IPKKND OS - A Ritual Rewritten [Romance] - Page 12

Originally posted by: Barunz4ever

Wow once again a master piece so beautifully written!!!!!!

I Luv reading ur works as they r filled with love ,emotions ,warmth ,care ,trust ,respect , assurance , need,attraction,passion desire n much much more bundled together in this lovely magical relationship that these 2 most beautiful individuals share with each other

Originally posted by: deeswarna

superb os. arnav is truly the perfect husband and he is going to make an awesome daddy to their child:)

First things first, I am absolutely in Love with your tittle selections. A ritual rewritten only the tittle got me to move my hands faster and read even fast.

really really loved the OS
it was really beautiful
thank you so much for the pM:)

Originally posted by: ssyahoo

I always get so excited to see an OS by you!! Another magical and sensual OS! I loved the protective Arnav and the story you weaved with their sequence. Awww, as always my humble appreciation hun!

I know it has been said before but lovemaking sequences are so hard to write yet you make it beautiful every single time!! I always have the fear of crossing limits or perhaps even not crossing enough of them as I write those scenes. But you guys seem to just gobble it up, so I must be doing something right! Which is why I keep writing those scenes! 😆 Can't wait for the next installment..

Hi send me blog link for ritual rewritten . it is awesome,

Wow it was amazing. .. the gentleness and tenderness in arnav's love for kushi. And kushi's selflessness. . U always give a beautiful dimension to luv.. u make it so serene. . Luved it...

aww dat was awesome
ur doin a superb job

Thanks a lot for the link..

Simply superb..just loved the you way you have portrayed so many emotions in one OS...you have expressed Arnav's passion, his possession, his apprehensions about the future so well...I have found you index and now I am gonna read all of them ...

Really really liked the saree scene..it was written with so much love and emotions..

Looking forward to Baby Raizada being born and see the wonderful parents...

Originally posted by: camlin

First things first, I am absolutely in Love with your tittle selections. A ritual rewritten only the tittle got me to move my hands faster and read even fast.

How many shades of Arnav did you present us with in this OS? I read the whole thing thrice to count, but would always end up losing myself in the sheer beauty of this piece and forget everything else.

Starting from thedomineering- in a very positive way of course- Arnav, who does not want any redundant hullabaloo for his pregnant wife, to the erotic lover, your Arnav has so many hues to fall in love with.

The dance sequence was so so so romantic and I definitely was surprised there.

Then the possessive, jealous Arnav. God, I still enjoy his this side very much. It is always fun to see Arnav getting jealous and protective for Khushi.

The tentative Arnav, so endearing that side of his was. His fear for not being a better daddy to his kid, he took a step just then towards being a good father when he acknowledged the fear.

Then the ahem.. the love making part☺️Do I have to write this again that nobody, absolutely nobody can write this part better than you? I loved, blushed and hyperventilated there.

I am now waiting eagerly for their baby to born and Our Mr. Raizada bonding with his little one and at the same time keeping his bars of erotic romance as high as ever.

Thank you so much for sharing and I hope you have already started working on something new ?

[DIV]Will be waiting😊[/
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You know I didn't consciously mean to reveal so many sides of Arnav. But now that I think back to the show I realize that he was a complicated, multifaceted man! In my mind he actually had all those sides to him...the protector, the supporter, the lover, the man who never wanted to be vulnerable in front of everyone and held his emotions in (even though eventually he did begin to confide in Khushi). He truly was versatile and at any moment we could be presented with any "shade" of him. As for the titles - thank you! I actually take time to title my stories, try to covertly capture what the story will be about in as few words as possible. Short and sweet ;o).

And the next one - can't tell exactly when it will be written as Im swamped right now. But will continue writing when life allows me small reprieve from reality into the realm of bliss!


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