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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

This made my heart heavy Semanti!

Cant imagine how it is to live without a partner! after having loved each other and been there for eachother for most part of your life! This is killing!

A very good one indeed!! You just proved its not only Arhi that can draw us ... its the way a writer projects out any char for that matter! and this was one such example! story of Noureen aka Devyani and Abhay!

But justa min... OS 10 had Lavanya already deliver the baby! and now in 11 she is still preg?

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Wow, Nani's story was touching!

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

Nani's story was amazing
Made me cry on my way to work
Awww
Love knows no bounds

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

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You should be happy with this story Semanti.It was like reading a beautiful poem.
This is the first time I'm reading something about Nani's past.The way you made her a Malik was ingenious.I've always been confused how it could be Arnav's original surname, isn't it a muslim surname?
I loved the way you described the blossoming of love of love between Nani and Nanaji,amidst the discussions about various urdu poems.
I can't think of Nani as a shy young girl who blushes when she catches a man staring at her so I think your potrayal of a young Nani is more plausible. 😊
I liked the practical explanation for Nani's decision to change her religion.

Edited by preethi28 - 12 years ago