FF: The Healing Touch #2: Ch 10 Pg 92 - Page 32

Thank you so much for the long chapter, I loved it! Finally we got to know Arnav's mystery. Totally not what I expected, one thing I have learned from reading your stories is to expect the unexpected….which in turn makes you a brilliant writer to keep your reader captivated and capture them into your story. The update was so well written from the dialogue to the emotions.

The bonding of the Vandana and Arnav was so nice. He can sense something is wrong with his friend/bhabi and wants to help. The part when she says mr. workaholic and dr. workaholic was hilarious. I loved how she has picked up that there is something between him and Khushi. But off course Arnav decides not to let her in on his secret. Hope he takes her advice and moves on because we all want that for him.

The Arnav and Khushi scene was so touching, from her introducing him to her parents (amazing how you incorporated that into this story) and him revealing his past. Him not believing in love anymore is going to be roadblock because it seems she has fallen for him really bad. Hoping she can "heal" him to love again……"The Healing Touch" The title is perfect!!!