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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

ME FIRST

Congrats

Short review.

Lovely chapter.. I think the demand for the chapter.. cut the size down.

Nice friendship between Armaan and Ashu.

Ashu's remorse..

Self thoughts the highlight of this story.

Nice conference

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Here I am going to start.. Else will never get done..

Lovely self thoughts... Ashutosh is being pained at all that transpired ..the guilt gnawing at him..

Armaan the rock and pillar as usual..

Nidhi is infectious .. She is getting deeper under his skin.

Why do I get the feeling.. The banwarilal case is going to play a big role in Ashni relationship???

The conference was just a superb idea.. I felt it was the cherry so far on the cake..

Their ride to the hotel very well written..

The drunken scene , the eye scene nicely done .. I could visualize Ashu in them. That is been the highlight of your writing for me.. Me being able to play the scenes in my minds eye.

The game of chess ahaan . And the prize great.

And you have too been bitten by the bug called "the cliff hangers" haan???

I cannot play the song right now.. But as soon as I have access to a PC will write and comment on it.

Shirley you have done a great job my friend.. ⭐️

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Friends, I posted without proofreading, was too tired. So pl. excuse any mistakes.

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suku_07

@suku_07

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Finally here I am ...

Great so you FFs also takes a leap 😉😆 ... Your self self thoughts are always awesome ... Loved the beginning...

Loved Armaan- Ashu convo... Armaan as usual understanding and Ashu as usual confused and full of guilt... Kya kar diya mere Ashu ko aapne...😭 but still I am loving it... you were right this FF is deffo for Ashu droolers 😆

Loved the little Ashu-Nidhi scene in cabin... Nidhi's smile is really infectious whether in car or cabin... I was smiling through out...😛

Thanks for telling me about pink city... Yeh toh mujhe nahi pata tha 🤣

Yeh kya kar diya drunk man here also...Its gonna same like Purab of SOL 😕 of Anu's ff...

haaye rabba mein mar java... Again yeh kya kar diya... Ashu helping Nidhi... He came to drop her and then what followed...

Chess oye hoye... I can say this personally... Those who dont like chess you are surely missing something ... So my fav game played by my fav couple kya baat hai... mazza aa gaya...

So after so much requests also Ashu ne gana nahi gaya 😕... Kyu Shirley mera Ashu kitna toh acha gata hai...😡...

Chalo ji I am done... Sorry for the late review ... One more thing I don't think I'll be able to give review of your next update... Sorry in advance... but will make sure i read them on time 😛

Edited by suku_07 - 12 years ago