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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

aww it was sooo nice n emotional ..
pain of sharon u really penned it down so beautifully..just loved it..
plz give us part 2 n pm me :)

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

nice os

loved it

beautifully penned down

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

That was beautiful :-)

You should really continue it and get SwaRon together :P

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beeny

@beeny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

d creation wise it's soo good

i tried very well with all dat of descrpsn bt sory bt don't like d end yaar ese thodi chalta he ye t dukhi typs lag raha he ike rula dega...

Thanx for Pm

Beeny..:)

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

awesome os mihika

loved it

i could actually feel what sharon was going through

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-CussTheWorldUp

@-CussTheWorldUp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Edited comment on page 2.. 😳

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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

unreserved comment on page 1 :D

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Fatima

@HSFA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Mihi 🤗

Loved it! It was so awesome. Aww poor Sharon she was so confused as had so many apprehensions of being rejected and loosing him as a friend. I wish she could have told her. Felt bad for the poor soul but loved her decision as well. It indicated her pure love for him.

Sharon's emotions are described so beautifully <3

Great! The title is creative as well.

Keep writng

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
OMG...OMG...Mihi...

Its amazing...i loved it when u sent me the 1st part...the continuation is ever more awesome...i loved her hesitation..her pain...the pain..n fear of rejection..which holds her back from confessing...

She is not sure if he loves her...or she is just a frnd...her confusion..aprrehensions...beautifullly portrayed😊

loved rey ...he gave them some private time and went out with kriya...her contemplation about his feelings...was lovelyyy...

she finally decided to confess...she even spoke the 1st few words...but fate was against it...the call..his happiness over his dream coming true...i knew it...she won't be able to confess..

he asked her if she will miss him...i have a feeling...he loves her as well..and dont want to commit as he is going away

LOVED IT...awww...it was beautiful...

A request..plz continue this & give a proper ending😳

ps- U r amazing as a writer

Luv
Deep

oi----

why is this still incomplete?

complete it----somehow----happy ending pleej? puppy face mihi?😭

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Mihika!
Awesome work i must say,i love it!
Though it has a sad ending but you wrote what you felt and thats what i liked the most.
Sometime random thoughts take over your mind and they keep nagging you until and unless you blurt them out. You took it out but sharon didn't,and it was totally her perspective which i loved from my heart!
Did i just compared your n sharon's thoughts 😳
Watever...mihika brilliant work!
Keep it up