Taarey FF:love began unwantedly(Part 18 Pg 34 UPD) - Page 11

U hav seriously written a nyc ff
just read all d 12 parts n all of them wer really gud
plz updt nxt part soon

awesome update...

Taani and Abhi are enemies lol
They fight like little kids lol, I love how Reyam are confuse all the time about why Taani and Abhi are fighting lol
Superb update

awesome update

awsm👏

Wow di superb part
Taabhi fight was so funny
Thanx for PM
Sry for late comment too
Update soon n PM me

Hey guyz!!! How are u all?? Sab thik hi honge right….. But main thik nahi hun……Main bahut jyada sad hun….. Mujhe bilkul bhi acha response nahi mil raha hai apne FF me…..Yr kitni muskil se itna lamba update likhti hun par tabhi agar koi acha response nahi milega toh kaisa lagega…… Baki writers toh ache se samajhte hai na phir bhi comment nahi karte……..Anyways ye mera hamesha ka kehna hai par koi comment hi nahi karta……Agar iss baar mujhe acha response nahi mila toh main update karna band kar dungi……Mark my words ok main sahi me update karna band kar dungi……..So here is the next update……Enjoyy…..

Part 13

It was early morning…….Sunrays took their path through the window and fell on a beautiful face disturbing her peaceful sleep…….Getting irritated she took over blanket on her face…… Now alarm disturbed her sleep……..She woke up and sat on her bed with a big smile on her face…… Stopped alaram ring and wished her Krishna ji……

Taani : Thanqq Krishnaji….. For such a gr8 life ahead……Mujhe pata nahi tha ki aapne mere liye itna kuch aage ke liye bacha ke rakha tha……Hope aage bhi meri life itni hi achi rahe……Aur haa don't be involved in me only do take care of my sweet bhai, my best friend and everyone around me….. And ya take care of urself also(with a big smile and in ordering tone) So now I'll go or else I'll be late for my rehersals……

After talking to her Krishnaji, she stood up from her bed and made her way towards washroom……. Within half an hour she got ready and left for college informing her bhai….. Soon she reached her college and was walking towards the entrance while checking something in her bag…… And here someone parked his bike and turned to walk…….Here Taani was walking and just then she collided with someone's hard chest and was about to fall but that person hold her with her waist protecting her from falling……Taani was scared so she closed her eyes tightly so that if she fell down that cant feel that much pain……She was expecting that she will fell down and touch the ground, but she felt pair of hands around her waist…….She felt safe in his arms……Slowly she opened her eyes to see who it is……When she opened her eyes she saw a pair of chocolate brown eyes staring at her…….For a while she too got lost in his eyes……But soon came back to her sense and made herself stand straight…..The person also came to sense and helped her to stand straight…..

Taani : Hi Rey….(Yes guyz he was Rey aur kkon ho sakta hai itni subha clg me)

Rey : Hey….(with a smile)

Taani : Hmm good today on time haa…..not bad….

Rey : Yup…..ab kal tumne itna lecture diya so aana hi tha taki aaj phir tum lecture na do….(said in mocking way…and saw that Taani was glaring at him so he stopped and said) I was just joking yr…….

Taani : Hmm good….

Rey : So lets go warna tum aur lecture dogi….(smirking)

Taani : YOU(and Rey ran from there and Taani followed him….)

Soon they reached RH…..Now they both were tired so stopped and bend down and were panting…… But in the process Taani's breathing got heavy and was caught with an attack…….Rey saw this and worriedly went to her and asked her to first calm down and tried to take out the pump from his pocket……But soon Taani took out her pump from her bag and took her doze…….Now she was alright…..Rey gave her water…..She drank and sat making mirror as her support at her back and head and closed her eyes…… Rey came to her…

Rey : Are u fine Taani??

Taani (opened her eyes and saw worried Rey so she smiled and said) Yes buddy I'm fine….

Rey (took a sigh of relief and sat beside her) : Sorry….

Taani (turned to him) : Why are u saying sorry???(with confused face)

Rey : Who maine tumhe itna dodaya so….

Taani (cutting him at middle) : wait tumne mujhe nahi dodaya main khud dodi hun……. Yr mujhe doodna aata hai yr tumne mujhe nahi sikhaya ki aisa bolo….

Rey looked at her with confusing face….Now Taani started laughing…..Soon Rey understood what she said and he to joined her……

Taani (stopped laughing and said) : Okay tumhe sorry bolne ki jarurat nahi hai dosto me yeh sab chalta hai…..

Rey (passed a smile to her and said): Vaise ek baat puchun…??

Taani : Ofcourse buddy…..issme puchne vali kya baat hai…

Rey : tum kya itne hi poor jokes marti rehti ho hamesha..??

Taani : Tumne bhi keh diya…..Good…..Sab yehi bolte hai u know par kya karun aadat se majboor….Wait a sec toh tum hase kyun???

Rey : Kyunki tum hass rahi thi…..par tum kyun hasi??

Taani : tumhe dekhke…….kitne confused lag rahe the tum issliye…… Okay now agar hamari talks ho gai ho toh practice start kare…??

Rey : Ok madam lets start….(while getting up) Vaise maine student aur tum teacher lagti ho….

Taani(while doing her warm ups) : I know Sharon aur bhai bhi yehi kehte hai ki yr teachers ki tarah act karna band karo….But main kya karun jab dance aur singing ki baat aati hai toh I become lil serious….

Rey(doing his warm ups and teaching her) : U r saying lil…!!! No baba tum toh bahut jyada hi serious ho jaati ho……..And u know what tumhari weakness bhi yehi dono hai….

Taani : I know……Hamesha se hi yeh meri weakness rahi hai……Sharon toh mujhe inhi ki promises deti hai….

Like this they both continued their warm ups and practice for total one hour……After that gang too joined them and they all practiced for two hours……. And then the gang left to get ready for college…..TaaRey and Swaron after getting ready left for Abhi's house as today they had to mix up and complete the song……They reached Abhi's housed and went inside……Abhi was in the music room with his few friends, so he asked every one to come there directly……

Sw : Hey Abhi…..So wasup??

Abhi : Hey buddy….nothing dude just was trying to make some new beats…….(to his friends) Ok guyzz let meet up soon….now I'll be busy….

Abhi's friends : Ya sure dude….(And they all left)

Abhi : Hi Guyzz….Hi sweetheart(to Sharon)

Sh(passing him a smile) : Hi Abhi……So howz it…all fine??

Abhi : Ofcourse sweetheart all will be fine when u are there…..

Someone her was burning with jealousy……Obviously it will be Swayam…..Let Abhi be his friend but he will be jealous if he is flirting with his Siren…….Taani noticed Swayam's jealousy and was confused why he was feeling jealousy and had doubt on both Swaron……To lighten the atmosphere Taani started…

Taani : Oye Mr. flirt apna flirting baadme karna……hum yaha song complete karne aaye hai so concentrate on that…..

Abhi : kitna jalti hai re tu fighter…..Agar itna hi hai toh main tujhse bhi flirt kar…..

Taani (cut him off) : Sochna bhi maat samjha(showing him her index finger)…..Agar song ki baat nahi hoti na toh main tera shakal life me nahi dekhti….

Abhi (jerking her hand) : Haa toh mujhe bhi koi shook nahi hai teri shakal dekhne ki samjhi…… badi aayi mujhe bolne vali…

Before Taani could reply Abhi Swayam interrupted them….

Sw : Plzz guyz not again….Aaj ke din aur phir kabhi maat milna fine……Abh hum apna kaam start kare…

They both agreed and all the four started their work…….Their work completed after 2 hours or more with Taabhi's fight in between…….

Rey : wow yr the song is really superb……Must say gr8 job Abhi and Taani…

Sw : Ya seriously…..Our song will be different and will be rocking in the competition….

Sh : Ya u r right Swayam……Ok then now we should leave and Abhi keep this Cd with u……evening time pe hum me se koi bhi aayege ye Cd lene fine….??

Before Abhi could reply Taani started….

Taani : Sharon what are u doing??? How can u give it to him??? I don't believe him….Let us keep it with us….

Abhi : What is ur problem fighter….?? Kyun haar baat pe bhadak jati hai…….Agar voh mujhe rakhne de rahi hai toh problem kya hai….. Ek toh tum log Abhi college jaoge toh ye Cd ghum gaya toh….. Mere paas rahega toh it will be safe…..

Taani : You…..

Sharon (cutting her in middle) : Taani plzz not again…..And ya he is right hum college ja rahe hai so it will be misplaced so let it be with him….

Taani : but Sharon….

Sw : Taani plzz let it be he is right and I know he will be keeping it safe…..

Taani (Stamping her foot like lil kid) : Fine do what ever u want to….I'm leaving if anyone want to come then they can come with me…..(And left from there)

Sw (smiled on her antics and said loudly) : Taani wait near car we are coming in 2 min….

Rey : Ok Abhi keep it with u someone of us will come and take it with u at evening…

Abhi : Ok buddy it will be safe….

Sh : Ok now lets leave Taani is waiting outside….

Abhi : Haa haa go varna phir bhadak jayegi fighter….

Sw : Abhi(glaring at him)

Abhi : Ok sorry…..now leave all of u…

They all bid him bye and left from there…….Taani was waiting outside near car……They all came but she was angry at them so without talking to anyone she get inside the car…….They too get inside and drove off to college……..

So here I end Part 13….

So I hope that u guyzz will like it and I'll get good response this time……As I said first if I'll not get good response so I'll seriously stop updating this FF……Its upto u guyzz that u'll comment or no….

res

Wow it was a nyc updt
taarey bonding is growing stronger day by day
n i love d fighter taani
n ab toh taani ko swaron par doubt bhi ho gaya hai
so i guess bahut jaldi hume detective taani bhi milegi
so plz updt d nxt part soon
n by d way caring rey is my fav

Love Taarey moment , Rey was so concern and worried for Taani
Hmm he even carry a pump with him, that's so sweet
Taani and Abhi bickering will not stop lol
Superb update