TRULY...MADLY..DEEPLY - Updated Chap 5 - Pg 27

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Heya Shahi Didi

Wonderful Update

love it very much

as always beautifully written

The concept is very strong and good

Love between a servant girl and a high class Boy

And the boys parent trying to separate them

A classic Story I tell U ...

Maya and J arent Brijraj's daughter ??

are the adopted r something ?

hmm Well personally I think Veer's dad is pretty rude

Dadi seems like a positive character and I m guessing she might

help veer to find HIS maya ... I like her

sad to hear that this promising story will have only six parts

anyways continue ASAP

thanks you for updating and also for PM

Take Care

Hugs

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

omg chapter one was awesome poor maya has to scarifies her love and I just cant wait for veer entry please update the next part soon and thanks for the pm

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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Hey Shaishta di 🤗

How are you ?

You don't know how excited i was to see your PM !

Your updates make my day even better 😃

And believe me i am not FLATTERING you 😆

Fabulous update 👏

Loved it 😳

So Manyata was kinda forced to write the letter !

Dadi is really sweet and a very positive character !

One to stand up for Maya and Veer !

Saaheb means Veer's father, right ?

Whatever, that guys needs to be set right 😡

He is so rude

That is a small word 😆

How can he talk like that to a girl ?

And he sent Jai away to a boarding school ?

Poor Maya

She got to hear so much for NOTHING !

Is Maya some kind of a worker in the house ?

Veer is so enraged at getting that letter !

And he is on his way back to Mumbai, isn't he ?

Atleast that is what the promo suggests !

He is the same angry guy here 😆

Hope he is able to be back in time !

And stop her !

Is this just a 6 chapter story ? 😲

That's sad ... 😔

Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago

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Shahista

@Shahi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: annesha18
awesoem update jiji.. thanks anni😉
loved the first chappy.. glad you did
awn so good thank you
i am loving the dadi me 2😉
argghh this saheb i mean uday dad
whoever he is
how could he speak about a girl haan sadly there are people like this in the world who have no value or respect for women
like this right infront of there father
esna jalei huye karaai mei aur jalana chahiye.. i agree with you..
again i love some dialogue
DADI
Maya I know how much you love him, your eyes say what your lips will never admit, veer is not going to accept this, his is my grandson after all. He doesn't take no for an answer' thank you..
THNK FOR THE PM you welcome..
UPDATE SUPER ASAP lol..
SORRY FORGOT TO ASK
HOWZ YOUR HEALTH NOW.. anni meh bilkul theek hoon.. no worries😆😉 you are just 2 sweet.. 😉
HUGSS ANNI right back at ya
LOVE YOU luv ya 2
MUAHH muuaahh

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azwa

@fireroad99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Thanks for the pm and I love ur concept and

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Awesome chappy 👏
Loved it 😊
Thanks for the pm and do update soon

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

heart breaking update poor manyatha she is being forced away from veer and saab is such a bas***d how could he say all those dirty thing so sad thanks for the pm awesome update very emotional

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Ravneet Kaur

@Fantasyangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

good start shahista👍🏼...this taklu giri kabhi nhi sudhrega😡...cont soon nd thanku for the pm...

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Afsana01

@Afsana01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Shahista01

Thanks afsana😉

FIRST CHAPTER WAS AWESOME. FELT BAD FOR MAYA LISTENING TO THOSE TERRIBLE WORDS FROM VEERS FATHER. IS VEER ON HIS WAY? AND WHY ARE YOU MAKING IT A 6 PART STORY, IT IS SO FULL OF PROMISE AND INTERESTING. THANKS FOR PM