My goodness! That chapter was brilliant, there's really no other word. The shift in the situations was so smooth, the emotions so genuinely expressed, it was sheer brilliance
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Wow, I think I need that thanda paani with you!! Loved how she listened, and he for a chance to vent out hours fears and insecurities!! I loved how she maneuvered him to the pool side wall with the kiss, nice change from the original!!
That was fantastic! The emotions and anguish about how he feels was really heart breaking. Fact like he feels like a failure and wanted to shut himself down was so very well written. In my mind I can picture the scene being enacted. Khushi's support and the her words to him were so encouraging that it has helped them to both move forward.
WOW WOW WOW...they finally are one! And then she says I love you Arnav, not sure if he hears it but wonder when he will confess to her. Hope that does not create any problems for them.
Loved it loved it loved it!!!!!! What a wonderful piece of writing dear... I just loved how khushi supported Arnav... Awesome update.. Can't wait to read the next one:-))
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