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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anitasharma

Awesome update
loved it
continue soon

thank u so much di😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
yay!at last i cumpleted readin one of ua pmzz..
nd sabse pehle ek badiwaly sry dt too holdin ma ears for bein so so so late...AM REALLY VRY SRY DII...sholly..
nw cumin to ur first pm it was osm blossom..!!!nd ye kya isme toh tahira is drunk!!waow..!!kya ladki hai yr..ekdum opposite bt still perfect fo vihaan..Nd den cums deir freakin hawwwttt kiss!!damn dii!!kya unexpected evnt tha..!!gosh!!seeriously di i totally njoyed d first pm..nd thanq thanq vry much fo remindin me to read ur epiz...nd plzz di bhulne vulne ki baat kabhi bhi na kiya karo cuz ye choti si dil ko bohot pain hota hai..uaan uaan :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
nd next update baad me padh lungi dii..itz too late na isiliye..byees..bt kal pakka read kar lungi..!luvya...<3 <3 <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayye!d cutest epi...bt rona bhi aaya tha!
i loved d whole epi...beach romance bohot cute tha..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 28

The next day placed with the usual activities for rey.

But the past flashes were still a disturbing element for him.

At swaron's place'.

It was night and swaron were lost in each others eyes at the dinner table'..

But their trance was broken by the door bell'.

Swayam went and was amazed to see taani at the door'.

Many thoughts came to his mind'.

He was perplexed and tensed at the same time'.his forehead got sweaty'.and his heart beat suddenly increased'.

With great might he managed to speak something'

Swayam:taani tum yahan 'sab theek hai na?

I mean is rey alright?

Bolo na'

Taani: chill bhai'.main aur rey bilkul thek hai

Infact I have a come up with a surprise'.

But before that call Sharon bhabhi'

Swayam: thank god !!!!!

But what surprise ?

Taani : oh ho bhai'call bhabhi na'.

Swayam called Sharon and she was out the very next minute'

Taani: okk'guys close ur eyes '.plsss and no question

She was smiling and the later did the same'

Swaron closed their eyes'

And after a fewseconds'.taani asked them to open their eyes and see the surprise'.

Swaron opened their eyes slowly and saw a bunch of people with similar faces but changed mannerism standing at the door'.

They all were smiling'

Swaron shouted at the top of their voices'

"the gang"

Yes it was the gang who too shouted with them, increasing the decibel of sound''..

Swaron literally took a step backward'.but the very next moment

They hugged each other like crazy''.

They rejoiced each and very moment of their meeting'..asking about each others whereabouts'..

Vicky: abbey itna bada ghar hai andar nahi bulayega ?????

And the all laughed'.

Everyone went inside and sat in the drawing room with their life partners'

But one thing which was not the same that they were accompanied by young toddlers'yes they had kids'

Vicky and Neha had a cute 3 years old daughter Samaira'.

Vishakha and Bharat were recently married after Vishakha's constant dejections so many times while Nil and Simmi had a cute 3 year old baby boy named Raghav'..

Amar and Rinni had twins named Akriti and Akshay' who were just an year old

So now the gang included new members who were so cute that their smiles enlightened the whole place'

Sharon and taani arranged snacks and drinks for everyone and they all sat together''

Taani took Samaira in her arms and stared at the her enjoying her cute antics'..

While sharon sat with raghav in her arms''.

Swayam: tum sab yahan aise ?

What a pleasant surprise?

Par sab theek hai na guys'.

Taani:haan bhai wo actually kal raat rey ko unn paanch salon ka pehla illusion dikha'

And he was deeply terrified'.

I went to the doctor'.and asked for his advice and he said ki hume unki life ki sabse zyada important cheez unhe vapas deni hongi so that when his past memories are back he can easily put them aside because of the happiness in his present'..

We have to make the acceptance of past easy for him'.

Bharat: to bhai log isliye taani ne hume phone karke sab bataya aur hum se help mangi'

Nil: yes dude Reyansh singhania ki life ka matlab hai'..

Vicky: dil pointing towards taani who was blushing by then'.

Amar:dance showing tutting steps

Simmi , Rinni,Neha and Vishakha all in unison'.

"dosti"

And they all stood up for a group hug'..

But their hug was a short one because it was broken by the high frequency crying shouts of the toddlers'..

All of them looked at each others face'..

Trying to find out what is gonna happen next'.

Bharat: oh teri !!!!!!

Pach se pehle yeh kahan the'..

Nil:right dude'..rey se kya kahen gaye'..

Neha: Neha too thinking the same'.my Samaira ka what will happen ?

Rinni: oh god mujhe to chakkar aa rahe hai !!!!!!!!

Amar: kuth soth Swayam ? (not understandable)

All looked at Bharat for help'..

But the person who made everyone understand was taken to be a surprise'..

Rinni: He means kuch soch swayam ?

And amar and rinnie were lost in each others eyes'.

Everyone including the girls raise their hands and shouted "CHEMISTRY"''.

and they all chuckled'..

Bringing amar and rinni back to life''

Swayam: hey guys rey's memory is stuck before five years and by then u guys were married for only 1 year but how will we deal with the kids'..

Sharon: Swayam theek kahe rahe hai''

Taani: bhai I have a plan'..

U know in my NGO young coulples are even given training to be good parents or to take good care of the infants'.

Swayam : so ?

Taani: so bahi agar "taking care of young kids" ko ekk weapon ki tarah use Karen to''.

I know its very difficult but main unhe janti hun, isliye hum unhe yeh baat ekk aise way mein kahenge that he wont be able to doubt ur intentions ?

Bharat: abbey hindi main bol na''

Vishakha : bharat wait na yaar main tujhe samjha dungi !!!!!!

Everyone again " CHEMISTRY" smiling

Sharon: stop it guys !!!!

What do u mean taani'..

Taani: I mean ki bhabhi humare group ki USP humesha se kya thi''

Everyone blattered out : "ladai and jhagda"

Taani: ya right !!!!!!(smiled)

So we will tell him that during an outing of the whole group the gang found a couple fighting ''

Where The woman accused her husband of not taking proper care of their child so the husband took up a challenge to take care of the baby for about a month without any help from his wife''

To which the girls of our gang have put a bet that the men can never be good at taking care of the baby'.

To hum un se kahenge ki the girls have challenged the boys that they cant be good parents and the boys have accepted the challenge and will now help the ladies in taking care of the kids'..

All the girls after listening to taani's words gave a big laughter'..

Neha : that's perfect waise bhi babu not knowing Samaira ki care karni !!!!!!!

Simmi: yes even Nil is too bad at it (smirking)

Rinni: even Amar is no better

Vishakha: dude Bharat to apna dhyan bhi nahi rakh pata '..baby ka rakhega and waise bhi baby to isse dekhar hi dar jayega'

and they all chuckled

all the boys stood up'.

Vicky:what do u girls think hum babies ka dhyan nahi rakh sakte'..

And the very next minute the couples started fighting''

While taani and swaron were watching all this from a distance'..

Sharon: I was terribly missing this noisy atmosphere (she said smiling)

Swayam: now I m dam sure taani ur plan will work agar rey yeh dekhga to pacca convince ho jayega'

And the three of them laughed'..

Swayam : okkk guys'..

Stop it'.he shouted so that he could be audible'.

Taani: haaan guys now stop it and listen'.

How will Rinni take care of both Akriti and Akhshay ?

Sharon: taani ,if we will present it as girls versus boys to Rey then I and Swayam can also participate''

Taani: but bhabhi according to rey u r not married so how will you ?

I mean'..(she said it with a sad face)

But suddenly her expression changed what if the prize of this competition (if boys win) is U marrying bhai'..

Swayam: what ?

I mean what an idea sirjee''

Sharon: yes its brilliant waise bhi according to rey we are not married because I don't say a yes so this prize thing is amazing ''.

And swaron hugged each other and so did the rest of the couples

But there was taani standing alone in the centre watching love blossoming every where''

Her eyes had tears as she missed Rey..

Tanni: thank u krishna ji''

Plsss mere rey ko thek karne mein meri help karna'.

Rinni looked at the kids and absent mindedly asked'

Rinni: par kya yeh sahi hoga ?

Taani: guys main kissi bhi halat mein bachon ko tum se dure nahi hone dungi'.

So the only option we have is this but we will do this only when u all are comfortable'.

Neha: Neha ko Samaira se dure nahi hona par dost ke liye I not stepping back !!!!!

So main tumhare saath hun Taani'.

Sharon:Main bhi (and she smiled) but only if rinni is ok that I keep Akshay with me
Rinni : come on sharon!!!!!

Tum iski Masi ho to I trust u completely''

All boys: Rey ke liye juch bhi''

Waise bhi wo hamara hero hai'..

Taani: But guys u all are established,

I mean aap sab known dancers hai even after ur families. Today u all are well know choreographers so again starting the Dance group D3 will it be a right decision?

All the gang members stood in a line facing her'..

Sharon: jitna pain tumne feel kiya hai Taani usske baad tum sari kushiyaan deserve karti ho'.

Vicky: rey humara star hai taani hum jo bhi hai kahin na kahin rey ke wajah se hai so hum sab D3 ko dubara start karenge for Rey'..

Nil: taani, so what agar ab hum saath mein bahut kam perform karte hain lekin dance se humesha se connected the aur hain'.isliye we ll back as D3 because our hero is back'.

Taani: par girls aap log ????

I mean the kids'.

All the girls exchanged a glance and smiled'..

Neha: so what we have our young kids but dance has always been our passion and none of us(girls) left dancing at any point of time ''so u don't worry taani'.we still dance dear'..

Humne D3 group tab band kiya tha jab rey humare saath nahi tha'..

Par humara aur dance ka rishta kabhi nahi toota'.. infact we girls still perform at all levels'(she said it proudly)

Taani: Thank u guys. So tom be ready for ur meeting with rey ??????

Promo:

Soon the finished their breakfast and went to the drawing room'..

Taani: arrey rey par kya aap jante hai ki humare gang mein aajkal girls vs boys chal raha hai'.

Rey: (shocked) what ?

Not again?

Waise kiss baat par?

Taani: arrey rey aap jaante hain na that ab inn married couples ke jhagade high level ke hote hai'..

so guys kya rey gang ki baat man lega ?????😆

but uske liye thoda w8

now like and comment my sweetie pies😃

Edited by shivi77 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear ... I mean it was full of masti , friendship and love 😊 amazing 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply loved the update it was amazing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is what is called simply amazzing work shivi i loved it yaar i loved the toddlers very much and the update was such a sweet one yaar nd i know surely rey man hi jaayega 😳😳😳 plzz update asa p eagerly waiting yaar😊
Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its amazing loved it very much n gang reunion n for rey n their plan is awesome... wonderful update do continue it soon n pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update... loved it... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
BIG SORRRY SHIVVI... for my lare reply... lol i loved viaaira confession. her capacity 15 shots of taquilla. m loving this girl. confession seq was brilliant. hug, kiss everything.. nd about taarelicous chapter it was freaking awesome. loved reys surprise. roomantic, simply beautiful... chap 28 was amazing .. loved d pics of our chottu gang. i love der bonding.. eagerly waiting for next chap..
Edited by gowri_amy - 12 years ago

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