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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
why does every update of yours leaves me with dil maange more...fabulous as always...and double dhamaka so the attraction is at its peak what will they do now in that cave when they are all lost and alone i pity themšŸ˜†
hope will read extra dose of rabba vey in the next updates no trace of past yet its getting more intriguing ...what did she do 10yrs back or did she do things for his benefit only...god knows apart from you so hurry up 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
awesome...!!
what happened to arnav???
w8ng for next..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
I hope Arnav comes to Khushi's rescue.A Cliffhanger!!! update soon.A lot of suspense.Brilliant updatešŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
That was interesting
loved it <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Great update

but so much of mystery

when will we get some hint of their past
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Mystery and romance - loved it! He obviously does not have any feelings for Sheetal so it will be interesting to see why he does what he does in the prologue. I wonder if they had these intense feelings for each other 10 years ago or if it is something which they have just started feeling now?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
So much mystery . Eagerly waiting for the update in which u disclose the past.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Can you imagine by mistake i skipped part 1 and read 2 and was left wondering, was the expedition the condition...and felt the update was too short and abrupt...
Went back, read both the parts and enjoyed it thoroughly...

Some parts of the update reminded me of the Diwali episode...
In part 1 his slowly developing attraction and his inability to keep his eyes off her reminded me of jaadu hai Nasha hai...and the jealousy streak was like a nice tadka to the already spiced up dish...

His changing emotions is surprising me as much as it is surprising him...and I also strongly feel he his giving up on his hatred slowly...his challenges seem lesser to demean her, but more to be with her...

Now coming to the discussion between La and K, it made me feel Khushi is guilty about the past. Which then makes me wonder, considering khushi's characteristics why wasn't she apologetic to Arnav in the begiinning instead of being aggressive and defensive...
I am also guessing that NK will also have an important role to play...is he also connected to the past..my brain is feeling squeezed at the moment..if that can ever happen...

Sheetal has finally made an appearance...although she seems harmless, i still cant stand her...ya crucify me if you want for being biased...as derogatory as it sounds, sheetal is synonmous with 'woh doosri aurat'...šŸ˜‰
it's clear that Arnav has zero emotions for her...so then what leads to the prologue...back to square one...raaz...😔

In part 2...when he bent down to check her ankle reminded me of the anklet returning scene during the Diwali episode...

I just love the essence of silent admiration for each other...
Attention to detail is marvellous...the description of the expedition gave me the feeling of being a participant...

Waiting for Friday...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is by mistake J,,,,,i g n o r e,,,,,!

sorryyšŸ˜•šŸ˜­
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
😃 wow in two parts ...

Wow ... what an update ...
could feel everything what Khushi was feeling just by reading ...
Though the caves look beautiful ... I would never ever want to go in there ...
I think I would die of claustrophobia ... 😲
I must say she was very daring to have gone along on this expedition ...
having no prior experience of anything like this ... šŸ˜•
What is with the two of them ... with the pull of such intense attraction between them ...
they are just driving each other crazy ...

Thanks Juhi for the detailed chapter ...
with so much knowledge of Spelunking in the California Caverns ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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