Destinies Connected: VirMan FF Chapter 9 (page 73) - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
Another amazing update, the innocence, with the matureness is a blend only you can add, love Virats protectiveness and the way he claims Manvi for his own..!!
The way Virat always has an answer for Manvi's worries is amazing! and the Promiseee was my fav part! :P


Excited to seee whats happens next, update sooonnn :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update, Virat and his protectiveness, Manvi and her mixed feelings about the marriage not wanting to fool their parents.

Virat will need something extremely big for him to realise his feelings for Manvi, whereas Manvi not so much because even now she's feeling something but not quite understanding what it is.

Looking forward to them being married and even though they think its not going to change their present relationship, it is and I l can't wait to see how they are going to tackle "marriage", even they say its just a name for society to give for their bond its going to be so much more than that.

Update soon, I can't wait for marriage and the suhagraat which is going to be extremely different for Virat and Manvi.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NushIsh

Loved the update, Virat and his protectiveness, Manvi and her mixed feelings about the marriage not wanting to fool their parents.


Virat will need something extremely big for him to realise his feelings for Manvi, whereas Manvi not so much because even now she's feeling something but not quite understanding what it is.

Looking forward to them being married and even though they think its not going to change their present relationship, it is and I l can't wait to see how they are going to tackle "marriage", even they say its just a name for society to give for their bond its going to be so much more than that.

Update soon, I can't wait for marriage and the suhagraat which is going to be extremely different for Virat and Manvi.



LOLLL their Suhagraat ..yes Going to be Very Different ..😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it. You are brilliant at showing the drama and emotions with right dash of comedy

Very very good
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumana123


Hus you know what your signature line "I love encouraging and being loved" perfectly describes you ...Your words are so precious to me ...and I mean it ..I keep waiting for ur comment ...cause u will highlight everything i wrote. What can I say I m touched ...and also sorry that I always keep giving you heart attacks ..but I have already told u ..each and everything written in the story holds implication in future ...SO U GUESSED RIGHT ...PROMISE ...Is a Big Cue...How ...I can't reveal but yes it will...I know I m delaying on "Romance" ..but then this is the essense of this story ...How they take this journey mainly how Viraat take it and its a long one ...I will keep them confused for a long time *evil* i know ...but more the wait sweeter is the outcome ...I love how u always read between the line and understand perfectly what I want to hint at ..and you never miss out on the hidden romance and love between VirMan ...but they are away from realizing it ...

Love

Sumana

PS : I blessed to have a reader like you ..hope the story lives up to ur expectation


dont be sorry for the heart attacks,, dey are the interesting ingredients of ur updates.. loved them
and yeah um blessed to follow ur heart throbbing story
get going!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
O dear its greeaaattt! Fantastic! Awesome! Even i have no words for such a story i was a silent reader n yor story forced me to comment n dude do pm me n update sooonnn yar em waiting plzzz give update i jxt keep thinking about it whole day its amaizing! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello All

You see after staying her for few months even I have started getting EVIL like all.😉 So thought of posting a small teaser of the coming update. Haven't written yet but just to give you a glimpse of what's coming up.

Here you are ...for those who are waiting for the update.


Teaser

"Greaaattt...So You are left with only one option" Viraat said rising up from bed.

"Which one" Maanvi with her famous "O" shaped expression.

"This one" saying so Viraat held her hands carefully and then scooped her into his arms.

"What are you doing Viraat" Maanvi yelled in irritation while Viraat kept making their way to the balcony with her.

"Well ...You said ...You want to "FEEL WIND" But You are having this disgusting stinky mehendi..everywhere which means ...You can't walk...So like a perfect Buddy ..I have to carry you like this to get Your Wish Fulfilled " Viraat said looking at her eyes with his sweet smile.

"Awww" Maanvi said trying to squeeze his neck for a hug.

"Yeewww..wait ...Dare you spoil my shirt with this thing" Viraat screamed.

...After some 30 mins

"Maanvi ...can we now go inside" Viraat said tired.

"No wait na ..Viraat ..see Wind is so cool" Maanvi said dreamily.

"Do hell with your wind ...Mannu...You are not a 2 yr old kid...For past 30 mins I m standing here with YOU in my hand...My Hand are paining now ...Mannu lets go inside" Viraat said making a sad face.

"Ohkkk...Finee" Maanvi made a grumpy face. They were about to move back when they found a group of ladies entered her room with Madhuri and all Screamed in unison "VIRAAAT" on seeing Maanvi in Viraat's arm.

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Cya All...I will be back with the Update in Few days ...


Love ...All...Good Night


Sumana

Edited by Sumana123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
few days.. nooo
after this kind of teaser i cant wait for a second nd u talking about days... plz dont do this with us...
plz update as soon as possible...
canttt waittt any more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
They have Nooo clue Wat are they up to!! Oh gosh someone give sense to them plzzz!!!!
And this viraaat when he will know the meaning of love gosh sumana r rock n roll baby! It's not a evil story but a tragic story lmafooo I don't have to say be evil cuz its already evil in other way god! Wat a teaser loved it!!! Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria12345

They have Nooo clue Wat are they up to!! Oh gosh someone give sense to them plzzz!!!!
And this viraaat when he will know the meaning of love gosh sumana r rock n roll baby! It's not a evil story but a tragic story lmafooo I don't have to say be evil cuz its already evil in other way god! Wat a teaser loved it!!! Update soon



ROFL exactly ...Their Fates are already playing the Evil Role ...:P

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