The Dark Night-TR OS last part updtd-pg10 - Page 4

Originally posted by: sreelu094

🤣me never feel bad🤣u can try to any extend🤣and about the baashan😆i love to give baashans more than updates🤣anyone can write stories but my baashan are nowhere to be seen other than in my posts😆and u'll get update 2mrw if u r so unlucky and will get after 2 weeks only id u r so lucky😆

Originally posted by: wow-taarey

i chose unlucky!!😆😆

hey!!may i scrap u???

Originally posted by: sreelu094

next update will be having not less than a page full of baashan🤣so be ready for torture🤣

and bure log jo bhi res ki hai unres ur cmnts else i won't post the last part in near future🤣

Originally posted by: sreelu094

next update will be having not less than a page full of baashan🤣so be ready for torture🤣

and bure log jo bhi res ki hai unres ur cmnts else i won't post the last part in near future🤣

Originally posted by: patie

RES😈

unres 🤣 gonna critisize u ...no matter u will read it or not 🤣

1. kammo bander I hate u fr making me wait fr freaking 1 and half month 😡

2. It ws so damn short huh ismein os kam or bhaashan jyada hai 🤣

on a serious note there r some good points also 😆


1. Its really emotional n u hv described their pain so well 😊 my taarey r like this only 😳

2. Its not at funny 🤣 i knw ur adat of cracking jokes in btwn emotional dialogues 🤣 gud u r improving as a writter 😆

3. I love this kind os which adds agression , passion , intensity n some hot moments 😳 its TR's speciallity 😆

4. now wat u want me to continue ur taarif 🤣 thats not possible until u giv us 2nd part n mind my words I want long part next time 😡samji dont act like palki 🤣

n srikky bander u only told me ki its a hot os😆 aaj k liye itna hi