SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#511

The last thing I wanted in this update was you are not my type... Ohh,Poor Khushiii, she is sooo broken... I loved the strong khushii at the end of the ride, where she asks him to be in his limit and not to repeat that again.. Superb dialogue..

Everything felt so meaningless. That he cared, that she cared. In the end, it all meant nothing.

I am in love with this sentence... Awesome update as usual.. Waitng for the next update..Thank you for the PM..😊

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cheval

@cheval

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#512

Omg an emotional update omg im so sad for both asr cant explain himself n he spoke rubish n that hurt kushi soo kuch plz help hem...

Beautiful update dear veryvvery beautiful

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Again one more beautiful update !! Poor khushi! Arnie really broke her heart saying shes not her type! Arnie sure u have gins nuts!!

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#514

Poor Khushi! Hopefully Arnav realizes
soon enough and helps Khushi mend her broken
Heart!

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#515

so the great ASR ended complicating things even more. It is obvious Khushi being deeply hurt tried to put a brave face... wonder if Arnav will now be able to fix the situation

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#516

Beautiful part.. very well written..

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Jay

@Sharaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#517

Beautifully written Dear...

My heart goes for Arnav & Khushi's helplessness...

you r graft perfect with each update... 🤗

You r not my type... So, this is all confused Arnav able to put on...

Poor Khushi, 💔 shattering to the core...

still, she finds he care for her...

i love this Khushi, seeing positivity in every her hard times...

Loved ur portray of Devi Maiyya in their life...

Cant wait for next part dear...

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#518

The way u wrote abt the emotions playing in their face and in their mind was fantastic Farah di 👏🤗
Khushi's attempt to be bold in front of Arnav and then crying in her room,reminded me of the Diwali night😭😭But the diff in Arnav here and ther was so much...here Arnav wanted her to understand him and his feelings...
So DM made a decision,So fashion show nw😉Waiting for their meeting in the show and their reaction esp Arnav's😃
Aman's love story after this😆😆that line cracked me up😆
Awesome Awesome update asusual Di🤗

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Ruki.F

@Ruki.F

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#519

dammn on u ASR .,.. i really hate him in this part .. how could he just say that she is not his type .. poor khushi .. will be waiting for next update ... post it soon dear