Originally posted by: patie
RES😈
unres 🤣 gonna critisize u ...no matter u will read it or not 🤣
1. kammo bander I hate u fr making me wait fr freaking 1 and half month 😡
2. It ws so damn short huh ismein os kam or bhaashan jyada hai 🤣
on a serious note there r some good points also 😆
1. Its really emotional n u hv described their pain so well 😊 my taarey r like this only 😳
2. Its not at funny 🤣 i knw ur adat of cracking jokes in btwn emotional dialogues 🤣 gud u r improving as a writter 😆
3. I love this kind os which adds agression , passion , intensity n some hot moments 😳 its TR's speciallity 😆
4. now wat u want me to continue ur taarif 🤣 thats not possible until u giv us 2nd part n mind my words I want long part next time 😡samji dont act like palki 🤣
n srikky bander u only told me ki its a hot os😆 aaj k liye itna hi
oh lord nw u call this criticism ?😆pleej don't tell me😆
i'm glad that u got bored with my os🤣
neglecting the gud cmnts of u ,i'm really pleased with myself for making u angry🤣
wait for the nxt part.it might take time😆