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Posted: 12 years ago
Update more...everything is in ur hands...,.write as the way u feel right to the concept...,...continue soon...take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
that's what makes this story more different n unique, despite of not having big twists & turns, it is still intriguing , simple n yet amazing..
And if Manvi accepting Virat is the end of the story .. so i dnt want her to ever accept virat 😛..
btw i'm totally in love wiz this charming virat..wer can i find him??

n abt part 18.. it was freaking awesome.. i like ur style of writing..simple yet perfect ❤️...
"If you want to hug me' Then just do it. Don't borrow excuses from National Geographic channel" he said enigmatically. " i still can't get this line out of my head..
n ya manvi is a confusing soul but from now on i think all ur readers will only praise her ..lol
can't wait to see virat's reaction concerning the "divorce'' update soon!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
Just started on the first chapter and it was simply amazing

Love your style and your dialogues are to die for.

Edited by NushIsh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanhus



this one is never gonna change!!!



Wat u seee evil soul can do much better then a good soul so yaaa hahaha I won't mind virat being a bad boy!! But this Lina is a good soul :/ psh .. Will try to compell her once again hahahah
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria12345



Wat u seee evil soul can do much better then a good soul so yaaa hahaha I won't mind virat being a bad boy!! But this Lina is a good soul :/ psh .. Will try to compell her once again hahahah


You love spreading your evil wings around everyone 😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
I guess i don't want u to wrap so early !!~~ i want 6-7 parts more if possible :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow great one 😊
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read all 18 parts in one go, you had me hooked from the beginning and now I cant wait for you to update.

Also please don't end it now, this is so beautifully written I want to see more of Virat trying to pursue Manvi.

You have portrayed this Virat so flawlessly wish the world had more guys like him.

As for Manvi, her character is understandable, she will take a while to trust Virat but she is getting there slowly but surely.

the best part of this are your dialogues. Love them to the core.

Now have to wait, for the next update.


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Posted: 12 years ago
No no no...dont wrap up plz...
Take your story the way you have planned it to be...
Itz just our reaction...dont change the story plots according to our reactions...
If you do so then there will be no surprises on our face to read as we already would be knowing the future updates...
So just enjoy we jumping up and down every time you update and continue the way you planned...
😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lina that was again an mindblowing update 👏👏 where were u lost girl we were waiting for ur update 😊
i just loved it ❤️
virat kissed her on her cheek eekhs!!! ❤️
it was awesome 😃
virat's father came to ask manvi 😲
what would happen next now?
manvi asked virat for divorce 😲
OMG update asap 😃

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