ArHi SS:Shattered #4 *Completed* - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
When are you updating hun..??
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's today right...I will have my comment up today...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
awesome update as usual... I thought Khushi will be agreeing for taking the risk... But, aah, my guess work is not working now a days..especially in your works..lol
Loved how arnav is not giving up making khushi realise the attraction between them... 😊... and khushi, she is thinking in all ways to make this impractical..
Waiting to know whos at the door... Hope it s arnav...
The list for the transfer and promostions.. Is Khushis name also included in that list...
Will be waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here's my conundrum - I love the story & wait for the next part as soon as i've finished reading one, and yet try not to read your updates as soon as they 're posted cos that means it's one more part closer to the end :-(

This one gave me goosebumps and reiterated the fact fact that romance, love and passion can be portrayed beautifully and intensely without needing to describe the entire sexual act of lovemaking.

The attraction between the two, the want and the pull was palpable and intense.

Arnav's behaviour is perfectly in sync with his characterisation - he is impulsive, makes up his mind quickly and then goes after it. Willing to risk everything if he believes it's worth it. He hated with a passion and he will love with passion too!

Khushi having lived with guilt, having denied herself a normal life, having built her career as her life, understandably has more at stake. And like I said before, their past is too horrific to be let go with any ease & as long as any hint of angst & guilt remains between them, it's like taking a matchbox to a barn full of dry hay!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update
Khushi has so many Reasons to be away from Arnav
But he doesn't allow her to do so
Who was there at the door of Khushi??
She has just exclaimed saying "You!" and not "you?"
So who must it be??
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brillient update 👏 loved both d parts and my respect 4Khushi has reached heights 👏. Hats of to u EXPELLIARMUS, in dis chapter u hve very well protriated Women's capibilities and their strenght and power and I really appreciate ur mastermind behind it 👏. U can proudly say dat dis is d only SS dat has described true WOMEN POWER 👏 inspite all they hve to go through in their life.
Last part u left us with cliff hanger, I guess Arnav came with intention to make her lose herself just has she was to be in his cabin 😈
Update soon, hope Khushi doen't lose her control again where there is no hope for future only past and nightmare to haunt them everytime dey see each other 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update. Arnav is behind khushi now. But khushi is much more sensible here.
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Posted: 12 years ago
just loved it
is arnav is standing at the door?
continue soon di
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Posted: 12 years ago
N here comes Sunday.. Eagerly waitin for the update ..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello,

This weekend is turning out to be busier than I had anticipated, and I have only managed to write a third of the update.
I will try to complete it soon, and it should be up by late afternoon on Monday, IST.

Chapter Ten is titled 'Mohabbat inme dard banke rehti hai...'

Thank you all for your patience, I really appreciate it.
Hope to see you soon!


-Juhi.

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