Finding Love #5: COMPLETED

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

Nice update... Both want to slow down, but in the mean time they can not control their desires. I liked both dresses. Khushi plan of romantic dinner was perfect, the canopy and flower petals was beautiful. Eagerly waiting for next update...

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

yeh toh cheating hai...(will get back to it later...)

but d update was very long...it was wat i was looking for...such long one...d reader in me was satisfied...

i love d way u describe a scene...bringin in d minute details...nd concentarin on each update...

wen u look at d concpt of dis stry...u realise dere is nothin much to explore...but we r all severlyy wrong... u have actually given us in detail "wat happens in a happily ever after"!!!!!!

nd now proceding to dat last part...we wnt to read it...but if u're not comfy den koi baat nai... nd d last line was so so so beautiful...it was so much pure...dat why its called making love...:)

i hope we get to read dat part...if not...den looking frwd to dere boston exploration...

p.s. like u said dis update was beautiful dat we wnt let a bitch like lavayna spoil it...:@

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

p.s. thnks for d PM di...:)

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Seethu

@Seethu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

That was one mind blowing update !!! Enjoyed every bit of it ..

Though he booked one room , he was still hesitant about his decision ; after all he is a perfect gentleman !!! and loved him more, when he was getting uncomfortable :)

I'm glad that Khushi came up with something so special for Arnav because all along Arnav has done so many things for both of them and now is Khushi's time and she nailed it soo well. Loved their dinner , her dress and the setting .. so romantic !!!! She trusts their bond and Arnav too !!!

Beautiful pictures ; they added more beauty to your narration !!!

Thank you for such a long update !!! Can't wait for the next part :)

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Neen

@nnsunn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

Amazing update.
Good that khushi decided not to bring jealousy in between their relation, but wonder how long she wil be able to stick to her decision. Arnav gifting her bracelet on her 18th birthday was so cute. Likes how both arhi are trying to make the other happy. The dinner was beautiful.

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bakula_gandhi

@bakula_gandhi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

update was too good

hope that khushi will never doubt arnav again no matter what

these two are just to good for each other

continue soon

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

Nidhi , this is sooo not done !!!!! Why did you have to stop there ? Their kisses were scorching and so passionate !!!! Arnav is so considerate of her feelings and even in the heat of the passion he was thinking of her ... You have to make it up by giving us loads " The Deed " in the upcoming chapter 😳 ... In fact loved all the last 3 chapters which I caught up just now ... The progression is just awesome ... Hope there are no repercussions when Khushi comes to know that Lavanya is coming to New York !!!!!!! The dinner date was simply so beautiful ...