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Posted: 20 years ago
baby in one scene....mmm..oh well we can write tons and tons after the baby...guys wat shall we cal da baby... 😆 😳 And i read someones comment and it said "so this is the end" NOPE...this is not the end! infact just the beginning 😆 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
Hmm...yeh what shall we call him? The baby better not get in da way of their romance 😆 i;m going to be a bit busy for the next few days coz its my bro's engagement! So i may not be able to write a scene! Khushi where is sum? I haven't seen her in ages? 😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
Awesome part, it was great 👏 👏 plz continue
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Posted: 20 years ago

Recap:

They play w/ him.... meanwhile the doc informs everyone outside and they all celebrate... they come in and look at the new baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Scene 94

Vedika and the baby are brought back home. Everyone is extremely happy. Dhruv and Vedika with the baby bring the baby to the bedroom. Vedika puts the baby gently into the baby cot. Both look at their beautiful creation. Vedika puts her head on Dhruv's shoulder.

Vedika: [sighs] He's so beautiful...

Dhruv: [smiles] Hmm..[kisses Vedika's hair] Thank you!

Vedika: [looks up at Dhruv, smiles then puts her head back onto his shoulder and closes her eyes]

Dhruv: Suno?

Vedika: Hmm?

Dhruv: Naam kya rakhe?

Vedika: [lifts her head up again to look at him] Maa ne guruji ko kal bulaya hai. [looks at the baby] Woh hi koi acha sa naam rakhege...[smiles]

Dhruv: Bhai va...bacha hamara aur naam rakhe koi aur..

Vedika: [angry] Dhruv...aise nahin kehte. Tumhe pata hai mummyji kitni maanti hai usse! Anyway, we will be given a letter, and we'll choose a name from there.

Dhruv: Teekh hai. Lekin tum toh sojao...kitni thakhi hui lagrahi ho.

Vedika: [looking completly weared out] I am... [she puts her hands up in the air indicating Dhruv to carry her to the bed]

Dhruv: Kya hua?

Vedika: Carry me!

Dhruv: HAve you seen yourself! Kitni moti lagrahi ho...how will I carry you?😆

Vedika:[gasps] Dhruv!

Dhruv: You have...[points to the mirror] Dekho

Vedika's stomach looking quite big obviously after the pregnancy. She turns to him.

Vedika: I don't care. That happens with every mother...Mujhe uthao!

Dhruv: [gives in] Teekh hai!

Dhruv carries her to the bed😳, and puts the tired Vedika down. But she stil has her arms round his neck.

Dhruv: Choro...

Vedika: Nahin..

Dhruv: If I stay in this position then i'll have a backache later on. Jaane do na...

Vedika lets go, Dhruv gets up to walk away. But Vedika grabs his hand.Dhruv turns round to her...

Vedika: Dhruv?

Dhruv: [sits down next to her]

Vedika:[tired] Tum mujhe kabhi chor ke to nahin jaoge na?

Dhruv: [smiles] Kabhi nahin...

Vedika: Agar mein aisi moti rahoogi to bhi nahin jaoge na?

Dhruv: [shakes his head]

Vedika: Even if i turn fatter than I am, you still won't leave me, will you?

Dhruv: [smiles] Vedika, tum bahu thak chuki ho. So jao..

Vedika: Tumne jawaab nahin diya...

Dhruv: [holds her hands tightly] Vedika....agar tum moti, kali...jo bhi ho banjao. [pauses] To bhi mein tumhe nahin chorke jaaooga! You are me, and how can I live without myself?😳

Vedika: [smiles] Promise? [keeps on closing her eyes because of her tiredness]

Dhruv: [kisses her forhead gently] I promise. [rubs nose with hers] Now go to sleep

Vedika smiles away to sleep. Dhruv stays beside her...and the baby is sleeping peacefully as well!😃

Edited by DkDish - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
Sorry it wasn't very entertaining. I can't decide on the name...the next writer can! 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
no it was good!! dose any1 hav name suggestions?? 6 more n 100 scenes!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was very good, plz continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
soo cute... gud job 👏
someone continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
reemz dat was awesome....and dont worry the romance between dhruv and vedika can never die 😃 awww u have fun at ur bros engagement! 😃 😃 make sure u tell us abt it....and yeh sum...i hope she's well..miss her 😭 😭 guyz....im gna be busy tommorow..got guests from Pak coming...so ill try and write on Fri...and as for the names....give us some suggestions guyz...and den we can have a discussion abt it 😃
Edited by srk_rulz - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
okay guyz..ive decided im gna write one tonite..wait an hr..and ive thought of a name..if u guyz dont like it den plz do tell me and we can always change it! 😳 have to wait abt an hr till u find out the name 😃

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