Fan Fiction-Sindoor!! - Page 137

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumayya

Wow! OMG..LOL..The last time I read, it was Dhruv's b'day and Ved had just found out she was pregnant! 😆 Aur ab? Hamare hero-heroine to das mahine ke bache ka maa baap bhi hogaye 👏 Well done guys!! Some realllly CUTE scenes 😉

I have been realllly busy 😭 We are having our kitchen done and our house is such a MESS! 😭 To top it all, there were exam results and uni stress 😭 But thank God results went really well 😳 And Uni stuff is sorted out 😃

Reema jaan..I'm sorry things didn't work out as well as you hoped! But don't let it discourage u okay! U've still got 2nd year to make it up with...and don't let it stop u having some fun on IF! 😉 After all, all work and no play makes Reema a dull girl 😛 Trust me girl...if u balance work and play, things will go really well! And besides, I'd miss u too much 😳

I'll be off to Birmingham in October, and although I'll still have access to net, I don't know wether I shall be online much either But i'll write a few scenes before I go 😉 We need some hotness 😆 what say?

Lol..okay thats enough from me...just to apologize for not writing for a while and to let u guys know Im still alive 😛 ..I havent forgotten u guys! Love u loadz 😳

C u soon! Once there's some order in my house 😆 busy busy busy at the mo🤢

Love, Sumayya

Summmmmmmmmmm Puttar...tum aagayi!!😆 I hope I don't turn dull! I will try and come on IF as much as possible! Good luck at UNi! yeh plzz write some hot scenes!!😳😳 I missed my puttar and her scenes A LOT!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
great part 👏 👏 👏 plz cont soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
hEY GUYS: u no wat i think will happen...i think that they will get the baby and everyone will be happy and all...buh then randomley the baby will have some kinda problem since no show can go on so smothley....buih maybe they will pass by like three or 4 years and then the baby will be a lil older and then will be kidnaped blah blah blah....ved:druv hamerea sath aisa hamesha kyon hota hai??....druv:yeh to main bhi nahi jantha yeah to sirf oper valei ke marzi hai

lol..i think that will happen because all dramma's have these kinds of twists 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
DON'T U THINK THAT NIHARIKA IS GONNA END UP WID ANTRIKSH...WELL IF NOT I THINK NIHARIKA SHOULD HAVE PITY ON MY LANGRA(CRIPLED MAN)..LOL
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Posted: 20 years ago
THESE R GONNA BE THE CUTEST PARTS
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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 104 (i think)

Its a cat and mouse game..... Vedika is running... somehow she seems to lose them and she sneaks into Aryan's room!!!

The recep.. calls Dhruv..... on his cell

Dhruv gets up

Dhruv: Hello???? (sleep)

TR: Hello Sir..... ur wife has causing a havoc in the hospital

Dhruv: My wife?? My wife is here....

He looks and she's not there.... he quickly gets up... changes clothes and drives to the hospital

He comes there

Dhruv: Where's my wife??

TR: Dont know!!!! She ran that away!!!

Dhruv: (He thinks and thinks) Oh.... It isnt hard... i know where she is!!!

TR: (Confused) Where??

Dhruv: Follow me!!!!!!

They go into Aryan's room.... and she's sleeping next to him!!!

Ahhh.. this is why i dont write early i have to go!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
great part 👏 👏 👏 plz cont soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was great but way too short, plz continue soon, i cant wait to read it
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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 105

The recep and Dhruv see Ved sleeping

Dhruv: Look i am really sorry for this!!!

Recep: Its okay!! But you know

Dhruv: Just let her stay!!!! She wont rest in peace and she wont spare you either!!!!

She agrees and Vedika stays!!!

Dhruv sits on the chair and falls asleep

Next Morning:

Vedika wakes up and finds Aryan awake....

She sees him and kisses him

Dhruv wakes up and sees Vedika

Dhruv: Vedika

Vedika is shocked!!!!!

She slowly turns around and looks at Dhruv...... and has that "I"m Busted" look!!!

Vedika: Dhruv tum?

Dhruv: Yes!!! What were you doing last night?

Vedika: I was...

Stutters

Dhruv: I Know everything that happened!!!!!! What were you thinking? this is a hospital for crying out loud!!!

Vedika: I know!!! But i had to be w/ him!!!

Dhruv: Cant you see he is fine!!!

Vedika: I know.. But Dhruv please be quiet!!! Calm down... this is a hospital!!!

Dhruv: Fine......

Dhruv takes Vedika hand and takes her out of the hospital

Dhruv: here i can yell out here cant i ? Your telling me not to yell and you yourself created a havoc here!!!

Vedika is sad!!!

Dhruv: (Calms down) I know you missed Aryan.... but the rules are rules!!!! We dont and cant make the rules here!!! You have to understand that!!!! I told you this before and i will tell you again..... he will come home!!!!!

Vedika: I Know but..

Dhruv: But what......... keep this stubornness to ur self!!

Vedika: Stubborn???? You are calling me stubborn????

Dhruv: YEs!!!! How many people told you that you cant go inside??? How many?

Vedika: I dont know...

Dhruv: A lot!!! And you didnt listen... instead the poor people were chasing behind you!!

Vedika: Dhruv.. why are you yelling?

DHruv: WHy am i yelling?? You are asking me why am i yelling??? I get a call in the middle of the night telling me ... on the phone that my wife snuck in.... and the nurses are chasing her!!!! And next thing i know i dont find you sleeping next to me!! If i dont yell then what do i do!!!!

Vedika: I am sorry dhruv... i

Dhruv: Sorry????? You shouldnt say sorry to me... you should go and apologize to the people you troubled!!!!!!

Vedika is like...."I made a really big mistake"

Vedika goes back inside and tells everyone she is sorry!!!!

They all forgive her.... infact they understand... they dealt w/ people like her before!!!!!!!

Vedika and Dhruv see Aryan once more b4 they leave....

Vedika gets into the car....

Dhruv doesnt talk to her and Vedika...is looking out the window and Dhruv's words are echoing in her ears!!!

Vedika starts crying... tears are going down her cheeks!!!!

They arrive home....... Vedika quickly wipes her tears and gets out of the car!!!!!

Everyone is there at the breakfast table...

Kavita: Arre... come on ur just in time!!!

Dhruv doesnt say anything

Vedika just quickly goes upstairs w/o saying anything!!! Dhruv just looks at her

Dhruv follows her as well....

VEdika is taking out clothes for herself.... and when she hears Dhruv walking in.... she just goes and takes a shower

Dhruv: Vedika i know you are mad at me.... but what i told you is for ur own good!!!!!

Little does he know that Vedika heard that!

That whole day they dont talk to each other!!!

Vedika is just lost in her world.... One way thinking about Aryan and the other to what DHruv said

Dhruv is just looking at her from far away

Dhruv sits on the bed next to her

Vedika quickly wipes a tear!!!

She doesnt say anything and just goes to sleep and turns the other way!!!

Dhruv gets sad..... and he also goes to sleep and faces the other way!!!

Both of them are crying!!!! But w/o the other one knowing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Okay the end!!!!!!

Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
aww that was very good, plz continue soon, i no i sound impatient but im really addicted to this fanfic and cnt wait to see what happens next, so plz plz plz plz continue soon

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