MG SS Love Zealots.LAST CHAPTER-PG 68,21/6/2013

CONTEST : IPL 2026 Prediction Game

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

my god!dear u write exceptionally well!!i can't fathom to start how much oved the story,despite the fact that u chose a complicated storyline for ur first written story.
pls cont soon dear.

Quote

glitch1110

@glitch1110

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

@ bloom Thank you so much dear..

@nostalgic soul Thank you so much for your encouragement...😊It means alot...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

when u gonna update ?😔 😭

Edited by Sonia.KN - 12 years ago

Quote

glitch1110

@glitch1110

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN
when u gonna update ?😔 😭

Tomorrow dear..

Sorry I could not update today...

Quote

glitch1110

@glitch1110

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

removed😊

Edited by glitch1110 - 12 years ago

103

Quote

Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

awww.. thats so beautiful,.,,,,,she sharing her little treasures with him... everyone has such stuff, which look so stupid, but were cherished by us at some point of time , to the extent of being possessive about it... those tender moments between them always make me go goey eyed and feel mushy... i love this simple story well told, succinct, that touches the chords of our heart and leaves me with 'feel good' feelings

Their love was safe from pricking eyes of the society in this darkness...

i love this line...😳👏

Edited by yappingduck - 12 years ago

Quote

Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Me speechless...I always think that I put each and every emotion with perfection in my stories...But u made me speechless...Omg never read such a beautiful depiction of emotions...

While sitting far away from my country I am feeling like experiencing hot summer evening of my native place.When I was used to make mango shakes with mangoes bought from street wanderers who still comes to my place as my mom and other relatives tell me...

U made me remember the electricity cuts few years back which are very less now...Such a wonderful depiction of Geet's emotions related to prized possessions...Each and every word seems a scene running in front like a movie scene...

The dupatta scene omg this seems like happening with me my mom or my close one removing blanket from me and putting dupatta on me...

Have to say so much but I am not getting exact words...But really want to say just one thing this is awesome.Turned into one of just few works close to my heart...

Hats off in front of such a great writer...😳

Plz update soon

Edited by Sonia.KN - 12 years ago

Quote

glitch1110

@glitch1110

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: yappingduck
awww.. thats so beautiful,.,,,,,she sharing her little treasures with him... everyone has such stuff, which look so stupid, but were cherished by us at some point of time , to the extent of being possessive about it... those tender moments between them always make me go goey eyed and feel mushy... i love this simple story well told, succinct, that touches the chords of our heart and leaves me with 'feel good' feelings

Their love was safe from pricking eyes of the society in this darkness...
i love this line...😳👏

Thank you so much yappingduck..😃

I am sure,you also have such a "treasure" with you...

Quote

Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Since last few updates, everytime I read this, I feel like something is going to happen, like the moment will break or something, the vulnerability, innocence, care and those unsaid emotions...
Another awesome writter in GF (sometimes you remind me of palindrome, you both write simple, touching stories bole toh jinme mitti ki khusboo aati hai :) :)(ignore my analogies :P) ).
Again looking forward to the next update...

P.S. That stapoo stone reminded me of my obsession with some good shaped, acchi quality wale stones, we used to carry our own stones in bag to school :D :D.

Quote

Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos
Since last few updates, everytime I read this, I feel like something is going to happen, like the moment will break or something, the vulnerability, innocence, care and those unsaid emotions...
Another awesome writter in GF (sometimes you remind me of palindrome, you both write simple, touching stories bole toh jinme mitti ki khusboo aati hai :) :)(ignore my analogies :P) ).
Again looking forward to the next update...

P.S. That stapoo stone reminded me of my obsession with some good shaped, acchi quality wale stones, we used to carry our own stones in bag to school :D :D.

so so true u said so much for which I was searching words coz I hav no words for such a superb writer