AS LONG AS U LOVE ME ANSH-FF(chap 15 pg 25) 19.09 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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woa wat sweet update... plz update d next part quickly hve been waiting for ur update so badly...
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Nice update, Shash😊

Update soon
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Originally posted by: ananthesh

Nice update, Shash😊


Update soon



thank u will update soon
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thanx
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sorry for the late update...but all the three parts are just superb👏
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Anandi was very much angry on shiv and ashima 😡
Anandi(in her mind):kuch toh karna padega ...le kin kay ???😕
at last all them were tierd so all of them sat down for dinner.shiv was looking at his anandi who had turned red with anger.
everyone finished there dinner.they left.
mahi:bhabi ...lets walk home ...pls
anandi: lekin mahi bhaiya ...car
mahi:u dont worry ...
anandi: teek...
saanchi : yah lets go walking...kyu dr jagdish?
jagya:sure
they all started walking towards home .shiv called up home and asked alok to send two drivers so they can leave the car at home .
they all were talking and walking..it suddenly started raining.
saanchi:oo no meri nai dress its getting spoilt..😲
they found a near by shelter.they all went inside it .
mahi:baiyya bhabi kaha hai?
shiv:tumhare sath to thi?😕
mahi:thi lekin😲
everyone were scared ...started looking for her.
shiv:anandi... anandi
mahi:bhabi...
they looked for her every where but all went in vain.
suddenly shiv heard the chun chun (sound)of payals...he went from where the sound came from she found anandi playing in the rain like a small kid. he was very angry with her...😡
shiv:mahi anandi yahi hai...
everyone rushed and were happy to see anandi safe and sound.
shiv went near her.
shiv:anandi yeh kya bachpana hai?😡
anandi:app ko kya aap jaeye apne ashima ke paas😡
shiv:anandi...
mahi:baiyya ...
shiv: mahi nahi ...aap chale rahi hai ya nahi?
anandi:nahi...
shiv:aacha mein chalta hoon...kabi aap ke paas nahi aavonga..
shiv sensed that anandi had drunk in the party😲
anandi made a puppy face and hugged shiv from the back..both of them were totaly wet😳
mahi and ashima : ahem ahem...
that did not make any difference to them they both were lost in their own word.saanchi was worried about her dress that it was spoilt.
jagya:😡 (in his mind ): kintni beesharam hai dono...
shiv turned and hugged her..
anandi: sorry😔
shiv :its ok...baby😳
mahi called the driver and asked him to come and pick them up as it was raining.the car came
mahi:baiyya continue ur romance at home...come now
shiv broke the hug and was about to go . anandi pulled his hand...
shiv : kya huva anandi?
anandi mhuje ootha ke le jagiye...pls😳
shiv knew that she was drunk and it was no use of telling no so he lift her..
mahi:so cute...😊ab chliye der ho rahi hai🤣
jagya:😡
shiv put her inside the car and they left...they reached home and found that every one were off to sleep.so they did not want to spoil there sleep so they wished eachother goodnite and tiptoed ti their rooms.
saanchi's room
saanchi was thinking about how because of ganga agdish did not dance with her.she was getting angry.
saanchi:that villager ...uski toh 😡
(ansh room)
both of them changed their dress and slept in each others arms
the next morning around 5:30 shiv got p as anandi was shivering and was holding to him tigth.he touched her forehead it was burning. she had fever.
shiv:mhuje pata tha...yahi hooga.
he moved her and went to bring the thermometer . and he checked her fever...
shiv:aree bappre 104 degree...😲
shiv was worried on the other hand anandi was happily sleeping on his lap😆
shiv : anandi utho take ur medicen
anandi slowly woke up
anandi:kaya medicen ?😲lekin kyu?
shiv:because u have fever...kaal rat barish mein beege the na
anandi:shiv medicen nahi😭 pls bahut kadva hota hai...aap mhuje ek kiss de dedijeye mein... i'll be perfectly all right...😳
shiv:anandi
he made her drink the medicen and kissed her forehead...and went down.by know it was 7. every one had got up and were having tea.he wished everyone a good morning .
ira:good morning beta...anandi kaha hai?
mahi:kahi bhabi abi tak kal wali mood pe toh nahi hai??😳
cm: kaal wali mod?😕
shiv: kuch ...nahi cm.mahi chup😡..wo..wo maa anandi ko fever hai. she is taking rest?
ds:fever😲
as soon as all off them heard the word fever .everyone went to anandi's room and didnot allow shiv to talk to anandi the whole day.one or the other would be there looking after.if not ira meenu if not meenu ds...or sumitra
shiv:are bagvan...meine inhe kyu bataya ...ab mein apne panti se baat thak nahi kar sakta🤣



to be continued😊
Edited by shash456 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandita.jana

sorry for the late update...but all the three parts are just superb👏


thank u
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thanx
Edited by shash456 - 12 years ago
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Hey shash456,

Lovely story. Simple and filled with Ansh.
I don't know how i missed it, read all the parts together.

Awaiting your next update.
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shiv was irritated has he could not talk to his wife the whole day.
😡
(ansh room)
ira was taking care of anandi.shiv came in.
shiv : m...maa
ira : haan beta 😊
shiv : parsoo diwali hai na?
ira :haan beta kyu ?
shiv : toh aap jake uski tayari ki jiye ...na aur ghar mein kitni sari log hai aap unka kayal rakiye na ...mein anandi ka kayal rakunga ...😊
ira : aacha
anandi:😳
ira was about go when she saw anandi blushing . and sat on the sofa .
shiv: maa kya hua ?😕
ira : nahi shiv... meenu hai nah woh sab kuch sambal le gi .😆
ansh:😒
anandi: maa aap bahut tak gye honge ...app jake aram kijiye😊...shiv mere kayal rakenge ..☺️
ira: nahi...😆
ansh:😔
ira started laughing. anandi and shiv were confused .
shiv: kya hua ma?😕
ira : tu hi kayal rak na apne patni ka... mein jaati hoon😊
ansh:😃
shiv almost pushed ira out of the room and closed the door...he dint want any one to disturb them.while turning aroung
shiv:at...la
he saw anandi sleeping.he went near the bed got on to the bed and patted her shoulder . anandi was giggling inside the blanket. but shiv could not hear her giggle.
shiv : anandi ...tumh so gayi...kya?🤔
anandi : haan😆
shiv: aacha ...
and started tickling her. she laugh out loud.she jumped out of the bed .
shiv caught her ...
shiv : bukar uthar gaya ?😆
anandi: bukar... kya hota hai? she escaped from shiv and started running.
shiv : accha😃
and started running behind her.
everyone were sitting in the hall and were preparing for diwali.they could hear sound coming from anandi and shivs room.
ira: kye dono kya ...itni shor macha ke rake hai?😲
meenu: uss ladki ko tho bukar thi na ?
mahi knew everything
mahi:😆 😆 😆 😆 😆😆
dadu: aree nalayk kyu haas raha hai?
mahi : kuch nahi dadu...😆
meenu: ja dekar aa kya kar rahe hai dono...aur kane ke liye dula
mahi: haan
and mahi goes to call anandi and shiv.
jagya: kya kare rahe hai yeh dono?😕 😡
(ansh room)
anandi got tired and stopped shiv caught he. there was no chance of her to escape this time.she turned around.shiv kissed her forehead.when he was about to kiss her lips mahi knocks the door.
shiv : 😡
anandi started laughing...
shiv : koi bhi ho iski toh...😡
shiv was about to open the door when ...
anandi: i will open the door.😊
shiv : thik hai...
anandi opens the door.
anandi: mahi baiyya app.😊
mahi : mein pouch ne aya tha ki aap kesi hai?
anandi: ab bilkul thik hoon.
mahi saw shiv and wanted to tease him so...😆
mahi: baiyya did i disturb u ...😆
shiv: (in a low voice ) disturb karke ...pouch raha hai ki disturb kiya ki nahi?😡
anandi stamped shivs leg.
mahi: kya bol rahe the baiyya..
shiv: kuch nahi..🤔
anandi: kya baat hai mahi baiyya?
mahi : aap dono ko koi dekne aya hai. koi ka ka😆
sjiv:😡 kava hame bula rahi hai kya?
anandi: shiv.
hum abi atte hai mahi baiyya.mahi left and anandi pulled shiv down.
they went near the door... but there was no body there😕


to be continued 😊
Edited by shash456 - 12 years ago

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