Kripa finds out the truth! (fan-fic) - Page 6

hey PM 😊

u r doing an excellent job 👏 😉

keep it up. 👏 .. 👏 .. 😉 😆

cant wait for whats going to happen next 😉 😆

love KP 😉

that was soooooooo cool pm...plz cont. soon

👏 👏 👏 such a sweeeettttttt part PM 😛 😛 😛

Hey Everybody 😃 ,
HAPPY RAKHI!!!!!!! To all my brothers out there, aap saab jeeyein hazaron saal! Jai mata ki! 😊
To all my sisters…um? Happy Shopping?.... 😆
and to everyone else, have a terrific day!!! 😃

Special thanks as well to Happe, KP, bollygirl87, cheen2005 and stonex for your comments, you guys are really too sweet. 😛

Here we go again:

Oh my darling Valentine!!!

It's Febuary the 13th and Angad and Kripa's wedding is now only 4 days away 😕 [abhi bhi chaar din baaki hain, kuch bhi ho sakta hai 😉 ].

Amidst crazy preparations, Angad, who's too preoccupied with what clothes to wear, seems to have forgotten another very special occasion.

Angad, profoundly stuck between what suit colour he should wear at his wedding, frusteratedly asks Aliyah:
Aliyah yaar, in saab stupid colours mein se mujhe konsa suit karega?

As Angad holds the suits up, Aliyah closely examines each before making her decision.

Aliyah (sarcastically):
Aab brother, YEH colours stupid hain YA PHIR 😉 --------, yeh toh mein nahin jaanti par filhaal, yeh black suit aap koh kaafi suit kar raha hai. (very good choice Aliyah! 😉 )

Angad (cheekily): very funny…

Aliyah: (smirking) Acha brother ek baat batao, aap Kripa koh Valentine's Day par kya derahe ho? 😳

Angad (as if a thunderbolt has just struck him): Sh*t!!! VALENTINE'S DAY!!! Yeh toh isi month 😆 hai naa?

Aliyah (trying to control her laughter): ISI MONTH??? Brother, Valentine's Day toh kaal hai.

Angad (more serious): Oh my God! Mai to completely bhoolgaya! 😕

Aliyah (jokingly): Haan brother, waise mai kuch dino se dekrahi hoon ki aap kuch zaada hi bhulakar ho rahe ho. Brother, kahin Kripa ke khayaalon ne aap koh budha toh nahin baana diya naa?

Angad (peeved): Shut up Aliyah! Yaar, meri maadat karne ki bajai tum to mera maazak urarahi ho…aab bolo, mein kya karoon?

Aliyah just replies sweetly: Sorry brother par is maamle mein mai aapki maadat nahin kar sakti. Aapko khud hi kuch sochna hoga. 😉

Angad is left pondering for sometime. Meanwhile Aliyah's cellphone rings 😉 . Anxious to know who's on the other side, Aliyah answers:

Hello?

Josh: ------(his voice seems to have gone on vacation 😆 )

Aliyah (somewhat frustrated): Hello? ....HELLO?

Josh: -----(his bladder is about to explode 😆 )

Aliyah irritatedly hangs up the phone 😛 . After a few moments of looking at Angad's suits, Aliyah's phone rings once more.

Aliyah: Hello? Hello? (feeling her temper rising, she exclaims!!!) Arre Idiot, kuch to bolo?
( ouch!!..bechara Josh!! 😆 )

Again Aliyah hangs up her phone in vain only to hear it ring again moments later!

Aliyah (without answering politely): Tum kya pagal ho?

Josh (silent at first but then starts to studder):……hi Aliyah..mein Josh bol raha hoon 😳

Aliyah (embarrassed): Aree..hi Josh, sorry, patani itni der se koun ulloo ka patha phone kaar raha tha 😆 (Josh wimps… 😛 )..Anyway, bolo kya kaam tha?

Josh (feeling himself turn scarlet): Actually Aliyah..vo..um..tum…mai....

Aliyah: Haan Josh..saaf saaf bolo, kya baat hai?

Josh: Aliyah, tum..tum..tum …meri Angad se baat kara dogi? (Idiot! )

Aliyah: Sure Josh..bas ek minute! (Looking towards Angad, Aliyah softly exclaims) Brother Josh ka phone hai.

Now turning the phone towards Angad, Aliyah uninterestly hands it over and leaves her room immediately after.

Angad, surprised at getting the phone on Aliyah's phone, answers: Hello Josh..haan bolo kya kaam tha?

Josh (both relieved and frusterated at himself): Hi Angad. Vo actually Angad..kaal valentine's day hai..

Angad (remembering his own stupidity): Haan yaar Josh, mujhe bhi abhi abhi pata chala..toh?

Josh (flustered): Haan Vo Angad, toh mai soch rahatha ki kyon naa hum kaal Lover's Caf mein milein?

Angad (rather confused and somewhat worried 😉 ): Josh, tum mujhe Valentine's day pe aapne saath Lover's Caf anne ke liye invite kaar rahe ho? 😆 😆 (poor guy)

Josh: Haan… (now more scarlet than ever) Nahin 😆 …mera matlab hai ki tum, Kripa, Aliyah..hum saab

Angad now understands and thinks it not such a bad idea, his simply replies: Oh…acha acha.um..teek hai Josh, hum saab phir kaal milte hain around 8? Ok?

Josh (frusterated at himself): Ok Angad! 😕 (Josh yaar..kya karna tha, aur kya kaar baithe)

Angad: Bye!

Josh: Bye…eh.(hesitantly).Ek minute Angad!!!!

Angad (fatigued): Aab kya hua?

Josh (again studdering): Vo..actually mai soch raha tha ki tumari aur Kripa ki abhi abhi toh engagement hui hai 😳 . Toh tum dono ko bhi thori si privacy milni chaiye hai 😉 ?

Angad replies with sincerity: Thanks yaar Josh. Tum kitne considerate ho. Theek hai phir, kisi aur din milinge! 😆

Josh (immediately): Par Angad…vo..kam se kam..Aliyah ko to bhej do 😛 !

Angad, finally getting the hang of whats happening, says: o Aliyah, patani yaar uske shayad aur plans honge. 😉

Josh (mouth-wide open): AUR PLANS?

Angad: Par mein phir bhi use kehke tumare paas bhej doonga kaal ok? 😛

Josh (relieved and anxious to hang up): Ok! Bye Angad!!

Angad (laughing to himself): Josh, tum to badi chupe rustum nikle!!! 😃


Sorry Guys..I am suffering from writer's block..so this part kinda sucked.. 😭 😭 but i will try to improve it next time

awwwwwww thats ok, dont worry PM, take jr time, n this part wasnt that bad as u think it was 😛 😛 😛

Aww..thanks Cheen2005 😃

My brain seems to have gone on vacation..waiting for it to come back!!! 😆 😆

Originally posted by: pmehra

Aww..thanks Cheen2005 😃

My brain seems to have gone on vacation..waiting for it to come back!!! 😆 😆

i stopped waiting for mine long time ago since prithvi started showing signs of negativity in KYPH 😉 hope things turn out well in the show 😛

Thanks Bollygirl 😛

Hey guys…

Well, I think my brain's back from vacation so I figure, I mite as well get a few of these Josh-Aliyah scenes out of the way since they're kinda crucial to another chapter in the story 😊 . Anyway, please bear with me for the time being and we'll soon get back to the Angad/Kripa in dreamland sequence- my personal fav 😉 !! Love you all!

This scene will introduce, Rajesh (Raj) Verma, a cameo role, which will be played by Ejaz Khan.

Valentine's Disaster!!! 😕

Yep, its finally Valentine's Day and like a good friend, Angad has kept his word and asked Aliyah to meet Josh for coffee since he and Kripa can't make it. Aliyah agrees! 😃

Josh, meanwhile, has his eyes glued to the door waiting for Aliyah's entry. As he sips coffee, Josh reherses his conversation with Miss. Lady-love in his mind. Moments later and to Josh's delight, Aliyah walks into the caf 😛 . As he gets up to go and receive her, Josh immediately halts realizing that Aliyah is not alone 😕 . Accompanying Aliyah is a medium-build, dark young man . Surprised, Josh immediately resumes his seat anxiously waiting to find out who this mysterious man is.

Aliyah (smiling): Hi Josh

Josh manages to also forge a smile as he replies: Hi Aliyah!

Aliyah (looking flustered and embarrassed): Oh..Josh, by the way, please meet my friend Raj. 😕 Raj ek chemical engineer hai aur vo kaal hi London se aaya hai.

Introducing himself as Rajesh Varma, Raj and Josh stiffly shake hands as Aliyah continues:

Aliyah (apologetically): Vo..actually Josh, maine aaj Raj ke saath coffee par jaane ka program baanaya tha, par, jab brother ne bataya ki tumne bhi coffee ke liye bulaya hai, maine socha ki kyon naa hum teeno coffee ekathe kaarein. I really hope you don't mind!

Josh lies: No..not at all…please have a seat Raj (poor guy.. )

Raj, Aliyah and Josh talk uncomfortably for sometime. Somehow figuring a sort of tenseness between the two men at the table, Aliyah attempts to, but is unsuccessful, at creating small talk. Both her and Josh heave a sigh of relief when Raj excuses himself to go to the bathroom.

Immediately after Raj quits the scene, Josh unhesitantly questions: Aliyah, saach saach batao, ki yeh Raj koun hai? 😕

Aliyah ponders momentarily but eventually agrees: ok..par promise me ki tum kisi se kuch nahin kahoge.

Josh (quickly): Acha Baba nahin kahoonga. Aab toh batao.

Aliyah starts slowly: Vo actually Josh, Raj aur mai college mein ek saath the. 😕 Hum ek doosre ko kahi saalon se jaante hain, aur ek doosre se bahut pyar bhi karte hain.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>BAAM<< <<<<<<<<<<<<<<< <<<<<<<<<<<< 😭 😭 😭

Feeling himself turn red in the face, Josh attempts to control his emotions 😭 as Aliyah continues:

Aliyah: Actually, vo kya hai naa ki brother aur Kripa ke beech itni saari problems thi ke mujhe kuch kehne ka mauka nahin mila. Aur phir, gharwale bhi Raj ke baare mein kuch nahin jaanti toh mujhe unke reaction se bhi daar hai.

After momentarily thinking of how to reply, Josh answers: Well then Aliyah, I am very happy for you!! 🤢

Aliyah (gratefully): Thanks Josh.

Upon Raj's return, all three continue with their conversations, this time a bit more at ease with one another. Immediately following the coffee, Raj and Aliyah politely excuse themselves leaving a rather heart-broken Josh all alone. ( 😭 that too on valentine's day!!)

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Meanwhile at the Sharma residence…

Its around 4 pm in the afternoon, Kripa has been out shopping all day for her lenga and jewellery. She walks into her house and her eye immediately catches site of a small parcel labeled KRIPA SHARMA. Recognising that the handwriting belongs to Angad 😃 , Kripa anxiously opens the parcel, inside of which, Kripa first uncovers a short letter. She opens it to read:

Dearest Jaan 😃 ,

Mai aaj tumhe aapni duniya ki saabse haseen yaadein bhej raha hoon. Ine aapne paas sambhalke rakhna.

Happy Valentine's Day!

Angad 😳

Kripa curiously shuffles through the paper tissues in the parcel. As she flips through the blocks of tissues, Kripa curiously grabs hold of a small yellow parchment stuck to the bottom of the box.

Kripa's eyes well up as she uncovers an aged, but still extremely familiar Sindoor Ki Dibbi! 😳

Thanks Amrit84 & Fallen Angel..

Yes I know..my Angad is a sweetheart 😉 😛

awwwww so sweet cont soon it was gr8👏👏👏