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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
finally riya knows the truth
liked arjun's confession to riya
omg this riya bhi na🤣 she thinks it's just a dream🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
she fainted on shock woahhh🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
ariya moments were nice☺️☺️☺️
riya's parents are coming in 1 hour
omg what's gonna happen next???
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hot hot passion love pain belonging wow
super
i hope riyas parents accept their relationship
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
arjun's emotions were well described👏👏
finally he confessed his feelings to riya
n came to knew abt her n shrre's drama
to jealous liza
riya's parents are back
hope they accept ariya relation
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally ariya ek ho hi gaye.
Awsm updt.
Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Arjun's confession was written beautifully pls continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome mindblowing fantastic update.,arya confessed loved their romance
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lvly update sonu..
back to back update waooo
read boths part together so finaly liza n shree r together n
ariya part is realy nice..
the way arjun ne riya ko samjhaya..
remind her all days thats cute..
n ariya kiss n after romance is so cute loll shree ne sab kharab ker diya..
cant wait to read more update soon..
realy bussy yr sorry for late...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...finaly they are one now...i mean together ther...
How sweetly n calmly he me her understand everything...
But her parents are coming now...
Hop everything will get settled now...
Update soon..n u didn't pm me fr this..y...??
But i guess its my fault..main comments krny main bht zyada hi kanjoos hun...but is ka matoab ye nhi k perhti nhi hun update..m a regular reader of ur both storing s...plzz do pm me nxt tym...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

In car:-

Both are silent...& both are thinking about their kiss before sometime..Riya is looking outside..but still blushing somewhat..while Arjun is trying to concentrate on driving..but he is also trying to control his heart..After sometime..he suddenly hold her hand..

Riya:-Arjun..ye aap kya kar rahe he..?

Arjun:-kya kar raha hu..?sirf hath hi pakada he Riyu..

Riya(try to remove his hand over hers):-no..concentrate on driving..

Arjun:-yes..mera pura dyan driving pe hi he..

Riya(remove his hand):-no..way..muze dikh raha he..aapka concentration kaha he..

She blush..he smiles on that..

Riya dial Shree's phone..

Riya:-uff god..ab ye Shree ka phone kyo nahi lag raha..?

Arjun:-are ab usse kyo phone kar rahi ho..thodi der me toh usase milane hi wali ho na..?

Riya:-muze usase usake aur Liza ke bare me puchna tha..pata nahi kya hua unn dono ka..?

Arjun(smiles,naughtly):-toh jab usaka phone aaya tha..tab tumne usase kyo nahi pucha..?

Riya:-uss waqt aap...

Arjun:-mein...?mein kya..?

Riya(blush):-kuch nahi..

Arjun:-are isame itana blush karne ki kya baat he..ye kaho na ke..mein tumhe kiss kar raha tha..toh tum itana kho gayi thi..ke kuch yaad hi nahi raha..

Riya blushes..

Arjun started laugh..

Riya:-aapko muze chedne me bahot maza aa raha he na..?

Arjun:-haa..bahot..(they have reached to airport..)

Riya:-jayiye..mein aapse baat nahi karugi..(he park his car in parking,she is about to get out from his car..)

Arjun:-waise baat toh muze bhi nahi karni he..hamne aise bhi aaj bahot sari bate ki he..mein ab aur time baato me waist nahi karna chahta..

He come closer to her..& his lips almost touches her lips..but suddenly his phone started ringing..he look to the phone..it's Rathod's call..

Arjun(looking to Riya..):-sach kahu Riyu..tumhara best friend aur mera best friend..dono bhi ek jaise hi he..hamesha galat waqt pe phone karte he..

She blush & smile..Arjun received the phone..

Rathod:-Arjun..kaha ho tum..?aur tumhara aur Riya ka firse zagada toh nahi hua..?yaha pe mein kitana pareshan hu..kabse tumhe phone kar raha tha..dekho tum gusse me Riya kuch jyada mat bol dena..usaki koi galati nahi he..woh log toh sirf Liza ko jalane ke liye drama kar rahe the..lekin tu itana chup kyo he..?kuch bolta kyo nahi..?aur Riya kaha he..?bol toh sahi kuch..

Arjun:-Sam..tum muze bolne ka time doge toh mein kuch boluga na..ab agar teri baat khatam ho gayi ho toh mein bolu..?

Rathod:-jaldi bol..warna muze heart attack aana hi baki reh gaya he ab..

Arjun:-muze sab pata he..unn logo ke drame ke bare me..so you just chill..

Rathod:-sab pata he..?tuze kisane bataya..?Riya ne..?

Arjun:-ha..Riyu ne bataya...

Rathod:-aur Riya kaha he..?

Arjun:-ofcourse mere sath..

Rathod:-tumhare sath..?

Arjun:-haa..

Rathod:-wait wait..kahi tumne usaki sari misunderstanding clear toh nahi kar di..?

Arjun:-bilcul meine aisa hi kiya..aur yahi nahi..meine usse propose bhi kiya..

Rathod:-OMG..aur usane tera proposal..?

Arjun:-yes..accept kar liya..lekin ab aur mat puch..

Rathod(laugh):-puchane ki zarurat nahi..you are my best friend..i know you very well ke usake baad kya kiya hoga tu ne..

Arjun:-shut up..Sam..

Rathod:-accha..toh issiliye..mera phone utane me itani der..sorry haa..tum logo ko disturb kiya na..

Arjun:-stop it..Sam..waise bhi ham log abhi airport pe he..

Rathod:-airport pe..?

Arjun:-haa..Riyu ke mom-dad aa rahe he..dont know ab kya hoga..

Rathod:-don't worry..sab kuch thik ho jayega..lekin sabse pehale ye baat muze Chotu aur Sonali ko batane do..bechare Chotu aur mein yaha office me tum logo ke liye kitane pareshan the..aur Sonali toh ye baat sunakar khushi se pagal hi ho jayegi..ok..bye..bad me baat karte he..

He cuts of phone..he look to Riya..she is hearing his conversation on phone..& smiling..

Riya:-aap kitna tension le rahe ho Arjun..meine kaha na ke mein mom-dad se baat karugi..mein unhe mana lungi..

Arjun(tensed voice):-but suppose agar woh nahi mane toh..

Riya also get tensed..& fall in thinking..

He suddenly starts kissing her madly on her lips..not giving her single chance to response..after sometime he broke of to take breath..

Arjun(his forehead on her's forehead..& he talk with brushing her lips by his..):-tum muze chodake chali toh nahi jaogi na..?

Riya(blush & smile):-kabhi nahi..i promise..

He also smile back to her..they both started walking towards airport from parking area..

They are some distance away from Shree..

Arjun(naughtly):-Riyu..sorry..

Riya:-kyo..?

Arjun(naughtly):-woh..meine abhi tumhe car me aise kiss kiya..tumhe response karne ka mauka hi nahi diya na..sorry..

She blush very much..her hairs which are coming to her face..she put it to ears uncomfortably..Arjun smile to her looking her like this..

Arjun(naughtly,in husky voice to her):-so..i think..tumhe shayad cold drink ki zarurat hogi..actually muze toh zarurat he..(he winked at her.. & leave to get cold-drink)

Riya is looking towards him with her mouth open in 'o' shape..

Riya:-oh..god..

She turn towards Shree..

Shree(shockingly):-Riyu..ye tere sath Arjun sir aaye he..?

Riya:-haa..

Shree:-lekin..?

Riya:-woh sab chod..pehale muze ye bata mere aur Arjun sir ke jane ke baad kya hua..?

Shree told her everything..

Riya:-wow..then..?

Shree:-then..what Riyu..?

Riya(teasing him):-don't you kiss her..?

Shree(some what blushing):-shut up Riyu..

Riya(laugh):-oh..my god..thik he ..thik he..batane ki zarurat nahi..toh fir..?

Shree:-fir..?

Riya:-are..usako dinner date ke liye le gaya ya nahi..?

Shree:-nahi..

Riya:-kyo..?

Shree:-woh..jane de na..

Riya:-nahi bata muze..

Shree:-woh pehale hi bahot blush kar rahi thi..aur fir woh ghar jana chahti thi..so I drop her..

Riya:-waise tu ne aisa kya kiya..jo woh itana blush kar rahi thi..?

Shree:-Riyu..plz..

Riya:-plz..Shree..ab ye mat kehna ..ke usane tuze good night kiss bhi nahi diya..

Shree:-stop it Riyu..

Arjun come to them with cold-drinks..they take it silently..Arjun is keep looking to Riya...while Riya is trying to control her blush..& Shree is enjoying both of them like this..

Riya(to Arjun):-OMG..flight ki announcement ho gayi..mom-dad bas 15 minutes me yaha pe aa jayege..plz ab aap jayiye..

Arjun:-lekin abhi 15 minutes baki he na..

Riya:-plz..plz..you go..

Arjun:-ok..ok..i am going..but come with me for 2 minutes..

He take her a side..

Riya:-what ? kya hua..Arjun.?

Arjun:-give me good night kiss then I will go..

Riya(suprizingly):-what..?no..no..noway..not atall..

Arjun(suddenly,looking to one direction):-are..mom-dad aa bhi gaye..

She also look that direction..Arjun take the chance..& kiss on her cheeks..

Riya look to him without blicking eyes..holding her breath..

Arjun(he winked to her):-good night sweetheart..bye..

He started walking towards exit..with smiling to her..

Riya look here & there..

Riya(in mind):-hey bhagwan..Shree ne ye sab dekha na ho..warna woh toh meri band hi baja dega..

She come to Shree again..

Shree:-ye sab kya tha..?

Riya(worrily,thinking that Shree saw Arjun kissing her):-kya..?

Shree:-Arjun sir tuze iss tarah office se lekar gaye..fir tu ne phone bhi nahi uthaya..fir tum dono muze ek sath airport pe milte ho..aur woh bhi Arjun sir ka full concentration tuz par..aur tu itana blush kar rahi thi..aur ab..woh tuze side me leke gaye..aisi kya baat karni thi tuzse unhe..?

Riya:-woh..woh..

Shree:-oh..ho..Riyu..thik se bata yaar..

Riya told him..how Arjun has misunderstand her & Shree..how she told him about their plan for Shree & Liza..then how he clear her all misunderstandings..& propose her..

Shree:-oMg..unhone tuze propose kiya..?

Riya:-haa..

Shree:-aur tu ne bhi haa bol diya..?

Riya:-hmmm..

Shree(now he get chance to tease her):-fir..?fir kya hua Riyu..?

Riya:-shut up shree..

Shree:-kisika phone nahi uthaya..jab utaya tab meri bato pe dyan bhi nahi tha..aur ye bhi bhul gayi thi ke aaj tere mom-dad aane wale he..sab samaz gaya mein..bilcul samazane ki zarurat nahi..

Riya(started hitting him..):-shree..bas ho gaya..

Shree:-oye..wait..wait..abhi sir ne tuze side me bulaya tha na..kahi good night kiss ke liye..

Riya:-shut up Shree..(she blush..)

Shree:-oye..kitna blush kar rahi he yaar tu..

Suddenly Chotu's call come on Shree's phone..

Shree told him about Arjun & Riya..

Chotu:-are..ye muze pata chal gaya he..Rathod sir ne muze bataya..tu muze kuch aisa bata..jo muze pata nahi he..

Shree:-are batata hu na..Arjun sir abhi Riyu ko airport drop karne aaye the..aur muze lagata he Riyu ne unhe good night..

Riya:-shut up..shut up Shree..

Chotu(laugh):-mein samaz gaya..

Shree:-janata tha..kuch aur teri samaz me aaye na aaye..aisi bate tu jaldi samaz jata he..

Chotu:-haa..woh toh he..

Shree & Chotu continue teasing her..until her parents come..

Shree:-accha chotu..bad me baat karte he..

Shree(muttering in Riya's ear..):-tere mom-dad ko batane ka kya ..?

Riya:-abhi nahi..unka mood dekh ke baat karugi..

Her parents reach..both Shree & Riya take their blessing..& they leave for their home..as her parents are come now..Riya decided to stay at her home..so Shree leave for his home..Riya's mom-dad also go to sleep as they are tired because of travelling..

After sometime her mobile beep..she got a message from Arjun..

(guys..plz..conside this is a message chatting on mobile)

Arjun:-reached to home..& you..?

Riya:-ya..we also reached to home..

Arjun:-you talk with your mom-dad..?

Riya:-no..not now..they are tired.. & sleeping..will talk at morning..

Arjun:-ok..so..?

Riya:-so..what..?

Arjun:-what you are doing..?feeling sleepy..?

Riya:-trying to sleep..

Arjun:-I am also trying..but missing you..

Riya:-miss u too..

Arjun:-aisa lag raha he ke abhi tumhare paas aa jau..

Riya:-no way..we will meet tomorrow in office..

Arjun:-no..i will come to pick up you..

Riya:-no..no..jab tak mom-dad se meri baat nahi ho jati..tab tak nahi..i will come myself..

Arjun:-are you sure..?

Riya:-ofcourse..now..try to sleep..good night..

Arjun:-good night..ya & one more think..i love you..& will always..

Riya:-love you too..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope riyas parents understand them

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