ArYa OS: Moments in Time - COMPLETE - Page 4

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Wow Kat... 👏👏 Oh ji.. This is amazing! ⭐️

Old friends meeting back due to their children but ending up to be friends once again! 😃 Oh wow.. Would love to know the next Kat... 😉

Thanks for coming up with this OS.. 🤗

Thank you Isya.

Friends who meet again after years and their situations are changed enough for them to consider a step outside the regular bounds of friendship...the idea intrigued me, so here am i with another story to bore you all 😆.

Originally posted by: rutu83

another story from you

redundant to say but beautifully written

gotta run for now...but looking forward to the next update 😃

Not done pal!! Chalo at least you found the time to read it and drop a line. Thank you for that. But once this is complete Rutu i am expecting a more ummm...detailed/comprehensive feedback from you.

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

congrats

nice update

loved it
like is not working

Thank you Dona.

Originally posted by: sb1410

another amazing story, love the concept, please continue 😊

Thank you SB. Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Fantastic story

Loved it

Pls pm me n continue soon

Thank you Rachna. I will pm you when i finish it. But beware - you will probably end up getting pms for all my updates - not just for this story 😆.

Originally posted by: kdsubs

Thank you Zetter.

The Three Musketeers found their own 😆 - kindred souls recognizing each other. And Arti and Yash - they are bound by thin strands of friendship that survived a few years of neglect.

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

Welcome to the new OS😊😊😊😊. What an OS man! What an OS!

I just hope this OS turns into FF coz I don't want it to get finished off in 2-3 parts.😭 Keep it long, really looong!! 😉

Mindblowing! Simply amazing. 👏

2 old friends and not lovers and now both of them as single parents and their children became each other's best friends. Amazing concept yaar.

Best part about this part were the small small moments like

⭐️Palak staring at the class and they all running away,

⭐️Ansh's non-stop chattering about his new friends,

⭐️The Three Musketeers

⭐️Yash describing his twins.

Cool story yaar. Plzzz continue soon. soon matlab sooonn

loads of love

Vinu

Vinu 🤗.

Thank you so much my friend. I had this idea simmering i think - 'coz the story almost popped into my head in its current shape and nearly complete! Toh, loh main chali ayi aap sab ko bore karne 😆.

This one was meant to be a one-shot yaar. A really looong one - but still a one-shot. I will end up posting it in 2 parts (i think), but it will remain as a one-shot. I don't plan on filling in the details of the story...

Originally posted by: freya123

loved it

Thank you Freya.

Part 1 - already is so interesting can't wait to get more parts of this story