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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

haila my pyari si Di finally u had time to update it 😛, seems like that evry ff that i read is updated today, like this how can i concentrate on my studies 😕 😆 agar kuch gar bar hogai na studies mein to mein mummy, papa ko kahungi ki yeh meri Di aur IF ki vajein se hai 😛 😆
yaar i haven't begun reading it n i'm already blushing 😳
oh bablu aur chintu phir agaye 😕 mujhe phir se terminator ka yaad dila diya 🤢 😆
ahhhhhhhhhh ek spider ab koi ayega mujhe bachaa ne? jai ko send karo 😆 ( mujhe jalan ho rahi hai , mujhe bhi jai ke saath oicnic pe jaana hai 😆 )
tumko aur kaam nahin hai jo mujhe aur shafaq ko badnaam karti rehti ho 😕 😛 🤢 😭, mujhe ab toh meri Di se dar lagne laga hai ... agar yeh ek movie tha tum mujhe koi badnaam na karta 😛
mujhe lagta hai mujhe apne studies mein thoda waqt nikaal kar mujhe jai ko bollywood ke baare mein kuch sikha na chihye 😆 ( hai sochte hue mera haal boora hogaya hai 😆 )... common fav actresses hehe i love madhuri too 😃
abhi abhi school se vapas ayi hoon mujhe bhi chai chahiye, mujhe pasand nahin hai magar jai ki vaje se piloongi 😆... jab mujhe apna jai miljayega tab aissi jaga pe mein bhi likhoongi nancy &... were here 😃 😆
😆 bohot badmaash hogaye ho jai aj kaal
mujhe bhi rona ara raha hai, jab mein apne sasooral jaungi toh mama aur papa ki bohot yaad ayegi😆
haila phir se tumne kaisa end diya 😕 😛
i'm proud of calling u my Di, ur a wonderful writer, excellent, i just love this, mindblowing, thanks for the gr8est ff ever 👏


Hey nancy hun…yaar yeh kya? Agar meri wajah se tumhaari studies mein problem aa gayi toh mujhe bahut bura lage ga…concentrate on your studies dear…haan jab break lo tab padne aa jaana…😊

Aur yeh kya….padne se pehle blushing.😳.yeh kaunsi nayi bemaari hai???😆😆

Jalan toh hum sab ko ho rahi hai…picnic aur jai ke saath would be WOWWW!!!!!😃

Shafu aur tum dono ki harkate hi kuch aisi hai ke badnaam kare bina reh hi nahin sakti…😆tum dono toh kabhi kabhi jai se bhi zyaada naughty ho jaate ho…kya karoon…😆😆dimaag mein tum dono ki baatein dhyaan mein reh jaati hai…toh include kar leti hoon….sorry!

"mujhe bhi rona ara raha hai, jab mein apne sasooral jaungi toh mama aur papa ki bohot yaad ayegi " 😆

Yaar tum aisi baatein karti ho na…meri haalat kharaab ho jaati has has ke😆…ur so funny!!!😆 😆Lekin mujhe bhi bahut rona ayega jab tum sasooral chali jayegi….😭

Tumne to bahut tareef kardi meri…mein itni bhi great nahin hoon..bahut saare aache writers hai…I'm just crazy…write crazy things!!!
Thank u …….Mwah!🤗
Taz!😊

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: india9

thanks taz for that mindblowing part. 😛 it was really amazing..and the camping idea was fantastic too. Why not apply to balaji for writing scripts 😳 ...im sure they would take you 👏
Jai seems to be an expert in flirting 😆 😆 what say??the title of the next part sounts really romantic too....plz continue soon
just to let u know you have the greatest fanfic ever.... 😛 😛 😛 and another 3 cheers for u! 👏


Yaar ur being funny…me writing scripts for ekta…haha!! 😆😆Apply kar loon…phir toh sab har waqt blush hi karte rahenge…😉

And.. "greatest ff ever" oh no!!! There are far better ones than this….but if u think so….thank u!!! I'm over the moon!!😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hi friends….sorry for the delay in posting the update….i know lot of us have become depressed with the way KS has gone….well I will aim to keep the romance alive in my ff. Hope I can continue to write romantic stuff…becuz I haven't seen those episodes yet where the truth has come out...once I do…I will probably get depressed myself…then u guys will have to cheer me up!!! 😆
Anyways here's the next part…there are two parts to this…
Taz!


Part 41 – Raat Baaki…Baat Baaki…hona hai joh…ho jaane do!!! (Part 1 of 2)

Jai gathered wood for the fire, (now this is a small fire…so don't expect him to go out in the woods with an axe…yaar aas paas thoda bahut wood para hoga! 😆….even then if u want… imagine him chopping wood!! (sigh) 😉 😆 )

Bani on the other hand, made herself useful by preparing the tent…(for god knows what…saune ke liye of course! 😆 ) and their evening meal. She set up two lanterns one on the tent and the other in the centre of the picnic blanket. She also set up plates, glasses and began unpacking some of the food she had brought.
Jai put all the wood together close to their picnic spot, lit a match and flicked into the wood. He glanced at Bani who was busy unpacking the food…but sensed Jai was looking at her. She look his way and gives him a sweet smile 😊 …Jai pokes the wood around in the fire using a twig...then moves back over to Bani.

Bani: Mr. Walia…mein bas isse garam kar deti hoon…(getting up..with a few steel containers)

Jai (stopping her): Bani lao mujhe de do…mein kar deta hoon..tum baitho…waise in sab mein hai kya?

Bani: Is mein soup hai…isse mein chhole…aur iss mein aap ke favourite kofte!!!

Jai 😊 : Mmmm sounds great…will taste even better..tumne joh banaya hai…tumhe mujhe khush rakhna khoob aata hai….

Bani: Well they do say "a way to a man's heart is through his stomach!!!"

Jai: But Bani u found your way into my heart first!!! ❤️ …(takes the containers over, heats them and brings them back over to Bani…a few minutes later ) (note guys…they don't have stove…khana chhote fire pe rakh ke garam kiya hai…just in case anyones is unsure how Jai heated the food….yaar bahut sawaal poochte ho aaj kal 😆…need to clarify u see! 😆 )

Bani serves him and is about to serve herself when…

Jai: Bani Ek hi plate se khaate hai na…that way I can feed u and u can feed me…(aur mujhe kaun khilayega? 😔 😆 )

Both feed each other, enjoying their meal.

Jai: Bani, this feels nice…(gazing into her eyes as he feeds her)….and the food is great too…ji karta hai ke banana waale ke haath bhi kha jao!! (biting her finger as she feeds him!)

Bani: Ouch! (giggles)…baad mein kha lena??

Jai: Is that for dessert then??? 😉

Bani: Nahin dessert mein aapko kheer doongi…

Jai: Kheer bhi hai….(all excited)….Bani tum toh sab kuch yahaan pe le aaye ho…kuch bhooli toh nahin?

Bani: I was gonna bring the kitchen sink…Lekin phir maine socha aap uthayenge kaise!!! (laughs 😆 )

Jai: Accha dessert, mein kheer hai…toh bedtime treat mein tumhaare khoobsoorat haath milenge kya??

Bani: Maybe…that's if I don't doze off!

Jai (worried): Bani, plz aisa mat bolo…dekho na kitni haseen raat hai…khula aasman…chaandni raat hai…itne saare tare ⭐️ ⭐️ …(Haiiii Jai.. mein marjava itni romantic baatein!! 😳 😳)… Koi aise maahaul mein sau sakta hai? ❤️

Bani (smiles..gulps down some juice, then changes the topic): Aap ko aur kuch chahiye….

Jai: Nahin Bani, bas…mere do sweet dishes ke liye jagah toh bacha na haina…I'll start with the kheer…(Bani pulls out a small tub and feeds him again…)…great….kitni acchi biwi ho…mere sab favourite cheeze bana kar laye ho…tum bhi khao na…(taking the spoon off her)

Bani: Nahin I'm full…

Jai: One spoon…come on…mere liye?? (mere muh mein daal do Jai…woh na keh rahi hai! 😆 )

Bani: Okay…(takes a spoonful)

Jai: Ab ek aur le lo..plzzzz….this ones for junior…(Bani takes it…)

Jai: Aur ek….(Bani cutting in)

Bani: Nahin plz…ab nahin…aap kahiye…(Jai finishes off the kheer…then helps Bani clear away)

Jai: Chalo Bani ab khana bhi kha liya…(coming close to her…whispering in her ears)…ab kya karen??? 😉

Bani (being funny): Lets go swimming!! 😆

Jai: Not a bad idea…chaandni raat mein tairna….lekin tumhe thand lag jayegi na…wouldn't be wise…waise swimming toh hum yahaan baith kar bhi kar sakte hai…tum meri ankhon mein doob jao mein tumhaari…. ❤️

Bani: Khayaal accha hai…(blushing…😳 looks into his eyes)…lekin pehle mujhe ji bhar ke tare gin na hai!!! ⭐️ (lies down on the blanket…starts gazing up at the stars…she pulls Jai down too making him lie down…both their heads touching.)…kitne saare tare hai…kitne chamak rahe hai… ⭐️ ⭐️

Jai: Hmm

Bani: Woh taraah kitna bright hai…(points) ⭐️

Jai: Kaunsa woh wala na…(reaches out to her hand in the air…entwines his fingers…then runs his hand down her arm!! 😳

Bani, feeling ticklish…nudges his head…he brings her hand down and starts kissing it…softly..but Bani pulls it back suddenly!

Bani: Woh dekhiye…(sitting up)…Shooting star!!! ⭐️ (closes her eyes and makes a wish)

Jai, sitting up, watches her as she makes the wish

Bani (opening her eyes): Mr. Walia… aap ne kya wish kiya?

Jai (staring): Kuch nahin….

Bani: Nothing!

Jai: Whatever I ever wished for is right here with me…aur kuch nahin chahiye…

Bani (rubbing her arms a little): Aap bahut romantic mood mein hai aaj….

Jai: Shayad is chaandni raat ka asar ho raha hai (hope he doesn't turn into a werewolf or something!! 😆 )…waise Bani tumne kya wish kiya?

Bani: Maine wish kiya ke hum dono har saal yahaan Mount Abu mein aaye…aur aise hi enjoy kare…agle saal hum ayenge na…tab toh hum baby ko bhi saath laayenge…

Jai (smiling): I will bring u back here whenever u want sweetheart…I know this place means a lot to u…(noticing her shivering)…Bani bahut thand lag rahi…ek minute…(goes and gets a blanket…bends down and wraps her…but Bani wraps his arms around herself too..so he sits down with her and she snuggles up!!) ❤️

Bani: That feels much better…it can get pretty cold out here in Mount Abu…aur yahaan oonchay pe toh kuch zyaada hi thand lage gi…

Jai: In that case we will have to keep each other nice and warm…like this..(hugging her 🤗 )…Bani pata hai…I can't wait for junior to come…I'm sure…woh bilkul tumhaari tarah hoga!

Bani: Goody Toe Shoes type hey??

Jai (chuckling): Whats wrong in that? He won't get up to much mischief then…will behave himself and become a responsible human being!

Bani: Mein chahti hoon woh bilkul aap ki tarah ho!

Jai: Lekin mein toh bahut bigad gaya hoon..tumhi kehti ho!!! 😆

Bani: Haan…(pinching him)..bahut bigde hue hai…lekin phir bhi aap… strong hai..charming hai…handsome…caring…gentle…sweet. Usski muskaan bhi aap jaise ho…kyunki jab aap haste hai toh mera poora din accha jaata hai…(mine too!!! 😉 )

Jai: Meri tarah nikla toh woh ladkiyon mein kaafi popular hoga…(sounding all chuffed!)

Bani (thinking..then answering): Aap kyun itna khush ho rahe hai…aap bahut popular hai isiliye??

Jai: Kya karoon…meri personality hi kuch aisi hai ke ladkiyan fida ho jaati hai…(Bilkul sahi kahaan Jaanu!! (sighs) )…kyun jalan ho rahi hai??

Bani (miffed): Jalen mere dushman!!! 😡… (Hope ur not referring to me and my fellow readers!!)…aap par fida hone ka haq sirf mera hai…!!!

Jai: Oooh getting possessive are we?? (laughs 😆 )…lekin tum bhool kyun rahi ho..hum bhi toh sirf aap pe hi fida hai…(Yehi toh rona hai!! 😭 )

Jai, continues to ramble about himself…and Bani listens silently. She remains silent for quite some time..when

Jai: Bani…chup kyun ho? Am I boring u? Bani! (bends his head a little and sees that she has nodded off again!!! (Haila!! 😲 )…Hey Bhagwaan!!! Yeh neend hi meri dushman ban gayi hai! Its become a crime to even hold her now…baahon mein aate hi madam chain ki neend farma ke sau jaati hai..itni romantic jagah pe bhi yeh sau gayi itni jaldi…(shakes his head in disappointment 😔 …looks at her once again)…aur phir yeh itni pyaari lagti hai jab woh sauee hui hoti hai…ke disturb karne ka bhi mann nahin karta. Chalo Jai…(sighing as he carefully gets up…picking her up in the process)..isse sulaa do tent mein.

Jai walks over to the tent..(okay tinks, the tent is big enough for two people and can enter it easily without too much bending...not that I'm asking u to go and check it out...just for ur info!! 😆 )…bends his head a little and puts Bani down. Rests her head on a pillow and covers her with two warm blankets…kisses her forehead.
He then makes his way back outside…sits down by the fire…pokes the wood around with a twig…looking into the flames. (bechaara akela reh gaya…mein chali jaoon..company dene?? 😉 😳 )

He sits there…for quite some time…occasionally glancing into the night sky to look at the stars…when hands come over his shoulder and wrap him around the neck warmly…

...to be cont!!!!


getting excited?????? Hehehe 😉 😆….What next I hear u ask??? 😳….So u want the follow up to this one pretty quick?? plz keep them comments coming!!
Taz!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Me first 😊

Haila your title tracks are just too good.Lovely update Taz.

Mujhe bhi dinner mein sarra khaana khana hai bahut bhook lagi hai- have a fast

Please post the next innocent 😳 part soon

Edited by msrk - 19 years ago
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me second 😛 😉

haila...tazzooooo...i think i might just die..of blushing 😳 ....actaully i have officially died 😳 ..afat reading that 😳 😳 ....haila...jai..kitna romantic hai 😳 😳 😳 ...haila..tinks toh shram si pani pani hogaee 😆 .....and tink is hungry aswell..ok..i will shut up..varna jhote parenge 😆 ...and haila..thanx for clearing out the tent thing 😉 ...see i do ask gud questions 👏 ......aaauuurrrrr bani 😡 😡 😡 ..phie si sogaee 😆 ...but i think she is bck 😆 ..itne raat ko..biwi hai uski paas 😳 ...koi junglie jannwar toh nahi aah sakhta 😆 ...kyun teek khaha tink ni 😛 aur hain i luuuuvvvvvv kheer to.......great update tazooo...keep it up jaan 👍🏼 this has to bhi one on the best...update ki MAA 😆 ....hahahahahaha..thanx 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: msrk

Me first 😊

Haila your title tracks are just too good.Lovely update Taz.

Mujhe bhi dinner mein sarra khaana khana hai bahut bhook lagi hai- have a fast

Please post the next innocent 😳 part soon

Bhook lagi hai...awwwww....mere yahaan aa jao!!! 😆
....."next innocent part"...now thats an understatement!!!😳😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
Tazzzoo jaaannuu !!! ufff i am ssoo glad aaj tumnee updatee kar liyaa ...aur vo bhi mere ronee ke pehle hii !! ....woooww !! 😃 😃 ek dum khush kar diya mujhee yaarrr !!! 😃

such a tremendousss updatee !! ...siumplyyyy beautiful yyaarr u r tooo goood with this ! .. wowerzz yaarr ek dum fab ! ..loved it ! 👏 👏

awwww blesss Jai ..is cuha cutiee !! ahheemmm kuch zyaada hi thandi nahi ho gaye hai ! 😳

awwww blesss...aisaa kya wish kar rahi hoo !! Bani ! ahheemm humee poorrii detail mein batoogii 😉

awwww.... i was likee damn she slept again ! ...but i am glad ..abhii uth gayee hai ! .shukkarr ..iskaa matlab next part mein mai aapnii aankhein band karne ka intezaam akr leti hoo !! 😆

Thankiess hun ..for a superbb updateee !! ... 😃 andd i am soo glad .. is part mein to u didnt do no badnaami to me ...which is good ! ...phewww savedd !! ! 😃 😃 pleaseeee updatee sooon....and sooonn matlab soon..will be waiting eagerllyy for the nxt partt !! ...

Shafaq ! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: TINK

me second 😛 😉

haila...tazzooooo...i think i might just die..of blushing 😳 ....actaully i have officially died 😳 ..afat reading that 😳 😳 ....haila...jai..kitna romantic hai 😳 😳 😳 ...haila..tinks toh shram si pani pani hogaee 😆 .....and tink is hungry aswell..ok..i will shut up..varna jhote parenge 😆 ...and haila..thanx for clearing out the tent thing 😉 ...see i do ask gud questions 👏 ......aaauuurrrrr bani 😡 😡 😡 ..phie si sogaee 😆 ...but i think she is bck 😆 ..itne raat ko..biwi hai uski paas 😳 ...koi junglie jannwar toh nahi aah sakhta 😆 ...kyun teek khaha tink ni 😛 aur hain i luuuuvvvvvv kheer to.......great update tazooo...keep it up jaan 👍🏼 this has to bhi one on the best...update ki MAA 😆 ....hahahahahaha..thanx 🤗



yaar ur dead!!! Nahinnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆 Ab agla part kaise padho gi??? You have have to come back....Jai ko bhejoon mouth to mouth dene ke liye?😉 But u know what when u do read the next part...phir se mar jaogi....😆😆

U like kheer...me too...i was eating some at the time...thats why i thought Jai shud hav sum 2!!!😆😆

and yes u do ask good questions...glad i could clear things out for u!!! 😆....Aur raat biwi ke alava, junglee jaanwar ke alava.. hum sab bhi haina ready to pounce on Jai at any given moment!!! 😆😆😆


an as for this being the update ki MAA....well i will have to correct u there..the next one is DEFINETLY the Mother of all updates!!!!!!😆😳😳

Thanx yaar for commenting...time mil hi gaya kyun!!😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Taz234

yaar ur dead!!! Nahinnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆Ab agla part kaise padho gi??? You have have to come back....Jai ko bhejoon mouth to mouth dene ke liye?😉But u know what when u do read the next part...phir se mar jaogi....😆😆U like kheer...me too...i was eating some at the time...thats why i thought Jai shud hav sum 2!!!😆😆and yes u do ask good questions...glad i could clear things out for u!!! 😆....Aur raat biwi ke alava, junglee jaanwar ke alava..hum sab bhi haina ready to pounce on Jai at any given moment!!! 😆😆😆an as for this being the update ki MAA....well i will have to correct u there..the next one is DEFINETLY the Mother of all updates!!!!!!😆😳😳Thanx yaar for commenting...time mil hi gaya kyun!!😉




oooooommmggggg 😲 ....haila...tazoo..mouth to mouth with jai 😛 ...mind u.... u suggested it...ok 😃 😃 😃 ..i think i should shut up ..before things get outta hand 😆 😆 ....yaar...sacchi mein i have started the blushing again 😳 ...and haila..i was gonna commment for this part 😃 ..though i am gonna quote the whole page 😉 😉 😉 ..and comment on each line 😃 😃 😃 ..is wht i meant 😉 haila..so the nxt one is gonna be update ki MAA 😃 😃 😃 ....ok i am really looking forward to the nxt part...chaldi karo naa tazji 😃 ....and yep anyone of us are ready to pounce on jai 😳 .....bas bani rani ki hatne ki der hai.... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

Tazzzoo jaaannuu !!! ufff i am ssoo glad aaj tumnee updatee kar liyaa ...aur vo bhi mere ronee ke pehle hii !! ....woooww !! 😃 😃 ek dum khush kar diya mujhee yaarrr !!! 😃

such a tremendousss updatee !! ...siumplyyyy beautiful yyaarr u r tooo goood with this ! .. wowerzz yaarr ek dum fab ! ..loved it ! 👏 👏

awwww blesss Jai ..is cuha cutiee !! ahheemmm kuch zyaada hi thandi nahi ho gaye hai ! 😳

awwww blesss...aisaa kya wish kar rahi hoo !! Bani ! ahheemm humee poorrii detail mein batoogii 😉

awwww.... i was likee damn she slept again ! ...but i am glad ..abhii uth gayee hai ! .shukkarr ..iskaa matlab next part mein mai aapnii aankhein band karne ka intezaam akr leti hoo !! 😆

Thankiess hun ..for a superbb updateee !! ... 😃 andd i am soo glad .. is part mein to u didnt do no badnaami to me ...which is good ! ...phewww savedd !! ! 😃 😃 pleaseeee updatee sooon....and sooonn matlab soon..will be waiting eagerllyy for the nxt partt !! ...

Shafaq ! 😛
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Shafu baby....i'm glad i didn't make u cry😃....tumhaara ansoo girne se pehle hi update kardiya!!!😆 😆 Maine tumhe badnaam bhi nahin kiya!!!😃

Aur yeh kya? Tum next part ke liye abhi se intezaam kar rahi ho apni ankhen bandh karna!!! Did u want details or not!!!😆 😉 U confuse me girl!!!😆😕

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