ARSHI FF: HOPE IN RAIN-A STORY OF PASSION, LINK TO THREAD 2{page 138} - Page 38

nice update dear...

and lovely one...

do continue soon...

lovely i like it...

keep going on...

love to read ur works...

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Omg I'm wondering and confusing myself to figure out what is actually going on??? I mean loving the banter of khushi and Akaash and keepin nks hinglsh and hindi errors is epic :) and oooh why is ASR telling Karan to stay away from khushi why didn't Karan let ASR finish his sentence..? And Shyam what's up with him?. Soo any q's I want answering hahahah can't wait for you to return :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)

oh ho!!!! so many ques but don't worry
tumka hora investigation kreka padi😆

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome update snake reaction to her was weird so he killed her already or that what he think , loved the new meaning for asr wicked loved the update he best friend is karan and arnav just warned him away from her thanks for the pm loved the update

oh thank you dumas

Originally posted by: sritha

cant wait to read more...
dis is awsome..

aww... u gav d best fullform for ASR...
HATZZZ OFFF TO MA CUTIEE KHUSHI...
i really want to see his million dollor expressions...all saying what the..
what the...

then comes d mysteriress...
who is dat psycho...??????
y did asr asked karan to stay away frm khushi...????

investigation karna hee padega...

hmmm...u r dng an awsm job...
keeep writing...
thanx fr d pm...

thanks yaar to encourage me
it means a lot to me...
you are awsm too
thanks😳

Originally posted by: Nichuss

Chaps 4

ha ha 'do we knw sir'

tat sudden que caught arnie...

Thn uptd was shrt... Describing

tjh infrastructures...

Lavs protective nature towards khushi...

Y asr selected her?????? (mystery)

aww firstly sorry for that short update next time long one pinky promise😆

Originally posted by: arshi_sush

awsum update..
loved it..
ASR.."Access Service request"..haha..dats so funny..
now why dis shyam behaves like dis when he she khushi..nd also dat karan???
wht da mystery behind it???
egarly waiting 4 nxt..
continue soon:)

every ques will be answered soonwa😆😉

Originally posted by: amforme

i really like your vampire storie

please mp

Oh god its not Vampire story 🤣
It is human story😆

Originally posted by: parvaizbk

frist I would say sorry 4 late reply. ...
your story update is awesome and I really love it.

who is karan Roy. ...????? and ASR said stay away from her... he you have to not me , Arnav said because "We don't want sher to be second Vi'." Arnav didn't finish his sentence.

"DON'T" Karan growled.

"Then stay away" Arnav growled.

"We will see" Karan said. ... why he said this. ...???????

who was come khushi dream from one month is that arnav ..."Because your protector is here to protect you"

I really love your part 3 updated to part 5 updated

Arnav again closed his eyes recalled his father's last words.

"You are her protector Arnav. If she is a bone structure, you are her upper skin to protect. Be ready for challenges."
what it means I'm really confused. ...?????????

He opened his eyes and looked at her.

"Welcome Miss Khushi" Arnav said authorative voice.

"Let the game begin" Aakash said in mind ... why he said this ...?????
is this all vampire. ...?????

Please continue. ... n please MP me 4 next update. 😊

obviously I will PM you dear
and I am glad you are liking the story, Your every ques will e answered soon in updates
and thanks for this awsm comment😳

Originally posted by: ara_000

lovely chappy 👍🏼

i think khushi nd arnav knw each other nd akaash is trying to cover up evrythng btwn them...

khushgi,i love u girl...

ur abbreviation was awsum...

"Access Service request"

goddd i was laughing aftr reading dat part 🤣

nd dat line where arnav said dat he needs sumone to tell sara dat she looks horrible wen she pouts...

rofl 🤣

nice chappy 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

so many things here in dis chappy...

shyam,wats wit him now??

karan who is he nd why is arnav nd he fighting over khuhsi??????

Girl you are awsm
thanks😃