arnav and Khushi and the way you incorporated some of the epic Arhi scenes and dialogues into your story was brilliant.

You actually made Devi maiyya into a character. That was some twist.⭐️

You did a wonderful job. 👍🏼


Haha! Ok this is the first time someone said something like that .. lemon, limes n pickles! 😆😆

Yeah! Devi Maiya is Khushi's best friend, naa? How can we ignore her? Only she could do something for these crazy two .. else .. both are in so much denial most of the times.

Thank you so much for the generous comment. Made me feel good .. really. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: damonzlady

Loved the update!finally Arnav's lemon is his! 😊

"I cannot live with just a beautiful piece of metal. I cannot live with mere memories. I want to live with you."
Loved this line.

Can't wait for more!


Awhh! You liked that line? We sometime save keepsakes .. but does that really mean more than the person him/herself?

Thank you so much for reading! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deeswarna

wow thats wat i call a super romantic and lovely update!


so much pain and all just for a mere misunderstanding! but really happy that they cleared everything and looking forward to a super future!

eagerly waiting for the epilogue


Yeah! So much pain over a mere misunderstanding .. but it worked! Something the best things come out of the worst possible situations .. 😊

Thanks for reading! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiramisu_coffee

I m so pissed ... at MYSELF!! How the heck did I miss this update? I must have been delirious without my fix that I cudnt see u update 2 days ago... 2 friggin days ago... Now I know how relieved n joyous must have Arnav felt seeing Khushi after 3 harrowing days!! I can't believe we r coming to an end :-( the only solace is that next time I read this, I will be able to finish it all in one go!! By the way, I will be sending buddy request cuz I don't want to miss out on ur other upcoming stories... considering it took me 48 hrs to discover this chapter, I am doubting my stalking skills!!! Keep the magic going gurl!!! You are awesome!!


No problem! I welcome Tiramisu & Coffee anytime! 😉 LOL .. great comparison! Haha .. Arnav & you? Not bad! 😆

Buddy me, surely. You will get treats on you way .. 😉

Thanks for reading! 🤗



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_zephyr

Finally they reconciled, sigh of relief after persistent dodging their feelings for each other, absolutely loved it


Originally posted by: Praniii

Oh loved it...it was fab...great job dear..,...


Thanks for reading and the lovely comments! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti


Haha! Ok this is the first time someone said something like that .. lemon, limes n pickles! 😆😆

Yeah! Devi Maiya is Khushi's best friend, naa? How can we ignore her? Only she could do something for these crazy two .. else .. both are in so much denial most of the times.

Thank you so much for the generous comment. Made me feel good .. really. 🤗


I wanted to say that the first time I commented on your thread but I was too embarrassed. ☺️😆

K and DM are best friends but we always heard Khushi's one sided convo. For the first time we got glimpses of DM too...so thank you for that. 😊

You're welcome. 🤗 It was a pleasure reading L&L.

Looking forward to the epilogue.



Edited by incandescent - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i read it all over again i don't know how many time...and every time i fell in love with it again and again ...waiting for epilogue
Edited by ranogill - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am so sad this is ending...however it's awesome!
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is amazing! You write so beautifully. Knowing exactly when to break the sadness! Loved it from the heart, mind, and soul! Thank you,

Neha kapoor

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