PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic - Page 69

sorry neel was bit busy tu comment nahee kiya...plz don stop postng it 😭 ....ur story iz awsome. 👏 .n i jus luv it... 😳 😳 😳 aur rahee baat abt last three parts...they were superb. 👏 ..kash ka dono ko dekh kar gussa hona...phir rona...sujal ka pareshan hona..aur yeh last part tu zabardast..kya likha hai.. 👏 .saniya did a mindblowng job..ab kash ka shak durr hogaya...2 good...me v happy....continue soon... 😊

yaar neelz bohot sad part tha 😭 but very very very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i loved it ...wow yaar saniya i love her she is so nice you were right neelu that after the next pats we will start thanking saniya she is great yaar accha hua usko bi pyar ka mutlab achii tara se samaj mein aya ..sujal he ei esa (experience kiya hua hai kahsih se jo pyar karta hai 😉 )i am sooooooooooooooooooooooo happy that kashish realised she was wrong only because saniya told her 😃 wow yaar saiya ne jo kashish ko bula it was tooooo gooooooood pyar toh sab ko sudharta hai ab saniya ko he dekhlo villan bani thi ,sujal aur kahsish ka pyar dekh kaar badal hi gai 😳 saniay ne jab yeh kaha eoe i got so happy kashish!sujal sirf tumhara hai,aur ye main bhi samaj gai hoon yah even i agree with her 😆 ab toh i feel kind of sorry for kashish 😭 lekin uski galti thi 😡 this scene was so cute jab kashish ko apni galti ka ehsas hua aur wo sujal ki shirt ko apne seene se laga rahi thi i loved that part it was awesome 😳 ab yaar nai problem ane wali hai (prediction) i hope sujal kashish ko maaf karde...... par kya ab sujal manega kashish ne use itna kuch kediya yaar ab bicharein dono galat fehmi mein reh gaye i hope kashish sujal ko manale😭 okay neelz me waiting eagerlyyyyyyyyyyyy for the next part kash sujal manjae continue soon i'll be waiting and once again mindblowing.awesome ,very nice,great ,excellen part 👏

hey.......sup..i ven't commented since a long time....its jus dat i got busy wid mi work n other things again.....newayz.....i did keep up wid ur story...n its jus goin gantastic....gud job yaar.... 👏
i really liked saaniya's bhashan...atleast she finally got sum sense n told kash da truth....she z not as bad as i thot.....she actually made kash aware of sujal's feelings towards her 2.....so ths gud.... 😃
i wonder how kash will apologize sujal....bechari...she alwayz ends up messin up n then she has 2 say sorry.... can't wait 4 da nxt part....
plz do update soon....n ya...u r a fabulous writer....keep it up 😃 ...tc....n happy new year...have fun n enjoy.... 😛

oye neelu yaar mere comments dene se pehle mujhe mere ek sawaal ka jawaab jaanna bohat hi zyada zaroorai ho gaya hain... aur mera sawaal yeh hain ki tum har baar itna achcha akhir kaise likh lethi ho ?? can you explain..... main tho har baar tumhari writing ke wajah se i'am left hairaan , bouraan , peshaan... i always wonder tum itna achcha likh kaise lethi ho , tumhe yeh ideas kahaan se aathe hain... every single time you right i'am totally just spell bound after i read what you have written.... yaar seriously you are very damn creative... and you even do muchhhh of thinking work before you write a part me very sure about it....
yaar you are totally amazing very damn amazing.... your writing totally rocks.... it is simply the best of the rest.... i can say your story is the BEST OF THE BEST........ i totally love your writing.... me fida over it.... jaise jaise tumhari story aage bad rahi hain mein tumhari story ki deewani aur deewani hue jaa rahi hoon... sach keh rahi hoon me falling for your story more & more.... ab coming to scene you have written ab uske baare mein main kahoon tho kya kahoon... scene tho poori tarah se dhassu tha.... bole tho ek dum raapchik... poori ki poori tarah se bindaas...... 👏
ab tho sujal kashish ko chod ke chala jaatha hain... aur kashish ab bhi wahii hain... uski haalat badi kharab hain... woh bas roye jaa rahe hain... woh tadap rahi hain.... actually you know what yaar me feeling damn sorry at kashish ka haal...par in sab mein we all cannot ignore the one main fact aur woh fact yeh hain ki kashish ke haal ka zimedhaar woh khud hain.. usne khud woh aasooyo ko apni zindagi mein likh li hain... she never understands the situation properly... hamesha correct time par jab woh aur sujal thode thode kareeb aane lagthe hain woh kashish kuch na kuch ulta-seedha kar hi dethi hain... is baar bhi hamesha ki tarah kashish ne sujal ko ghalat samjha... she has herself written the pain , the tears in her life.... yeh kashish na.... ek taraf tho mujhe kashish pe bada ghussa aatha hain.. tho dusari taraf kashish ke haal par rona bhi... mujhe ghussa isliye aa raha hain kyunke kashish is not ready to listen to sujal.. she is giving herself & also sujal pain.. aur mujhe uske haal par rona isliye aa raha hain kyunke woh tadap rahi hain... usse andar hi andar yeh baat khaye jaa rahi hain ki sujal ne usse dhoka diya... woh chahkar bhi sujal pe vishwaas nahi kar paa rahi hain... tho ek taraf ghussa tho ek taraf rona.....
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now saniya enters into sujal's room... & now saniya gives kashish sujal ki shirt saying ki yeh lo tumhare sujal ki shirt... this dialogue made me laugh... u know why.... that is because saniya told this statement in a very sarcastic manner... ki yeh kaise insaan se mera saamna ho gaya jisko apne biwi ke alawa duniyaan mein aur kuch soojtha hi nahiiiiiii.... hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
very funny... aur phir kashish ka saniya par chidna.... telling that she should go & give it to sujal woh usse kyun de rahi hain shirt.. then kashish ka kehna ki u go & give to sujal.. aur kashish ka comment karna ki aaj kal saniya ko usse zyada patah hotha hain sujal kahaan hain.. kya kar raha hain... even this was funny... kyunke this showed to what extent kashish was jealous... she was acting like a small kid in a childish manner very immature... kyunke agar koi aur hotha tho they would snatch the shirt & throw it away but kashish ne tho ulta saniya ko sujal ke pass jaane ko kaha... kashish ek taraf chahthi hain ki sujal uske kareeb aaye aur dusari taraf woh saniya ko aisa kehkar saniya ka line clear aur apna line block kar rahi hain.... i mean line to sujal... very damn funny... 😆
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ab saniya kashish ke bartaav se thodi confused ho jaathi hain... & then she clarifies this doubt of hers by asking ki kya woh sujal pe shak kar rahi hain.. ab saniya apni lecture baazi shuru kar dethi hain she starts saying stuff like sujal tumse bohat pyaar kartha hain... she tells her that woh ek aurat hone ke naathe keh rahi hain ki aisa pyaar karne wala bohat kum logo ko miltha hain... saniya tells kashish ki she should not be doubting sujal... she says that kashish ko is pyaar ki qadar karna chahiye instead of doubting the truthfulness of sujal's love.... wah...wah... kya baat hain saniya... kya bhashan diya hain... is part mein tho saniya poori tarah se chah gayi.. waise neelu yaar main hamesha tumse kehthi hoon na ki in your story we have to always expect the unexpected.. well dekho is baar bhi tune meri yeh baat sach saabit karke bataya... i never thought ki saniya kashish ko sach bolegi... par usne sach bola yeh bohat achchi baat hain... balle... balle...... 👍🏼
ab confused soul kashish ke samaj mein kuch bhi nahi aatha.. tho then saniya starts explaining ki kal raat sujal nashe mein tha so she took him to her room... saniya says that sujal ne itna pii liya tha ki woh saari duniyaan bhula chuka tha par apni kashish ko nahii... saniya further says ki pyaar ka matlab usne tho sujal aur kashish se hi seekhi hain.... she continues saying that kashish is sujal's life , his worls.... yeh baat tho 100% sahi hain sujal's entire world revolves around kashish & only kashish........... oye..oye.... saniya ne itne achche se sujal ko describe kiya... sujal itna sweet hain itna pyaar hain usse apni biwi ko chodkar duniyaan mein kuch aur soojtha hi nahi... he is really a gem of a person.. really a darling....... 😳 ab kashish ki aankhein num ho jaathi hain.... lekin phir bhi kashish ko yakeen nahi ho raha hain... she tells saniya ki sujal has sent her here... yeh kashish ka na kuch nahi ho saktha... ek dum dimaak ghaas charne gaya hain... why does she think like sujal ne saniya ko bhejjha hoga..... does she think ki sujal apna aap ko sahi saabit karne ke liye itna neeche gir saktha hain.. that ek ladki ko uski tarafdhaari ke liye bhejjhe.... itne dino baad sujal ke saath rehkar bhi she is thinking like this... sujal tho aisa insaan hain ki agar usne koi ghalthi nahii bhi ki ho tho woh chup chaap kashish ka har ilzaam sahega.. kabhi koi jhooti tarafdhaar create nahi karega... yeh kashish.. itni zyada shaakii hain... mujhe kashish ke sujal pe shak karna par ghussa aa raha hain , bohat hi zyada ghussa aa raha hain... jee kar raha hain ki usse keench ek zor-dhaar thamacha maroon.. jisse ki uske hosh thikane aa jaye...... ab saniya starts telling that woh sach keh rahi hain then saniya describes sujal aur uski har mulaqat... pehle ki woh road pe mile jab sujal ne uspar khichad udaya tha.. then woh pub mein mile jahaan sujal uske masoom chehre mein itna kho gaya tha ki he did not observe ki kashish ne kya pehna hua hain... then saniya says ki sujal was scared to ask her for a dance..and all... and finally ab thak joh kashish ro rahi thi uske chehre par poori yaadein , beeti baatein yaad karke ek muskurahat aajaathi hain... uske aankhon mein nami bhi hain as ki khushi ke aaso.. then saniya says ki woh jhoot nahi bol rahi yeh sab usse sujal ne bataya kal raat ko.. then kashish thoda sharminda hothi hain and saniya further continues saying ki i tried to kiss sujal.. par sujal ne kaha ki woh uski kashish nahi hain... he is a married man.... saniya further adds that she has seen many husbands acting loving towards their wife but when they see a beautiful girl unka raah batak jaatha hain... then saniya says ki she has learnt pyaar kya hotha hain from sujal.. pyaar dikawa nahi hotha hain.. pyaar tho insaan andar hotha hain usse mehsoos karna hotha hain.... she says ki sujal loves her very much & she should not let go the relationship... saniya says ki sujal ka pyaar sachcha hain usmein koi milawat nahi hain.... now saniya leaves the decision to kashish whether she believes her love or what she has seen... this was just too awesome , fantastic , lovely , marvelous , excellent , totally jhakkas.. the way saniya explained to kashish , the way usne sujal ke pyaar ko kashish ke saamne present kiya shabdo mein... oh......man....i totally loved each & every dialogue here.. i tho think everthing was totally super cooll.... everthing was absolutely perfect... loved every bit of the scene.... it was too wonderful... dialogues padke tho main clean bowled ho gayi poori tarah se.... you keep up the good work going yaar.... your work totally rocks.... simply amazing work...saniya ke talk kashish ka suprise hona uske emotions all were just in place... na hum na zyada perfect... 😊 ab saniya ke baath karthe samay kashish ka guilty feel karna khud ko sabka zimedaar maanna her falling down on the ground & crying.... kashish is feeling bad about the way she behaved with sujal.. usse kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha tha ki woh kya kare... finally saniya saari baatein kehke wahaan se chali jaathi hain.. aur kashish wahaan akeli reh jaathi hain... she is still sitting on the ground & weeping for the blunder she has committed by mistaking sujal.. & by raising a finger at sujal's character... kashish wahii rothe , bilakthe hue rethi hain... phir uski nazar sujal ki shirt par padthi hain joh ki saniya de kar gayi hain.... she takes the shirt , feels the shirt aur usko apne seene se lagake , sujal sujal kehthe hue rone lagthi hain woh bhi phoot phoot ke..... uff..... mujhe kashish ke haal par bada rona aa raha hain.. lekin ghalthi bhi tho uski hi hain na... chalo koi baat nahi dhair aaye durust aaye... atlast kashish ka dimaak ghaas charne se wapas tho aagaya... me very happy that kashish has realized her mistake though kashish ke rone par mujhe bhi rona aa raha hain... waise neelu yaar jis tarah se tune kashish ke emotions ko describe kiya hain kya kahe... totally mind blowing... the emotions , the behaviour of kashish were all so apt to the situation... very damn well written scene..... kashish ka reaction showed ki woh kitni zyada guilty thi , woh kitna apne aap ko khos rahi thi.... the emotions showed everything.... ⭐️ neelu now my guess for the next part... main yeh soch rahi hoon ki yeh hoga ki sujal will return back to the hotel room very late aur tab thak humari heroine sahiba ki jaan nikalthi jayegi... she will be very worried , very tensed kyunke sujal mahashay ka koi ata-patha nahi hoga... aur jab finally sujal hotel room mein apni entry marenge tho the first thing kashish will do is she will run to sujal & hug him tight never wanting to loose him ever again.... shayad yeh ho saktha hain ki sujal will be suprised & will give her a cold response... kashish usse sorry kahegi , sujal nahi manega... woh kashish ko maaf na karke usse tadpayega... par kashish bhi itni aasani se sujal ka peecha nahi chodegi.. finally sujal usse maaf karega... aur issi douraan sujal , kashish kareeb aayenge... kyun neelu kya khayal hain ?? kaisa hain mera guess... 😉
ab please continue soon...me waiting for the next part eagerly.... 😃

ok nxt part,thanku readers 4 compliments,these words of urs means so much 2 me,& happy new year 2 all

ok now the prt-

aur uss shirt ko apne seene se lagake,she breaks down on the floor!sujal ka naam lete hue!

k bohot der taak roti rehti hai

k-hey bhagwan!ye maine kya kar dia,sujal paar shaak kia!bina kuch soche,kuch samje,naa hi kuch jaane sujal paar ilzaam laga dia![upset,khud ko koste hue]abb...abb...kahan honge wo....kaise dhundu main unhe...kitne pareshaan honge,saab meri wajah se!abb...apni iss galti ki maafi mangu bhi to kis mooh se...kya mooh dikhau sujal ko...aur agar wo naraz hue,gussa hue to.......naraz hue,gussa hue to kya...khud galti ki hai...sujal naraz nahi hoga to kya...aarti utharega!...abb daantega...to muje bhi suna padega hi...chup chap...bina apna...bada sa mooh khole!


phir k uthti hai with determination 2 search s,wo har jagah dhundti hai,pura hotel chaan marti hai,haar kisi se poochti hai,paar kisi ko sujal kahan hai nahi pata

kashihs bohot pareshaan ho jaati hai,wo apne aap ko aur kos rahi hai,she is gettin really worried abt s,searchin him frantically


phir atlast bohot dhundne ke baad k sees tht s is near a lake close 2 the hotel,bohot sunsan si jagah hai

she goes close runnin happily,she sees tht s wahan ankh baand karke baitha hai tanha,aas pass sharab ki bottles hain

k se sujal ka dard ,uski ye haalaat dekhi nahi jaa rahi,sujal ke dil ki tiis kashish ke dil mein mehsoos ho rahi hai

k goes close 2 him,aur dheere se uske saamne,bina awaaz kie baith jaati hai,wo kuch der taak,sujal ke chehre ko dekhti hai,sujal jiski ankhen band hai,uske chehre paar uske dil ka dard uski mayusi mein saaf jhalak raha hai

kashish dheere se bohot hi dheere se,aur softly sujal ke haath paar apna haath chuti hai,bohot hi dheere se ferti hai,sujal ke haath pe,jiske haath main ek glaas hai sharab ka,uske haath main apna haath

sujal ankhen kholta hai,usse ehsaas hota hai kisi ki prescence,wo mehsoos karta hai kashish ki presense

sujal anken kholke kashish ki taraf ek took dekh raha hai

k-[with all the love in her eyes][sharab ka glass uske haath se haatate hue,side mein rakhti hai,sujal doesnt react wo bass k ki aur dekh raha hai][she guiltily says]
aap meri wajah se,subah-subah sharaab pii rahe hain naa!

s is jst gazin towards her

k continues

k-[nazre jhukake]i..i am sorry...[she curls her lips,looks towards s 4 rxn,but he doesnt react,he is jst starin towards her intensely]

k-....sujal...main...ghabragai thi...[lookin at s,phir nazre jhuka leti hai]...insecured ho gai thi...

s uthta hai,k bhi jaldi s uthkaar khadi ho jaati hai,wo jaane laagta hai,k ghabra jaati hai

k-sujal!.........main bohot darr gai thi!!!!!...[ankhen band kar leti hai,thinkin abt the pain!]

phir k looks towards s,jo ki mudta hai

he is steppin towards k

k uski taraf dekh rahi hai,mesmerised by his effect,wo bass s ki taraf dekhe jaa rahi hai

s chalte hue,k ke bohot kaareeb aa jata hai,bohot hi zyaada kareeb,bass inch ki duri hai,dono hi ek dusre ko dekh rahe hain,ek dusre mein kho rahe hain,duniya bhula rahe hain

s apna face k ke bohot kareeb le jaata hai,they can feel each other's breath,

s apna face k ke aur kareeb le jaata hai,itna kareeb ki there lips r jst a micro mili metre apart

k feels wht is coming,wo dheere se apni ankhen band kar leti hai,2 feel the moment!

neelz yaaar wwow wow wow wow kya oart tha simply awesome ,amazing ,tooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooood i loved it soooooooooooooooooo much it was one of the best part great yaaaaar superb ,excellent....aur bohot romantic bhi 😳 bohot din hogae sujal kashish ka romance nahin dekha aj eid hai humarein yahan u made me happy really loved the part...neelz yaar this scene was so funny can't stop laughing when kashish is talking to herself and feeling guilty about what she did and saying "sujal naraz nahi hoga to kya...aarti utharega" me souldn't stop laughing even for a minute 😆 kashish ka pyar wow kya baat hai sujal ko dhundne haar jaga gayi great ..isse ek baat toh prove hoti hai ke she cares for him very much more than anything and sujal is very very very important to kashish how sweet 😳 and ohter main cute and romantic scenes jab kashish sujal ke pas pohonchti hai aur usko dekhti rehti hai uska dard,mayusi , and we can see how she is feeling guilty of what she did ...and jab kashish,sujal ke haath touch karti hai 😳 (sujal ko us wakt zarur current laga hoga ..woh soch raha hoga bigli kaha se aii lol 😆 )wah kya pyar hai sirf touch kiya aur sujal ko laga ke kashish wahin hai well he gusssed that right.. 😳 wow kitna concern krakhti hai sujal ke liye jab woh keh rahi thi apne meri waje se subha subha sharab pii inlogon ka relationship kuch alag hi hai ismein sab kuch mix hai kuch khata ,kuch meetha,kuch numkin aur kuch karwa bi like all the time when kashish sujal pe shaak karti hai 😭 (those were the sad parts) jab sujal jane lagta hai aur kashish use keti hai mein darghai thi and all sujal itna accha hai he saw that pain in her 😳 and the scene sab se best ,or best of all is the last one jab sujal kashish ke oar barta hai aur kashsih (uka toh heart beat omg 😆 heart attack naajae) and sujal even moves more and more close wow cute 😳 ab itna kareeb agaya ke they can hear their breaths 😳 getting more exciting aur face ko itna kareeb ke lips MICRO METRE apart 😳 wow yaaar suna nahin kabi lekin samaj zarur gaye 😆 kashsih should feel this moment uske liye bohot zaruri hai 😳 part tho maast tha lekin lekin yaar yeh kahin sapna toh nahin ???? 😕 shayad ho sakta hai yeh toh agle part ane ke baad hi pata chalega me waiting very very very eagerly for the next part please continue soooooooooooooooooooooooon i'll be waiting for the next part is part ko ek mood de dun ummmmmmm SAD-ROMANTIC 😳 i think the best name once again very nice it was like a suprise 👏 [=D👏 >] 👏

hey coool parts yaar.........just read the last two parts.....superb!!!!!!!......i love sania..kya socha tha aur kya nikli........lolzzzz........and im surprisd sujal kashish pe gussa nahi hua????......abhi bhi kuch gadbad lag rahi hai mujhe......hmm......ye ujal na he can turn perfect moments into disaster........hehe.i hope im wrong........but poor sujal.usse pura haq hai gussa hone ka.........waiting 4 ur next part.......post soooooooooooooon

cool
keep it up
i am waitin 4 next part........

neelu yaar dekh har baar main teri tareef karthi hoon aur har baar tu pichli baar se achcha aur bhi achcha part likhthi ho.. tho aaj me will not praise you kyunke agar main teri tareef karne baitoongi tho tere liye mere tareefho ke phool khatam hone ka naam hi nahi lenge... seriously it would be never never never never never never never never never never never never never never nevereverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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i love your writing...completely.... yaar your writing always bolws me over... it takes my breath away... your writing is too amazing , awesome , wonderful , fantastic , excellent , par excellence , marvelous , super cool... lo main phir shuru ho gayi aur as usual tumhari tareef mein mere pass alfaaz kum ho chuke hain....... 👏 ab chal me continiung the story analysis... tho atlast kashish madam ko akal aa hi gaya... she realized that she mistook sujal...thank God..finally this happened... warna maine tho socha tha ki kashish ke khali dimaak mein bhussa bhara hain par as she has realized her mistake mujhe patah chal gaya ki uske dimaak mein thodi tho akal baaki hain... abhi itna sab kuch kar kar , keh kar yeh kashish madam khud bhi pareshaan ho rahi hain aur humein bhi pareshaan kar rahi hain ki sujal kahaan hain... she is very worried & is thinking about the places where sujal could have gone........ then i found this very damn funny jab kashish kehthi hain sujal mujhse naraaz honge kya... then her telling to herself ki naraaz nahi honge tho kya aarti utarenge... hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.... very damn funnyyyyyyyyyyyyyy... kashish tho ek chotti si bachchi ki tarah nervous hue jaa rahi hain.... then woh apne aap se kehthi hain ki jab sujal aur uska saamna hoga woh sujal ki saari baatein , saari naraagi chup chaap sunegi..without opening her bada sa moohh.... hahahahahagha... atlast kashish ko eksaas ho hi gaya hain ki woh bina kissi ki baat sune , bina kissi ko baat karne ka mouka diye bhakte hi jaathi hain bhakthe hi jaathi hain... chalo yeh tho achcha hua....... is scene mein kashish ki pareshaani , uski nervousness , uski baatein sab par mujhe hasi aa rahi thi hahahahahaha.. 😆 then kashish decides to search for sujal... she runs around the hotel asking every person possible par kissi ko kuch bhi patah nahi hotha aur sujal ka bhi koi ata-patha nahi hotha.... aur kashish bohat pareshaan ho rahi hothi hain ki akhir sujal hain kahaan... she is very worried... she is searching for him frantically.. yeh kashish na kuch kaam theek se nahi kar sakthi pehle khud ba khud apne haatho se joh equation uske aur sujal ke beech band raha tha usne usse bighaada aur ab woh apni ghalthi par pachtha rahi hain.... woh apne aap ko khos rahi hain... kashish ko ek baat yaad rakhna chahiye i mean a old and a very popular saying woh yeh ki " a sorry cannot make a dead man alive...." usse jitna bhi pachthava ho , woh jitna bhi chahe guilty feel kare lekin kashish woh dard , woh takleef nahi mita sakthi joh kashish ki baatein sunne ke baad sujal ke dil ko hua hain.... she can never-ever take away that pain from his heart....... aur is baat ki wajah se mujhe kashish pe bada ghussa aaraha hain she hurt sujal's feelings.... kashish ne sujal ke character par ungli utayi... how could she..........😔
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👎🏼 kashish keeps searching for him then finally bohat dhoondne , pareshaan hone ke baad she sees sujal sitting near a lake joh ki hotel ke pass hain... aur also the jagah is very sunsaan.... ab she is very happy after seeing sujal... kashish ke jaan mein tho jaan aagayi ho jaise.... woh jaan joh ab thak sujal ke na milne ki wajah se atki hui thi.... she runs to him... par wahaan sujal is sitting with his eyes closed...and also uski sharab ki bottle pass mein thi.... and he was drinking.... ab kashish could see , could ehsaas sujal ka saara dard... she was not able to see sujal in that pain... usse sujal ke liye bada bura lagtha hain......... she goes in front of him aur bina kissi aahat ke bas sujal ke saamne baite , uske dekhe jaathi hain... bohat dhair thak na kuch kehthi hain aur na hi kuch karthi hain she just keeps seeing sujal chup chaap... woh koshish kar rahi hothi hain ki us chuuppi mein woh sujal ke dard ko samjhe , sujal ko samjhe.... aur aise ho bhi raha tha sujal ke maathe ki shikan se kashish ko patah chal raha tha ki sujal ko uski baato se kitna zyada dukh hua hain , kitna zyada takleef hua hain.... kashish yeh baat mehsoos bhi kar rahi thi... she feels ki sujal ke chehre se uski masoomiyat chalak rahi hain... sahi baat hain sujal hain hi itna masoom itna pyaara.... woh sach mein bada pyaara hain..... ab the way kashish was feelings for sujal.. the way usko sujal ke dard ka ehsaas ho raha hain.... mujhe kashish ke liye bohat achcha lag raha hain... she is sometimes soo caring , so sweet... itni achchi biwi.... kashish kabhi kabhi aisi biwi ban jaathi hain jis tarah ki biwi ka har aadmi ko intezaar hotha hain , har aadmi ki tammna kashish jaisi biwi hogi......... 😳 phir kashish himmat karke dheere se sujal ka haath apne haath mein lethi hain... woh apna haath sujal ke haath par pherthi hain..... aur sujal ke haath mein joh sharaab ki glass hain woh le leke woh sujal ke haatho mein apna haath rakh dethi hain... ab sujal mahashay joh ab thak aankhein band karke baite hue the opens his eyes as ki woh kashish ke moujhoodgi ko mehsoos kartha hain..... sujal ko ehsaas hotha hain ki kashish uske pass hain.. he sees kashish & keeps staring at kashish intently..... ab kashish with all the love in her eyes sharab ki glass ko side mein rakh dethi hain... aur sujal kuch bhi react nahi kartha bas uski nazar kashish par hothi hain... woh kuch nahi kehtha... bas uski aankein saari baatein bayaan kar rahi hothi hain.... uff.... kya kahein... yeh sujal ki zalim nighahein meri jaan leke rahengi..... his eyes , his look hye main mar jawa.... uski aankhon mein dhoob marne ko jee kartha hain.. aur kashish ka sujal ko dekhna , she taking his hands into his... she looking at him with love.... sujal , kashish ki aankhon ka milna.. unki aankhein bina shabdo ke sab kuch bayaan kar rahi thi... & i love it completely..... un dono ka pyaar hye.... how sweet , how cute........ 😳 😳 😳 😳 ab kashish who is guilty starts saying in a low voice ki aap ne meri wajah se sharab pii rahe hain naa... sujal kuch nahi kehtha hain... he just keeps gazing at her.... & this look of sujal makes her feel even more worse even more guilty aur kashish apna sar jhuka kar kehthi hain ki she is sorry.. kashish bohat nervous feel kar rahi hothi hain... she looks at sujal for his reaction par ab bhi sujal kuch react nahi kartha bas keeps looking at kashish... & sujal is gaze becomes more & more intent... woh kuch nahi kartha... the only thing he does is staring at his wife kashish joh abhi uske saamne baiti hui hain aur usse maafi maang rahi hothi hain..... ab kashish continues saying kii woh darr gayi thi , insecure ho gayi thi... yeh sab bhi kashish nazre jhuka ke hi kehthi rehthi hain........ aur kashish apne aankhein band kar lethi hain us dard ke baare mein sochkar joh dard uske dil mein uttha agar sujal usse durr chala jaatha..... you know what neelu dear main bhi nahii jaanthi kyun lekin is scene ne mere dil ko choo liya... it was very damn well written... shayad isliye kyunki tumne the best of the emotions is scene mein dharshaye hain.......sujal ki aankhon ne bina kuch kahe sab kuch bayaan kar diya.... uske dil ki haalat uski aankhon mein saaf chalak rahi thi.... aur kashish ko bhi sujal ka dard ka ehsaas ho raha tha.... sujal , kashish ke beech ek unkaha dard ka rishtha judthe jaa raha tha... aur dard ka rishtha sab se ahem hotha hain..... shayad jis tarah se tumne unke dard ko dikhaya hain that has touched my heart , my soul completely......... seriously yaar the scene completely rocked... i loved it to the maximum extent... everything was very perfect in this scene... in short it was amazing , awesome , too good super cool... you very well know how to present each and every emotion perfectly... you never do a mistake while describing the emotions........👏 👏
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❤️ sujal sahab joh ab thak koi reaction nahi de rahe the gets up from his place , kashish thoda sa ghabra jaathi hainab kashish   ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;kehthi hain ki woh bohat zyada darr gayi thi then kashish sujal ki taraf dekhthi hain joh ki uski taraf mudtha hain..... aur ab sujal mahashay starts moving towards kashish....... kashish is very much mesmerised by sujal... woh kind off sujal ko dekhkar kho jaathi hain aur bas sujal ko dekhe jaathi hain without moving her gaze off... kashish ko dekhkar tho mujhe aise lag raha tha ki us par sujal ka jadoo chal gaya.... sujal ka jadoo kashish par kaam kar gaya... sujal ke ek look ne tho kashish ko apna hosh khone par majboor kar diya.......... ab sujal is walking closer and closer aur even more closer to kashish... now sujal , kashish are just inches away from each other.. dono hi bas ek dusare ko rahe hothe hain... woh dono apni aas-pass ki saari duniyaan bhula rahe the... they were just lost in each other... oye..oye... how very romantic could this be... aur ab to make this scene even more romantic sujal starts taking his face closer & more closer to kashish.. they both can feel each others breath on each other.. hye....... mujhe tho seeti maarne ko jee kar raha hain.... aur then sujal takes his faces even more closer to kashish's face and now there lips are not even inches apart but this time dono ke lips tho bas milli meter apart.. actually milli meter bhi nahi but they are just micro milli meter apart... & kashish joh ki thoda sa sharma jaathi hain & she closes her eyes as she wants to feel the moment.... balleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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neelu yaar this is soo damn romantic... yeh scene padke tho i was getting goose-bumps... sach mein mere roundthe khade ho rahe the.... main tho sharam se mar jawa.... sujal , kashish ki durryaan bohat durr ho rahi hain aur woh dono kareeb se bhi zyada kareeb aa rahein hain & i love it completely from the bottom of my heart....... you are just superest-duperest cooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
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ab neelu yaar my guess for the next part i think that next part mein sujal , kashish ke beech zara si duriyaan badengi... i think ki ab joh sujal is going close to kashish uske aur pass jaake usse duthkarega....sujal kahega ki woh kashish ko choona hi nahi chahtha ... he will scold her that usne usse ghalat samaj... sujal will say ki kashish kuch bhi kahe usse koi farq nahi padtha... he will say ki he gives her a damn.... he does not even consider her existance in his life... kashish ko bhi behad bura lagega but as she has decided she will keep her mouth shut... woh sujal ki saari baatein chup chaap sunegi.... she will understands that abhi sujal ki berukhi uske nafrat ki wajah woh khud hain, sujal is behaving like that just because of her...... aur sab kuch hone ke baad bhi woh sujal ko manane ki lakh koshish karegi.... aur finally usse mana bhi legi... aur humari sujal , kashish kareeb aayenge.... so how is my guess neelu dear ??????? 😉 ab please continue soon...waiting for the next part very damn eagerly........ 😛 😃

HEY POST THE NEXT PART SOON NA.......... 😭