virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 55

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Posted: 12 years ago
It's sooo intrstng😃
Wndrful story👏
Update and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
im so glad virat acted lyk that with manvi
this maya n karan r really upto sumthin dodgy
cnt wait to see wats in store nex - very nice update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sholly fr the late comment...its just superb updt...piya n virats convo was so funny...yup virat is right karan n maya is upto something...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Naina!! how many ff u have? 😆..continue all ur ff pliiis!! hahahahah
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 17

virat closed the door n went towards the window n stood there lening on the wall. manvi saw this n went to virat n hugged him from back.
manvi : what happened...??
virat : nothing...
manvi : bolo na virat... kaun tha door pe...??
virat : maya...
manvi : so why are u upset...?? did she say something...??? main abhi uski taange todhti hoon jaa kar...
virat : shant meri jhaansi ki rani... she asked may be we both can join her n karan n i refused...
manvi : bilkul sahi kia... motu ke chakar meri compensation miss nahi honi chahie... hai na...??
virat : i cant believe u are saying that...
manvi : but u promised virat...
virat : i never knew you are that desperate...
manvi : desperate... look who is talking...?? last night the one acting desperate was you-
manvi blushed thinking of last night...
manvi : i meant...
virat : no need for explanations wifey...
manvi : what are we standing here for...??
virat : for watching these star n this bful moon...
manvi ; looking at moon when u have a wife bful than his moon... applauding mr. vadera...
virat : what do u want me to do...?? please enlighten me...
manvi : karun... enlighten...
virat : hmmm...

manvi leaned more close to virat n stretched herself a little up n whispered in his ear...
Suno na kahe kya suno na Dil mera suno na, suno zara
Teri baahon me mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
Teri baahon me hogi subah
Be intehaan (* 3)
her hands started moving sideways on his chest as she was hugging from back... she kissed below his earlobe n clutched fistful of his shirt. she didnt had a bleak idea that she was seducing virat to that an extent that he was loosing his senses with every passing nanosecond. virat was not used to this romantic seducing avatar of his sherni n this was just driving him crazy.
Yun pyaar kar yun pyaar kar Be intehaan
Dekha karun saari umar saari umar
Tere nishaan
be-intehaan (* 3)
virat held manvi's hand which was uncontrollably moving here n there on his chest. he tried controlling himself n his emotions but all in vain. manvi kissed his shoulder n again started singing in her sweet voice. manvi turned him around n kept her hands around his neck n started moving to the rhythamic sound of their heartbeat. virat was about to pull manvi towards him when she suddenly backed off and went near the balcony... she opened the door n went outside n started enjoying the rain which just started.
Koi kasar naa rahe
meri khabar naa rahe
Chhu le mujhe is kadar
be-intehaan (* 3)
virat smiled at her n moved towards her. he joined her in the rain while his busy was busy dancing in the rain n enjoying the weather. virat wrapped his arms around her waist n turned around with a jerk. manvi looked at virat with a smile on her face n a shine in her eyes. virat pulled her closer to him while manvi adjusted herself in his arms n her hands on his chest. donno for how much long they were standing there with heart beating loudly n eyes locked n lips shivering n bodies absorbing each other's warmth. virat's hands were raoming on manvi's back n teasing her senses n feeling all her curves... all thanks to her night gown which was stuck to her body as it was all wet. manvi turned around with her eyes closed n thousands of butterflies flying in her stomach n virat's touch making her go weak in her knees.
Jab saanson me teri saansen ghuli toh
Phir sulagne lage Ehsaas mere mujhse kehne lage
Haa baahon me teri aake jahaan do Yun simatne lage
Sailaab jaise koi behne lage
manvi freed herself from virat's hold n went to the other side of the balcony trying to slow down her breathing, when she again felt the love of her life hugging her. she tried to get away from him, and then she felt him playing with her wet hair. then he kissed her neck giving her goosebumps wherever he kissed her.
Khoya hoon main aagosh mein
Tu bhi kahaan ab hosh mein
Makhmali raat ki ho naa subah
Be intehaan (* 3)
manvi turned around n hugged him as she was now out of her senses n his sweet torture was just making her even more weaker. virat kissed below her earlobe which made manvi shiver n virat smiled seeing his effect on his beloved dedh futiya...
Yun pyar kar be-inteha
Gustakhiyan kuch tum karo
Kuch hum kare iss tarah
Sharrma ke do saaye hain jo Muh pher le hum se yahaan
virat continued kissing her from her neck to her collarbone n then from her upper arm towards her elbow n then her thin wrists n then her fingers which were a moment back carressing the back of his neck.
Haan chhu toh liya hai ye jism tune Rooh bhi choom le
Alfaaz bhige bhige kyun hai mere
Haan yun choor ho ke majboor ho ke
Qatra qatra kahe
Ehsaas bheege bheege kyun hain mere
Do bekhabar bheege badan
virat picked up manvi in his arms n made his way back to the bedroom. he softly laid her down on the bed n got on top of her. he kissed her forehead n brushed his fingers into her long black silky hair. then he kissed her eyes, her cheeks drinking every droplet of water on her flawless creamy skin. this made manvi moan his name n she tightened her hold on the bed sheet which was holding in her fist while her other hand was securely placed at his neck. virat separated himself from manvi n looked at her with all the love n passion he had for her while manvi also slowly opened her eyes n their eyes were locked again. manvi pulled virat towards her n whispered " i love u virat... " to which virat kissed her forehead again n whispered in her ear " love u too manvi... just remember you are mine". " for eternity " manvi added n virat captured her lips in a passionate kiss... a kiss which was a symbol for their love n passion n desire for each other.
Yun pyar kar, be inteha
Dekha karoon saari umar
Tere nishan, be-intehaan
Koi kasar na rahe, meri khabar na rahe
Chhu le mujhe is kadar be-intehaan
be intehaan... (* 3)
the night passed with two sould becoming one all over again with their promise of being together always no matter what the circumstances are...
the sun rose welcoming a new day n a ray of sunlight entered a room just two witness the epitome of love wrapped in each others arms n calmness n satisfaction written on their faces. manvi shifted a little in the bed n cuddled even more close to virat n hided her face in his chest.
manvi : umm...
virat : kya hua...??
manvi : AC on kardo..
virat : yaar itna kaam toh tum bhi kar sakti ho...
manvi : kar do naa..
virat searched for the remote n switched on the AC n manvi smiled n slept hugging him. whereas now virat couldnt sleep, he was admiring his angel... the light of his life... he placed the fringes falling on her hair behind her ear n kissed her forehead.
after an hour or so, virat looked at the watch n shouted " shit "
manvi woke up with a jerk n gave virat " what the heck " look...
virat : its 08 : 10 manvi...
manvi : shitt... matlab we.. we..
virat : we missed our breakfast n all because of you...
manvi : haaww... how can u just blame me like that... only im not responsible...
virat : then who is responsible...?? me...??
manvi : oh yeah how can i forget... iss ghar mein toh agar ek makhi bhi aati hai toh usko bhi manvi ne li bulaya hoga...
virat : what...?? thats weird...
manvi : whatever...
manvi was about to get up from the bed when virat held her wrist n she shot an angry glare at virat.
virat : ab late toh ho hi chuke hai...
manvi : toh...??
virat : toh lets work more rest less...
manvi : matlab...??
virat : abhi btata hoon...
virat pulled manvi again towards him n kissed her while his hands travelling all over her body. they both again got lost in their world of desire n passion n love...
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ps : u would get regular updt of this ff from now as i am planning to wrap this one as soon as possible... first tell me how was this part n do gimme bahut saare likes... okkk...?? 😉
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naina
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update naina
And too romantic
Waiting 4 ur next part
Update soon
Edited by jannat89 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nain slow net will comment later and haan i want regular update
Edited by keertu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
just. one word to describe it is full on ROMANTIC
i m so happy ...u will give regular updates...woo.dancing..
thnk u...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
soo romantic update...
luved it...
cont soon and thanks for the pm dear...

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