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Posted: 10 years ago
am stuck🤢

I did not know I left the story in this shape😕

its really a difficult situation

now the question is how will she face Maan? and the other part is how will Maan face Manpreet?😲

confusion hai confusion hai 


😭 main kya karooo????


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Posted: 10 years ago
naintara or geet ek hi hai di or meera villain of the story..

maan is married to (i forgot  name)
and she loves prem..
maan's daughter is not his she is meera's and yash's daughter..

i'm desparately waiiting for updates..
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Posted: 10 years ago


still waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think manpreet ne solution nikal diya tha na...prem se baat karne ke baad I think she decided to break their marriage...
 
 
Kaise bhi story ko twist kar do lekin story ko aage badhao...its nice story...want more of maaneet now...
 
 
 
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no... they were not married, but showing that they were maried for dadi's sake
Edited by Madhuri53 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
have thought about what to write

am going to type now

let's see if I can shape it as I have thought

keep watching

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti

have thought about what to write

am going to type now

let's see if I can shape it as I have thought

keep watching



okies
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti

am stuck🤢


I did not know I left the story in this shape😕

its really a difficult situation

now the question is how will she face Maan? and the other part is how will Maan face Manpreet?😲

confusion hai confusion hai 


😭 main kya karooo????



ab pata chal stories ko beech mai chorney se kya hota hai ...😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar ... Iski toh main story bhul gayi hu... But mujhe aaj tak samajh nahi aaya ki geet ka real name NT hi kyun hai????
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Posted: 10 years ago

me back after long
precap
i know u all lost track of the story

read here

  • Myra is NT's sister ok
  • Myra was classmate of Yash and Maan
  • Yash is twin bro of Manpreet
  • OK Myra had a crush on Maan
  • Myra kept her college things after every semester in HSPur
  • Ok Myra married Yash
  • Pari Yash-Myra's daughter
  • Manpreet and Maan married but
  • but they had their marriage annulled
  • they live together because Myra did not want kids and Maan and Manpreet brought Pari back from Michigan as their daughter
  • NT's husband Dev(whom she divorced) with the help of his bro-in-law Arjun tried to kill NT
  • NT with the help of her bro Brij changed her identity to Geet Handa
  • Manpreet knows this
  • Pari looks like her mother Myra and NT and Myra looked very much same being sisters
  • so Pari looks very much like NT now Geet
hope you got it

Part 14(A)

On their way back Maan talked about Prem and Manpreet was lost in her world.

M: So finally he proposed you

MP: hmm

M: what did he say?

MP: you will not believe Maan, it was nothing like what happens in movies

M: some innovative approach (he laughed)

MP: No, a stupid way

M: Stupid!

And she told him everything; he was laughing his head out on hearing all that

MP: Maan you are embarrassing me

M: No Sweetheart 2, I was just imagining Prem saying Mummy.

And he rolled laughing

MP smiled and joined him

The rest of the day went with MP struggling out of jet lag and the next day she was due for a conference so Maan's love story topic was lost.

When Maan reached office he was told that Geet had fixed a next day appointment. And our Maan was on cloud 9.

He reviewed the notes and called Adi and Sasha to get ready for the meeting with the Sweet Tooth client.

Adi did not fail to notice the enthusiasm in Maan, he talked to Sasha about it

A: is it not amazing how Happy Maan sir is?

S: yes, and obviously he should be happy

A: why? The project is not that big.

S: No, he is happy because it will be his first real architectural project

A: but he designs for our hotels

S: Yes, but this is in real meaning a true project for him

A: I am not getting you

S: see, you are an accounts head

A: yes

S: what are your qualifications?

A: I am a CA

S: ok, now look at this, if some person comes and asks you to do his audit all on your own of some company which is not in hotel industry, how you will feel?

A: good

S: and here also you feel good

A: yes I feel good here also, but I don't get to do much in other fields.

S: now you got my point

A: yes, no doubt Maan sir is so happy

Maan was happy and imagining her everywhere unaware of the fact that his sweetheart 3 has made his sweetheart 1 feel disoriented and low.

In the evening when they returned from their respective works MP asked Maan about his love story

MP: so Maan how's the progress of your love story?

M: I have an appointment with her tomorrow

MP: regarding that township project

M: yes

MP: this is your first outside project

M: yes, and I feel elated, you know, this lady is an enigma, the more I think about her the more I get confused

MP: pardon

M: when she approached me for this project I was surprised

MP: why?

M: she obviously does not expect me to say anything

MP: you being a dumb (laughed)

M: yes, she said that she knew that I don't work outside, but as a planner I should try it out.

MP: she knows that you are an architect planner

M: yes, I was confused and she readily read it, and said that she has read his interviews and in one of the interviews, I admitted that if given a chance I would like to use my education to design something outside

MP: smart girl

M: smarter then you may think, she had a presentation done, and she was very much clear as to what she wants.

MP: impressive

M: she gave me few sketches and you know I think they were mine

MP: what!

M: yes, they seemed to be the ones drawn by me, they were the preliminary sketches that I usually made before finalizing a drawing

MP: where did you keep them?

M: no where I just use to discard them after my final drawing was ready.

MP: then someone from your college must have kept them.

M: but who?

MP: maybe some girl was following you (she smirked)

M: Manpreet, you are too much

MP: three much

M: pardon

MP: I am three much

M: I will have to warn Prem, you not only bite but you also smirk and you also

MP: I also, Maan I also pounce and

M: bounce, don't you think you have gained weight

MP: no

M: yes, poor Prem

MP: Maan

M: and your height has also become less, have you changed the heel of your sandal, try the 6 inch heel

MP: MAAN!

M: MANPREET!

MP: you are dead

M: not me, hi Prem what you are doing here at this hour?

MP turned back and there was no one

M: got you, he is not here, poor love sick puppy MP

And he ran to his room before MP could throw the vase she had on him.

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  Part 14 (B) coming soon

hope you liked the part 13(B),sorry for not updating for months,
now let us see what happens in the next part.
what will NT/Geet do when she comes for the meeting? will she come?
hope things get right.
what will Maan do when he learns that Geet is NT?
now the parts have started merging...

please read it
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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


am typing the next part before i loose track😆