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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous going mahi...

i dont know how i start from hating your arjuns and end up loving them ☺️

arjuns intensity and determination... when he wanted revenge and now when he wants to protect Arohi! both the times he has proved the strength of his character... now that he knows the truth and has arohi next to him, hes doing everthing in his power to ensure she stays with him and unhurt 👏

i cant beieve kumud can do sumthg like this to her own son! cant she see his happiness???

ur right... i like daddu a lot now 😃

rajveer is not my worry so much as kumud is... the worst she can do is tell arohi the truth but with arjuns love cocconed around her, im not expecting her to break! i do expect her to react though... and what she does after that is what is interesting me now...

why do u think this is going the predictable way? even if it is i love the way you write mahi 👍🏼 also now that the truth is out, thoda prediction and romance is required 😆

take ur time to write if you want. but dont end it thinking we are not interested enough... coz anythign you write becomes the most amazing thing on its own!!!!

btw i love this saleel! he is like arjuns mirror... showing him nothing but the truth 😳

im expecting some dhamaka at rashi rajveer wedding!!! whatever it is i know tht it will be BIG 😃

love you so much mahi... write at your pace and as per your satisfaction! as far as we go, we love anything that comes from you 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
?Note-
1st of all sorry if my words disappointed any of u.I just ned a guideline & heartly thank u to all of u for ur precious words.They helped me alot.
Ok,m continung it wid my 100% & a promise to updt it regularly.But in return i want a promise too.I want truly honest feedback.Jo bhi acha lge,jo bura lge khul kr btao.
Agr ab koi dubara silent hua aur comment krne men lazy hua i ll discontinue it widout Warning!
And da most important Love u my besties.Thank u so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
?Part-24

Jeene laga hoon pehle se zyada


Arjun instantly looked away whenever his eyes met wid any of his employess sitting there.In honest he didnt knew how to ACT as his lovely wife was celerbrating their four month anneversary in complete christan style wedding wid her friends.Strange?What else can u expect from his pagal ladki?He felt her tug on his hand as she signaled him to joing in cake cutting.All da hesitation flew away from his mind.His lips stretched in smile,a complete heartly smile of which he was not aware of days before.The beautiful angel sitting next to him was dressed in pink ball gown wid her hair tied in a stylish bun & a pearl necklace around her neck.The happiness in her eyes were giving her a radint glow,making her look even more beautiful.As she made him cut da cake wid her Saleel continued his pirest comentary"Now u are husband & wife.You may kiss the bride" And to her & everyone surprise he captured her lips in his.The taste of dose soft petals like always made him dazed.She abruptly pulled back herself hearing everyone "wooh".The glare she gave him wid flushed cheeks & swollen lips..It took every unit of energy for him to control himself.She feed da piece of cake to Simi who like Shefali gave back her hug & a friendly kiss.Saleel hardly control his laugh as Jay hold his hands behind his back & only open his mouth for cake. .Ofcourse preventing one more accident.Wid frowned brows she luked at Arjun who was busy in giving death glare to Jay.
Soon their friends left dm to give privacy in this memorable night.Looking around da enchanting V.I.P zone where dy both were alone now,he asked:ab?
Arohi dreamily thought:ab ghutno par bhet kr mujhe dance k lye poucho.
Hearing his "Aaarohi"She instantly started to argue:tum ne kaha tha jo men kahungi wahi hoga.Mera bchpan se khwab tha cinderalla style men wedding celebrate krne ka.
Raising his eyebrow he teased:bchapn se?bdi desperate thi!
Folding her arms across her chest,she snapped:sb hi apni shadi k bare men sochte hen. .kyun tum ne kbhi nhi socha?
"nhi. .shayd kbhi waqt hi nhi mila!"Hearing his honest answer of pain she felt her heart ache.But her face again found colour as he extended his hand while sitting on his knees:agr sochta bhi tha to is haqiqat jitna khubsurat nhi hota.
In da next moment her arms had threw around his neck.The warmth of hug reaching eachother soul.Eyes lock & arms tangld dy swing on da rhythm of their own music.But the crushing of bodies & da teasing breath produced da heat of which dy soon left to their own paradise.
~*~
As he promised dy fly to their destination in next morning in order of their Minni honeymoon.He had here before many times for da buisness purpose but da nature was looking breathtkngly beautiful today.His thoughts broke as his devil wife through snow ball at him.He was not able to move his eyes from da devine beauty.Her shiny black eyes were giving a perfect contrast to white scattered snow.The frosty air playing wid silky hairs falling from her cap.She once again hit him wid da snow & her laughter echoed around as he ran behind her.He caught her from behind.Her struggle made both of them fall dm in a compromising position.Despite of da cold she felt heat rush to her cheeks as she felt purposely
movement of his body against her.
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she shook her head in a big No"jb tk hum fish nhe pakrenge men nhe jaungi"The same answer he had been hearing for 2 hours.Thankfuly he got sight of a boy who was going wid box of fishes.Taking advantage of Arohi absence mind he signaled him.In next moment she felt poke on her shoulder & her jaw dropped seeing four fresh fishes laying btwn them.Giving her "i am da best smirk" he pulled her up & took her away.
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He was almost runing to catch her pace.She was too desperate to view each inch of flower festival.Crazy,Because for him still she was da most beautiful of them.
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She again shook him to wake up.They were sitting in a dark cozy lounge to enjoy concert.But Arjun was not able to bear da Painfully melodious singer.Rubbing his forehead he reminded her:tumhe concert men aane ka shok tha to suno,men kya krun?
Arohi:tum bhi suno,agr tum ab so gaey to men baad men discuss kis k sath krungi?
To Arjun groan she answered:kuch bhi kro par jago.
Her breath caught in throat & eyes snapped open as his hand from her knee slid up in her dress.Then probably She was da one who didnt remembred da single bit of music & lyrics!
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She sat on bed wid a pout:ye chaar din itni jaldi guzar gaey aur abhi to hum ne kuch kya bhi nhi!
Drying his hairs wid towel he questioned back"koi mall nhi choda yahan ka,hr resturant try kr k dekh lya,ek hi jga se teen bar guzar chuke phir bhi hum ne KUCH nhi kya?"
arohi made face on his taunting:aur kya.abhi to meri aadhi se zyada list reh rhi hai.
Arjun sat next to her & teased:honeymoon ki list?Chlo jo baki bch gya wo hum wapis ja kr krlenge.
Arohi slipped back on bed making distance wid him"mujhe pta hai tum konse kaam ki baat kr rhe ho par meri list men aesi koi bhi Cheez nhe hai"
Giving her a heart stolen smile he huskily:to men nai list bnva deta hun.
She snapped:pehle meri list puri hogi phir sochungi.
He suspiciously luked as she took a box from nearby drawer.Arjun:ye kya hai?
Arohi excitdly:ye ludo hai. .ab tum mere sath ye khelo ge!
He streched his arms in laziness:is se ache game ka idea hai mere pass.Lets see who will Come FIRST?
She threw cushion at him understanding his double meaning talk:chup. .gande aadmi.mere sath khelo.
Arjun:hey. .ye mujhe nhi aata.
Arohi excitedly:tbhi mujhe khelna hai.i mean men smjha deti hun.
Than she teach him da rule wid a spice:jis bhi gotti peti gi usko kisi bhi sawal ka jawab dena hoga wo bhi sch.
Arjun:kuch bhi pouch skte hen?
Oh those evil brown eyes!She reminded him:Nothing cheap!
She gave a look to her scatterd cosmetics on dresser:Aur jo end men hara usko koi bhi baat manni pare gi.Done?

Arohi jumped in excitement on her 1st victory:chlo ab btao. .umm tumhara pehla kiss kis k sath tha?
Arjun mockingly:ye cheap nhi hai?
Arohi:ye Kiss hai.
Arjun:Saleel k sath.
Arohi in shock:what?
Arjun calmly:1st standard men tha. .u know buht curious child tha.Sb kuch janne ki jaldi hoti thi is lye mene Saleel par hi try kr lya.
Arohi in horror:aur to kuch try nhe kya tha?
Arjun gave her a look and dn his answer brust her into laugh:aesa experience tha k uske 10 saal baad tk kuch krne ka man nhi kya.
He didnt knew about da game but her musical laughter & twinkling eyes were enough to capture him.He found heat building inside him as she bit her delcious soft lips in disappointment:poucho kya pouchna hai?
Arjun:what r u wearing?
She confused look at herself.She was still dressed in her evening attire.A pair of jeans reaching her mid legs wid a red stylish shirt.To her confused looked he added:neeche.
Wid a complete"haw" look she reminded him:its cheap!
Arjun:its about dressing!
How terribly he wanted to taste dose red strawberry cheeks.Arohi wid heavy eyeslashes:wahi jo pehnte hen.
Arjun tone was enough to produce countless butterflies in her stomach:its red or black?
She instantly checked her upper button on his accurate guess.With dry throat she answered:both.
Hearing his addition"silk or net?..description will help in imagination"she snapped:sawal ek hi pouchna tha.
Instead of her law of "no cheating & no touching" she was helplessly distracted.His meaningful gaze,his evil smile & those wicked questions..she had never imagined dis phase of an innocent game.And dn her bad luck she lose da game from one point.
Seeing her face he taunted:dar lag rha hai?
Arohi tossed her hair back:Arohi kisi se nhe darti,bolo kya krna hai?And remember No Touching.
How can someone look so awfully handsome she thought as he lai on bed wid his arms beneath his head.Arjun:take out Everything u are wearing. .Slowly.
Shock word was not enough to describe her state.It was anger mix wid pleading:Arjun?
He reminded her:its out of touching so now No cheating.

The look in his eyes paralyzed her.It took a supreme effort for her to stand on on her legs.After taking out her earings & ring Her fingers started to open first buttons.As she reached for da 3rd button,snapped:Can u stop starring?
Arjun whose head was resting on one of his hand wid compelete serious face,replied:ye Show kya dewaro k lye hai?
Keeping her eyes away from him she unbuttoned her shirt & slippped out da fabric from her creamy shoulders revealing secret of black silk bara.Her each nerve was pounding on da hell she was doing but just one look at him & she found herself petrified.Her creamy mounds enclosed in black,red sheer fabric completely failed to hide da effect of coolness around or maybe of his gaze.
Her delicate hands reached to buttons of her pant.While her eyes were captured in his magnetic eyes"is dis realy happening?Is she da same Arohi?How his gaze always awake all forbidden sensations in her?Her eyes shut close because of da tinglings in her lower stomach.
She let out a loud gasp feeling his grip on her arm.Her breath interrupted as he hungrily fed on her delicious mouth.A moan from depth of her throat escaped feeling him against softness of her body.His one hand cupped her face while da other roamed on her sexy back.The touch of her creamy skin was making da wait even more harder to him.He was not getting enough of da sweet nector of her mouth.From her back his hand traveled down to softness of her hips.In which reply she gave a soft bite to his tounge.
Her legs turned in jelly as his wicked mouth claimed her sensitive neck.She arched her back in estast pleasure of his desperate kisses.She didnt realized when he free her aching mounds from da barrier.He kept his eyes on her till she was trembling wid desire.Her arms instantly crossed over her treasure in fear. .A fear of wanting him dis painfully.His eyes seemed ocean of passion.While his touch was like fire to her.He pulled her one wrist toward him,lifting her hand to his lips & kissed her in da palm,frevently.She shivered to feel his face against her fingers.Slowly his mouth traveled to his wrist to his arm making her drugged wid each passing moment.Kissing her shoulder he softly kissed her mouth.He moved down her other arm & placed it wid his.His groan so seductive"i love u Arohi"
She was feeling possesd not only physically but with her soul too.While his other hand danced faintly to her belly.His touch was light & slow but seem to bring individual nerve endings into blissful awakening.She pulled her close by throwing her arms around his neck.The bite she gave him on his earlobe made it clear she was ready for wailing,shuddering,melting in cage of his arms.

~*~

No doubt she was extremely happy when da plane landed in Delhi,her home town but there was fear too.Arjun had changed dnt know how.. she could sense.But still she couldnt able to stop herself from worry.Making silent pray to God she came out of airport wid dadi & Arjun.The Ahluwalya family along wid love deep & Rashi welcomed their beloved one wi great love.Even in arms of her father her eyes wandered for him.There was no anger but discomfort was clearly visible on his face.He looked in surprise as she came to him & entwined her fingers in his.Arohi innocently:kya hua?
He smiled & slipped his arm around her back:kuch nhi.

~*~

After a long time laughter was echoing in Ahluwalya paradise.Dadi,love deep,Rashi & Arjun was too there.Love deep:ab Arohi meri bahu hai,to wo ab ladki walo ki trf se hai.mere sath ghar chli ge aur mera hath btaeyga.
DJ:aese kese?Hai to uske bhai ki shadi na?hmare ghar ki ronak hai wo yahe rahe gi.
Arohi ended up da war:tension mt lo. .mere pass good news hai.Remember Chandigarh best wedding planner Purvi?Usne mail ka reply kya,is baar wo manage kre gi.so no need to worry.
Rashi:par ye bahana kafi nhe hai. .mujhe apne bhai,bhabi k sath rehna hai.
Dadu:to theek hai. .Aadha waqt Arohi yahan aur aadha wahan. .apne dono gharo men.Aur wese bhi haveli men to sb ne sath he rehna hai.
Everyone became happy includng Arjun.He had maintand complete silence but dadu could ease on his face.
Hearing da horn outside she stood up & ran outside.Rajveer parked his car & walked to inside completely clueless of da surprise.His eyes became wet wid joy & he instantly took her Chotti in a strong hug.Arohi could not stop her tears feeling da warmth of affection.Arohi:i missed u so much bhai.
He lovingly cupped her face:i missed u too Arohi.He wipped her tears:ab men tumhe kbhi jane nhi dunga. .do nt worry men sb theek kr dunga.Mene tumhare aur Arjun k divorce ki sb tyari kr li hai.Shadi hote hi. .
Realizing his words she pushed away his hands.Rajveer luked at her in shock as she confessed:i love Arjun. .
Rajveer snapped:tum pagal hogi ho?
Arohi made it clear:yehe sch hai aur men us se kbhi alg nhe hungi.
Hurt on Rajveer words she ran away from him.Arjun met her on entrance:dadi aur sb bhi ruk rhe hen to men akele ghar ja rha hun.
Arohi:men bhi sath chlti hun.
He liftf up her chin:tumphe aaj yahe rukna chahey. .Tumhari family hai.
Arohi:par men tumhe nhe chod skti.
Arjun:i know. .tum kahi bhi raho rahogi to Meri.
He gave her an assured kiss on forehead.While leaving caught Amrit staring at him wid a thankful smile.

Precap:Aryan:meri baat to sunno Arohi

Dont forgt to Hit like. .Aur comment jadli.
Thankx 4 reading
love u all
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woop whoop whoop
That honey moon part awsome muahhh love it
Hahaha snow Mara meri devil ne ,
Oh that game sounds interesting , wil add in my fantasy after wo dl ke mehndi tatto , so mahi thnks muahhh
Don't u dare agar mere cute se Arjun arohi ko alag kiya
Kik tht rajveer luchha out of story I want my Arjun arohi
So salil ka intezam kar diya wedding planner ke sath
Chalo achha he lab tak haddi banta
Har bar naya kuch naya
Romance queen
Edited by cooljaya11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

I dnt inw wt changed ur mind..anyways 'THANKS' for updatng..
I liked d chapter... My arjun s nt cheap ;) besharam hai naughty hai par cute hai ...arohi keliye pagal ho gaya hai bechara...thank god arohi confessed it to rajveer.. I hope he realise her love but believing arjun s almst impossible fr him..btw precap s scary...wt aryan want now??? Wt he s gna say to her??
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Posted: 12 years ago
mujhe kavi lagta hai mahi ko aryan se pyar hai...seriously
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moonkmh

mujhe kavi lagta hai mahi ko aryan se pyar hai...seriously


Ja sach he kyun ki Arjun to mera he
But ye aryan grrr
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cooljaya11


Ja sach he kyun ki Arjun to mera he
But ye aryan grrr


i hate aryan..kamina LI pe v tang latkata tha aur yahan v
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phir se Aryan? Yeh Aryan beech mein tapak kyun pada?????

Awesome update Mahi... Besharam, badmaash Arjun.. loved their honeymoon:)

Drama unfolds with rajveer...

Thanks for continuing Mahi:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayeee meri jaan...main bata nhi sakti mujhe iss kameene arjun se kitni mohabbat hai<3 thank u for continuing it! Honeymoon part was so perfect!!! Mera arjun to sweetheart hai...arohi ki har baat ko sar aankhon par rakhta hai..hayeee:* game k liye no comnts * still blushing* they r back in india:( mujhe dar lag rha hai;( mere arjuhi ko aise hi rehne do...rajveer..i h8 him:@ aryan????????? Wat now!!?? Thnx fr this lovely lenghty updt mahi..luv ya...muah!!!!

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