Arshi SS: Arnav WEDS Khushi!!! Note pg 130! - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice story read in a go...please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 10-


I am really sorry for the late update guys... i was caught up with certain things in my life which is a little messed up right now...

ok so no more excuses... please enjoy the update

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He was the happiest person today... with all the drama's his mother made, he never thought that this day would come true... finally payal was his! She was officially Payal Singh Raizada now... what more can he ask when all his wished were fulfilled?! He entered his room only to see his dream girl sitting in his... NO! Their bed! It was hell lot of time later he got time to see his beautiful wife... with all those after marriage rituals... it took hours for him to see her and to spend some time with her without any disturbances.

Hey...!

She heard him say... but the nervousness of what may happen next didn't let her look up and see into his eyes. After a few minutes when she didn't respond she felt the bed dip beside her and akash sat right next to her and took hold of her hand.

If you are tired... then go and change! We can retire of the day and can start afresh tomorrow...?! He asked uncertainly.

Payal was soo overwhelmed when her husband understood her uneasiness that she threw herself in his embrace taking him by surprise... after a few minutes his hands came around her holding her as close to him as possible. She didn't want to start her marriage life with something hidden from her husband. She had promised him that she will share everything with him and that is what she will do before they take their relationship into the next level.

I wanted to speak to you about something very important akash...before we start...?! She trailed off.

Akash looked at her quizzically...he had never seen her so nervous after their confession and seriousness on her face. He wondered if something went wrong in their marriage...?! Is she still upset about leaving her family? Did his mom say something to his bride that... he thoughts trailed off and he looked upon her totally confused when he heard her next few words...

It's about shyam... your jijaji...! Did he just hear his wife referring his jijaji just as shyam? And the coldness and the way she spitted his name...? What was this upto?! Akash Singh Raizada was hell confused. But he knew one thing for sure that by looking at his wife's face what he is gonna hear will be very unpleasant and this was the time his saali wanted to him to trust his wife...! And that is what he is gonna do... for some time he will forget everything and just concentrate on her words...

I'm all ears payal... I promise to hear you out fully...! He promised looking straight into her eyes. And for the next two hours he surely did keep up his promise...!

Payal took a deep breath and started with her story from the day of her previous marriage to how her lil sister meet Arnavji and then how they met shyam and his fake engagement to her sister and the truth they came to know about shyam married to his sister Anjali and how they broke of all ties with him and how that scum bug still has eyes for her little sister. She ended her story after 2 hours with teary eyes of fear being how her husband may react to all this. But she was glad for one thing that never did he stop her from saying anything and showed any signs of outrage and not believing her.

Payal it's too late... sleep now! Let's talk about this tomorrow...

But akash...! He kept a finger on her lips silencing her from speaking further and asking her to do as told. He leaned a bit forwards and kissed her in her fore head and made her sleep.

He needed time... time to digest the facts. There was no point in not believing payal. Every single thing she said had hidden facts in it which he couldn't deny. But it was very hard for him to accept the truth! If he accepts everything what his wife said to him just now means shattering the peaceful life of his di, whom he loved immensely... that di who always took care of him as a child and supported in his every decision and saved him from his mom's torture. That di who with her sweetness saved him from his bhai's wrath when he did something wrong. That di, who used to play mischievous pranks on him when they were kids but still made sure no one hurt her brothers... He knew the consequences of accepting this truth will shatter his di's world but he knew better than that! He can never leave his di in the hands of demon who can stoop so low and endanger her future. He took a deep breath and turned towards his wife who with lots of dreams had entered his life today and was sleeping beside him with tear strained face and thinking of her unsure future after what she told him now...

His respect towards his wife today grew even more when she without any hesitation and thinking about the consequences of what could have happened to their relationship had opened herself and told him honestly everything. He really was indeed lucky to have such a wife he mused.

But what about bhai? About di? How can they tell them this truth?! But one thing he was sure of now was that his di didn't know anything that was happening behind her back. But what about his bhai?! Does he know? If yes then why didn't he inform me was the only thing that was running in his mind. If payal had told him everything and his saali was by her side then it was very obvious that his bhai knows everything. But why didn't he come to me with this was all he could think of... Does he mean nothing to him? Does he think he doesn't care for his di?

Akash Singh Raizada needed answers and he will make sure he gets that! After all he is the brother of the great ASR himself... he was disturbed by the fact of how bas***d of a brother-in-law he has for sure! But he was more hurt by the fact that he was kept away from this sinful fact until his wife confronted him with this... he knew payal needed his confront now... needed his assurance that he believed her... but he wasn't in a state to provide that! He was shattered himself from within of what would happen next... He would talk to payal tomorrow... until then everything could just wait. But for now he needed answers from his bhai!

The next morning came too soon for the Raizada's... it was hard for 4 people to even get a good sleep when they knew that a storm was brewing between them! After they woke today morning akash saw the uncertainty in his wife's eyes which was brimming with tears... but he had assured her that be believed each and every word she said but he made sure that he certainly needed to discuss these things with his bhai. And when she just barely nodded at him, at that time Akash knew that whatever little doubt he had flew out of his window... his bhai knew everything...!

After the early morning pooja and some rasam's from the new bride everyone headed towards the dining table. And all these while akash observed his ever so fun-loving jijaji changing facades every few minutes. Now there wasn't an ounce of doubt in him to accept the harsh truth that his di's beautiful world was crumbling down. He looked at his bhai he was watching all his moves with keen interest and he knew by the look he gave his bhai that he knew everything and wanted to talk with him. And the next moment he heard his bhai say,

Akash... payal... get ready! I and khushi wanted to talk with you... we were planning to go and catch up with lunch outside...?!

Akash could barely nod at what his bhai had to say... so the time had come that his bhai willingly wanted to share things with him! He knew for a fact that his bhai always keeps his sorrows to himself...but not for once he thought his bhai would bare this huge grief solely... but with the look in his eyes he knew this time no one could stop his bhai from showing what it is to face the harsh wrath of ASR's anger...

But chotey,,, we thought that we all will spend some time together with the newlyweds...

I and khushi have planned a surprise for them di... arnav said trying to lighten the mood which became serious after seeing his fallen face.

Hmm ok... Anjali said smiling thinking that her would-be-bhabhi would have planned something naughty to the newlyweds...

And indeed Khushi Kumari Gupta was planning something naughty to her jiji and jijaji as their wedding gift sitting on her old bed in Gupta house and dreaming about her Arnavji...na Arnav and a small stupid smile playing on her lips.

Precap:

THE discussion and ArShi's surprise for Payash...

I'm sorry as there's is no Arshi in this part... but i always believed that Akash and Payal are also very important in the story...

I didn't wanted Akash and payal to walk out of my story as they did in the serial as they were never given importance...!

I promise once when arshi's marriage rituals starts you will be getting to see a lot of arshi and shyam's defeat too...!


Do COMMENT and LIKE...!

Edited by sanjanaseth1994 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow thats good payal told aakash everything
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d update
tat was awesome
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was an emotional update. Yes paysh play an imp role. The way he understood her was beautifully described. Waiting for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sanju sweet heart an awesome update.

Very beautifully written...

The truth of So called Jijaji now Akash also knew.
His thoughts were quite right.
Love the way you brought importance of Anjali in Akash's life ..loved it very much.
The way he thought about Arnav was just superb.
Arnav knew that now Akash also knew about Shyam only by observing ...


And Arnav's declaration of outing!well very smart 😊
Khushi wants to give surprise to her jiji and jijaji...wow..

waiting for the next part dear.
continue soon .
Take care.
Lots of love and🤗 for you.
Edited by hetaldave - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm... Full Payash...
waiting for next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...!
loved it...
payash is really important and i loved the way how you portrayed them...!
and its surely right for akash being upset with his brother for not sharing such a important information...
thanks for the pm!
waiting for the discussion between them and ofcourse khushi's surprise...! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...loved it...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Y no arshi..
Nice up date

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