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Ha poor she they are separated really very bad. Ha mudcake is after her. How sweet. Thks for the mail dear.

Sorry for the late comment...
Just managed to read it all...
This is really nice...
Nothing new or unique but intresting...
Everybody has a paerson in minimum who he hates n who hates him for no specific reason in class or at work...
Thats wierd...but true

arnav n khushi both luv reading...
I luv reading too but i resist doing so since it prevents me fromm reading course books...lol

continue soon...
Thanx for theemail...^_^

wonder why khushis classmates hate her ...I wonder if its anything to do with sheetal??

Shee and Khush!.Nice bond they have.

Originally posted by: Frida

Nice start!!

I am addicted to your stories now..

Can't wait for this tale to unfold !!

Originally posted by: ayeshafarhabs

Not much of ArHi !!

But i loved Khushi and Sheetal's friendship!!

Mr.Mudcake had affected Khushi already!!

Whiz that on the fone??? Diii!! :P

Originally posted by: Arshix144

😆😆😆 I don't know Shikha I have this power of premonition, I can see the future you see buhahaha * I wish! Thank you for confirming it for me though I guess that's what I wanted to see! Mr Mudcake to the rescue from Shyaamu-the-snakewa 😆 ! Man I love all the nicknames u come up with! xo

PS. Off I go to read the new chapter, I can't believe you updated this one too and I missed it!

Originally posted by: Arshix144

Finally read chapter 2 and what a sweet chapter! That was a wonderful representation of friendship, man there is always something in your stories that I can relate to and that's what I love about them. For instance the little tiffs Khushi and Sheetal had, the sharing lunches and having petty arguments about group assignments been there done that !:-) Again adorable outfits there for Khushi, I wonder what Mr Mudcake is thinking about her? He said "I am sorry again" aww he is a darling, isn't he! :) And finally the ending was too cute Khushi admiring Arnav and then dismissing the fact that he could be single then trying to remind herself that she doesn't want a boyfriend anyway! Too good missy, too good! Loved it!👏

Originally posted by: 1chilly

I'm going through your entire index. Read all your OSs and now I'm going through the FFs and the SSs.

Loved this one. I'm not a fan of Sheetal, but here she seems to be a nice girl so far.

And chocolate eyes has made an appearance.

Shyam the snake is also there.

Waiting for the story to unfold.

Originally posted by: cheesemad

lovely update...

i like the name Mr. mud cake..