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Irum.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

All the Best Janni.🤗

Ja jake mera naam roshan kr.

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Irum.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Mere ander ki teacher jagg gayi hai and wo keh rahi hai k apney exams pr concenrate karo .We can wait for update.

Tum and tumare future se zayada kuch important nahi.🤓

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Supriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Awesome update!!!
What happnd 2 nupur ??

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: Irum.
It ws emotional , cute and scary update.
I just loved it.

Thank you

Mayank ne kitne achey se apne parents k smnay apna point of view rakha.
oon ko mananey ki koshish ki.

Hmm...He wants everything to be sort out..

I loved his sentences'humari bacchi koi galti nahi hain'.haan mein maanta hoon mujhse aur Nupur se galti hui hain'aur mein iss galti ko sudharna chahta hoon.."
He can understand his parents nd Nupur's parent anger now ,as he himself is a father.

😳

Mujhe yeh read kr k bohat acha laga.
I think now they should forgive them.
As ooneh apni mistake ka ehsaas hai.
Or kya chaye when Mayank is ready to give a name , to give a legal and respected states to their relation.

Yeah...

Hye... cute update is liye q k shriya understood that her Dada ws hiding something,he ws in conflict.os ne Mayank ki chori pakker li.

Mayank Nupur se to kya Shriya se bhi kuch nahi chupa sakta else he'll be caught...😆

Shriya ws pulling Mayank's cheeks.How cute and adorable.

😳

scary... light ko achnak kya ho gaya.lgta hai tu ne yahan ki load shedding se impress ho kr yeh likha.

Haan yaar...mere area mein itni baar jaati hain mene socha thoda experience inhe bhi karwa doon

Bt acha hai.jb hum apni real life incident daltey hain tu story k and characters k or bhi kareeb ho jaty hain. Apne se lgne lgtey hai.
😳

Bt why Nupur screamed?

You will know it soon..😳

Kya howa hoga Nupur ko?
You cliff hanger

😛

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: Irum.
All the Best Janni.🤗
Ja jake mera naam roshan kr.

JI As you Say..Teacherji

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: Irum.
Mere ander ki teacher jagg gayi hai and wo keh rahi hai k apney exams pr concenrate karo .We can wait for update.

Tum and tumare future se zayada kuch important nahi.🤓

tum apne ander ki teacher ko shaant hi rakho mein apne exams per concentrate kar lungi...

Thank yo so much...bahut zaayeda sugary nahi ho gaya...yaar thodi bahut gaaliyan bhi daal diya ker...mere ears ko acha lagega....😆

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-
Awesome update!!!
What happnd 2 nupur ??

Thank you so much

YOu''ll will know it soon

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: ri.mn
Thanks fir tha pm

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Here is my next part...

Hope you like it...

Sorry for being delay.!!!

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 53 Page 57

Love Never Looses

Part 54

Shriya..in low voice,"Dadda kya hua Mammaa'ko...Dadda bahut andhera ho raha hain...

Mayank'opening the light of his mobile said,"Dekhte hain.."

Though it was dim but they could able to apprach to her'..they moved inside the kitchen and again called her up,"Nupur'."

A pained yet faint voice came from a direction,"Mayank'"

He tried to move their but couldn't able to locate her,"Nupur tum kahan ho'."

Nupur:Mayank mein yahan hoon'neeche''

He glanced the flash of the light of his mobile down and could see Nupur was sitting there ..holding her leg...he immeditaely rush towards her'put Shriya down and said,"Shriya Mamma k pass betho mein candels lekr aataa hoon'"

He opened the drawer and lighted the candles so that their could a little visibility'he approached to her..seeing her sitting down holding her ankle'..and her face was showing that she is in quiet pain'

Mayank:Kya hua'..

Nupur:Vo mein candels dhoondh rahi thi'achanak mera ankle stool se takra gaya aur vo mere ankle per gir gaya'.

Shriya..in a concerned tone..:Mamma bahut zaayeda dard ho rahi hain'

Nupur..carressing her cheek as she sensed her daughter is quiet tensed seeing her like this,"Nahi baccha zaayeda dard nahi ho raha hain..bas thoda sa'."

Mayank:Dikhao mujhe'

Nupur:Nahi Mayank thik hain'

Mayank..in his authortive tone ':Chup raho..aur dikhao'.

He took her ankle glanced it properly..seeing where she had got hurt'.she moans in pain'..

Mayank:Bahut Dadrd ho raha hain'

She didn't saif anything'.but he understood seeing her facial expressions...

Mayank:Mein ointment leker aata hoon'.

He again took her ankle'and massage her portion where it was paining..and very gently apply the ointment on her'..while meanwhile she maoned a bit..whenever he presses'much'..

He applied gently'ointment on her ankle..while she was'loving..staring him..seeing epitome of love infront of her'..

Mayank while busy applying gell on her ankle said to her in a teasing yet hoarse tone,"Aisa kya dekh rahi ho'."

She caught off gaurded..as she caught red handed by her to be husband..and love of her life ..and fiance'.she lowered down her eyes'in shyness'.encouraging him to pull her cheeks..but he controlled his emotions'but it seems his daughter understood'his intentions'.she stood up a little'streching her hands..and pulled her mother's cheek'.

Mayank felt blithe seeing how his feelings are bein understood by his daughter'.he felt an emmence pleasure deep inside his heart'.

After he applied the oinment'she tried to get up..but again fallen down'due to deep pain'.

Mayank:Nupur..can't you stay in this place for a while'why are you trying to get up'

Nupur:Mayank'I was trying'I need to set the dinner table there is lot's of work'.

Mayank:No more work'

He hold her from her wrist making her stand'while Shriya was keenly watching her parent's he made her sit on the chair near by'.and than'picked up Shriya and made her also sit on the chair besides'

Mayank:You both sit here..i'll bring the plates..placing candles on the dinner table..he went to cupboard to get the plates'

They enjoyed their dinner'or rather say candle light dinner'.he picked up their plates not allwoing Nupur to move a bit and if does so'but she was also very reluctant..he showed his stern look making her quiet in her rantings'

Till then light also came back..Nupur tried to get up but due to pain she couldn't..moved a bit'Mayank came to her'.hold her hand and put them across..his neck and within swift moment..he carried her in his arms'

Mayank:Shriya'..mein aapki Mamma ko..uper room mein chod ker ataa hoon'aap yahi bethe raho tab tak okay'.

Shriya:Mein bhi chalti hoon na Dadda'

Mayank:Baccha Mamma ko chot lagi hain pehle Dadda unhe chod aaye fir mein neeche aa jaunga okay'..

Shriya:Ohkay'.

Meanwhile Nupur was looking to him in a bit surprise where in return in her raised his bows conveying what-do-you-think-i-won't-carry-you'and lead her to their room'.

He soflty made her laid on bed'..and softly carressed her ankle'she was admiring him'was touched with his such a sweet gesture'.and she herself don't know'when she lost herself in him'she came back from her dreamland'when she heard a crack sound..a little pain'.

Mayank was softly massaging on her ankle and with a sudden swift moment..he twisted it'enabling a sound to escape and a bit pain'.which made Nupur to came back from her trail of thoughts'.

Mayank..in a conceredned tone':Does it pain'

Nupur:No'I didn't even fell it'.

Mayank..ashtonished':Really'

Nupur:Yeah..!!! I was lost in you'.she just blurted out what she was feeling..and than realises what she said'her cheeks were turn beet root red'while he came to her'having a grin on his face'cupped her face in his hands'and placed a soft kiss on her temple'

Mayank:You should sleep'.

Nupur:But I am not feeling Sleepy'

Mayank..in his sadu'avtar..:Nupur'.

Nupur:Okay..okay'.First bring Shriya from downstairs'.

He went down'.when Shriya was placing her all toys properly in the basket'sometimes he feels'the nature of being in decipline in her came from him and for that he felt proud on her'.

Mayank:Chale'

Shriya:Chalo Dadda'.

She held his small finger'while both father-daughter proceed towards the room'they laid'.down'lest Mayank again read a bedtime story for both the ladies'and soon the Sharma family was drifted to their dreamland'

Hope you like it

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Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago