Sabi, my invisible raincoat, pitch perfect as usual. :') The pace and tone - on song babyyy. You add the right flavors to maintain that subtle equilibrium between the drama, humor and (dare I say it?) the onset of romance.
Arnav and Khushi are married. For 'convenience' purposes only. Sureee. Excuse me while I scoff all the way up to Pluto. #sniggers
The attraction is already there. That magnetic pull. The wind blowing, telepathic thingy that makes them Rabbave. :'D
Oh it's there baby. It's there full swing, ready to push them into a big pit of unresolved sexual tension. (oh calm down you prude.)
And Khuhsi hibernates :'D. Ofc she does. Would't know if the world went KABOOM outside. And did he just pour WATER on her? :'D Oh ASR, my emotionally withdrawn baby... poor thing thinks he can actually lead a normal life. HA. It's Khushi. Jahan wo, wahan drama. :'D
I loved #6. Write #7 ASAP.
#mmmokaybye.
Edited by Firebolt - 11 years ago
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