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Kalyani Nitin Bujone

@Kore-Soteira

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Hi Rumpu 😊.

A very nice FF from you.

Very well written 👏.Also I m a big admirer of your work.

Sorry for the late reply because my exams were going. Also could not comment on your previous FF, The Couhant heart was Undefined.

Hope you can understand me.

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: smiley4567
Hi Rumpu 😊.
A very nice FF from you.
Very well written 👏.Also I m a big admirer of your work.
Sorry for the late reply because my exams were going. Also could not comment on your previous FF, The Couhant heart was Undefined.
Hope you can understand me.

aww...sure my dear😊

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: surprising

Miss Paramita,
aapni ki janen jara aappto-shanto & jolly hoi r boi-patra niye thake tara jadi satti satti rege jai...ki hote pare???????????
wise men jadi weapon hate tule nite badhya hoi, emon kichhu nei ja tara trakhan korte pare na.

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: surprising
Raag karchhis Kar jato khushi..😭kichu bolbo na...amai to r pabi na erpor theke takhan bhalo kare raag karis.😭

ekhono amay khocha marchhe tor oi comment
oi comment er jonno 2 bar sidi...so srry...amar kono katha bole toke bother korbo na bolechhi...srry once again.

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

nice dear

continue soon
😉

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi
Continue soon...

what??
golpo na jhagda??

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Loved It !!!!!

welcome kokli🤗
missed u

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: DeewaniRimi
Galpo...

ok ok...don't get so serious
updating Monday.

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

2nd part

I don't touch you...

Arnav doesn't get panicky...it's not the 1st time...he can't help being surprised to see the person!!

-you still have a piece of cotton on your uniform.plzz return this.
-you can do it yourself.I'm just a convict right now.

The lady touches the edge of revolver on his ear so harshly that a drop of blood rolls down...

-I don't touch any guy.
-ahh?? then how can u gift me this red drop??
-I myself don't touch you.there's a tube of the weapon.

Arnav is paining a bit.He remains silent.

-hmm...you seems calm...I don't meet such a pilot before.
She smiles.Arnav looks at her fully.
-How can you trespass here?? HOW??
His voice is full of gravity.

-angry young man!! hmm...you have no right to ask me anything...but you are bound to obey my words.you should arrive North Pole.
-with 210 passengers??
-no,not at all.just you & your companion.we have done good behavior with them...we're gentle at all.isn't??
-what about them?
-you can make them get down just before the border of North pole.

Arnav feels that there's no another choice.He heaves a little sigh...15th August...

-but why I?? & my aeroplane??
-Because we like eligible person.
-What do you mean?? I never do it.disgusting!!

She makes the revolver sticking him so heavily that he is bleeding more,shivers a little out of pain.
-I don't touch you.That doesn't mean I will hesitate to hurt you. understand??

Just then a female voice,quite stony & rough says out of Arnav's cabin-

-Khushi, you are talking too much...he's not your fellow.mind it.Perform your duty.

She hits him with edge...he gets senseless.

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