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Posted: 19 years ago
jai realllly scared bani ๐Ÿ˜†
c if u can update this once u leave..if u r 100% sure that u can not continue this once u leave..then finish this FF b4 u leave ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
but only if u r 100% sure... if u want we can wait for your updates... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 19 years ago
haila...what ws that...
absolutely superb... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
sahil and adi..baap aur bete ki toh bohot jamti hai...
haila...teasing jai...loved that...de totally deserves it...
and omg..jai and bani...that was totally kuch kuch hota hai...loved your scene too...absolutely superb...
bani must have been scared out of her mind...
but haila...finding a shirtless JW in your bedroom isnt a bad start to the morning... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
bohot sari ladkiyaan ki yehi toh saapna hai... ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
JAZ
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Posted: 19 years ago

no ending it... try to update.. tell jiju to get u internet ๐Ÿ˜† wateva u want sam.. howeva u like.. cuz as much as i luv ur ff. i want u to enjoy ur vacation.. just chill fo the 2 months.. u know wat i mean.. cuz u can start a 3rd ff when u come back ๐Ÿ˜‰ not u can.. its more of U WILL.. sooooooo its up to u.. i won't put pressure on u.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ i'll have long comments fo d PREVIOUS part.. meaning part 27.. cuz boy do i have a lot to say or wat ๐Ÿ˜† as fo part 28.. DDLJ - srk style.. aye haye.. mujhe neend na aaye.. mujhe chain na aaye.. koi jaaye zara dhoondh ke laye.. na jaane kahan dil kho gaya.. na jane kaha dil kho gaya ๐Ÿ˜‰ he couldn't sleep.. decided to visit bani.. now HOW did i know he would do that.. luveddddddddddddd it. longer comments r for the previous scene.. they'll be up tonight.. if not tomorow for sure ๐Ÿ˜‰

p.s. jai tumhara dil toh mere paas hai.. sighhhhhhhh ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

so like i said... no pressure.. even though i luvv reading it.. cuz there's no other bolder bani or khadoos jai on IF.. than ur ff's.. but i want u to chill and enjoyie.. u deserve d break.. u know wat i mean๐Ÿ˜ณ

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: pakiza_srk

hey sanam,

i think u shuld take the chance and se if u can post for there or not! but def not end ur superb FF!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

for how long will u be there?


I agree............don't end your FF๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 19 years ago
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owww man!!!! funny couple.... truly deserves each otha....... ๐Ÿ˜†

cont soon buddy........ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

it was GOOD....... ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sanam84

okay here go the detailed comments...remind me again why am i doing this? ๐Ÿ˜•
beedi is going on while im doing this...lol

Part 22

In the car

Jai โ€“ bani kya hua achanak you wanted to leave, were you not enjoying?
jai dont ask her...she just got a jhatka..it will be hanikarak for u!

Bani liesโ€“ nahin Mr Walia aisa kuch nahin sirf thoda tabiyat theek nahin lag raha hai. aur ab kabhi teekh nahi hogi...for sometime atleast!

He takes her hand โ€“ Bani are you all right, do you want me to take you to a doctor. (Ab to tumhi uske doc ho Jai) sahi baat boli...tum 'samajhdar' ho rahi ho!๐Ÿ˜‰

His touch sent quivers down her spine, she very disturbed

Bani snapped โ€“ I am fine I just want to go home and rest. are u sure u wanna rest, nothing else๐Ÿ˜‰

Jai is quite after a bit she feels guilty for snapping at him he was being so considerate.

Bani โ€“ I am sorry Mr Walia, I snapped. haila..bani sorry and all...tumhe haq hai yaar๐Ÿ˜†

Jai - Wow, Ms. Dixit snapping, that's gotta be a big thing, after all, you are knowing for being all sweet and kind to me right? (Says it in a sarcastic tone) shut up jai...bechari is scared cant u make out...be considerate!

Bani - Come on Mr. Walia, I am not that bad, and yes I am very sweet and kind, who can know it better than you? (smiles flirtatiously) hai hai

Jai gives her a dazzling smile- you do it all the time but I don't mind, its thrilling coz no one else dares to do it. chance pe dance ka irrada hai jai?๐Ÿ˜•

They reach her home.

Bani โ€“ thank you Mr Walia it was a lovely evening. sure was!

Jai does not want it to end, he wants to be with her a bit more. He is surprised at himself. hota hai...bade bado ke saath hota phir to tum jai walia ho!

Jai - Ms. Dixit, Let me drop you by your door, after all I wouldn't want the lady to go back alone at this time of the night alone would I? (gives her his signature smile) chance pe dance for sure

Bani - Thank you Mr. Walia, but I am very much capable of walking myself, but if you wish you can join me. (smiles nervously) wht more does she want yaar๐Ÿ˜‰

They walk to the elevator, alone in the elevator they have their eye lock session their heart beats increasing, they reach her door, jai takes the keys from her and opens the door to let her in. elevators always do this!

She stands uncomfortably at the door

Jai โ€“ won't you ask me in for a coffee? jai dont be so quick in ur actions also...

Bani is too shaken to speak

Jai โ€“ don't you trust me? hahahhaa

She just moves aside thinking " I don't trust myself anymore"

Jai closes the door.

Jai โ€“ I guess you wont have any whiskey or something strong?

Bani - Of course I do, why wouldn't I? After all I am the type of girl who gets drunk all the time right? (says it very nervously but at the same time is flirting)

Jai - Wow, first you are nervous and now you are sarcastic. Ms. Dixit you never seize to amaze me. As for the drinks we will have to get you a few bottles tomorrow. chalak chalak chal chalak chalak dil chalke ke re...

Bani stammers โ€“ I don't drink.

Jai huskily โ€“ but I do. (now wot does that mean will u be visiting often, haila Jai sharam karo). wohi, kuch to sharam karo tum bharat me ho, videsh mein nahi..๐Ÿ˜†

Bani instinctively โ€“ then I'll get some for you, no need for you to bring, then she becomes very conscious, she blushes, he laughs (ye kya ho raha hai, bani use pine se mana karo, but pyaar mein hosh kahan tumhe)

Bani uncomfortable - I'll make coffee, she goes in the kitchen, he follows and stands by the counter just watching her, she nervous, keeps dropping things, he just keeps smiling and looking at her back and she can feel his eyes devouring her being. This was the hardest coffee she had made in her life. but the most fruitful ๐Ÿ˜‰She puts the coffee on the tray.

Jai โ€“ let me take it out for u, you'll drop it and I don't want you to go thru the whole process again, tho it was very amusing to watch.

Bani knows he is teasing her, trying to lighten the atmosphere.

Bani โ€“ Mr Walia I don't make coffee at 2 in the night with someone just watching and laughing at my discomfort.

Jai โ€“ I am glad to hear that.

Bani surprised โ€“ and why wud that be?

Jai smiling โ€“ I am the only one to receive this honor. hai hai...

Bani blushes, he puts the coffee on the table, takes her hand and makes her sit beside him on the sofa. He did not leave her hand instead stroked tantalizingly at her pulse, which immediately quickened at his touch. She tried to pull her hand back but he dint let it go, he slowly, deliberately lifted it to his lips, never taking his eyes from her own. His lips touched her hand in a genuine caress, and his eyes glowed as they poured seduction into the entire gesture. bani was completely shaken, this time she pulled her hands back with a determined force and he let it go but kept smiling seductively. no comments๐Ÿ˜ณ

He hands her the coffee and saw that her hand shook. There was electric tension in the room, bani could feel it physically, she blabbers

Bani โ€“ Mr Walia I dint know you cud sing so well.

Jai a bit shy โ€“ I never sang before.

Bani instinctively - Can you please sing again.

jai- geet gaata hoon main gun gunata hoon mein๐Ÿ˜‰

Jai laughs โ€“ oh Really you liked it so much you want me to sing again, will you dance with me again then.

Bani flustered โ€“ Mr Walia please

Jai moving very close โ€“ Please wot Bani

Bani goes beetroot, she is very uncomfortable, jai sings huskily in her ears his breadth warm on her neck

Guncha koi mere naam kar diya, saki ne phir se mera jam bhar diya
He moves back, lifts his coffee cup to his lips, then puts it down

Tum jaisa koi nahin is jahan mein, subah ko teri zulf ne shaam kar diya

He reached out his hand and let it trail through her hair, coming close and smelling her hair whispering, "I love the smell of you" the warm glow inside her burst into flame, she quickly got up and moved but he entwined his fingers with hers lightly, she looked back and he continued

Mehfil main baar baar idhar dekha kiye, Ankhon ke jazeeron ko mere naam kar diya

She moved away, he got up and followed her holding her from behind

Hosh bekhabar se hue unke bagair, wo jo humse keh na sake dil ne keh diya
saki ne phir se mera jam bhar diya.

Bani โ€“ Mr Walia why are you doing this.

Jai softly โ€“ wot am I doing Bani.

Bani โ€“ you know very well wot you are doing, don't do this to me Mr Walia.

He turns her around tracing one finger across her mouth โ€“ I don't know myself wot is happening, but I like you Bani Dixit, should'nt admit that, should I? But its true, I want to know you, I don't want to be wrong about you.

Bani โ€“ Mr Walia I don'tโ€ฆ..

Jai places a soft kiss on her forehead โ€“I want to know the real Bani, I enjoy fighting with you, there's an excitement about it, you make me smile when I don't want to, you make me ache and I don't want to do that either. After our trip to Khandala, I found myself thinking about you. Your face would rise before me at meetings, in the car, in bed, I tried to shut it out, tried avoiding you but was helpless, You have got under my skin. I know this is madness, and he nuzzles her neck, but I can't help it anymore. Tumne mughe bilkul pagal bana diya hai. Ab mera khud pe koi bas nahin hai. I need you Bani.

Her heart was beating frantically and her blood was rushing thru her veins. He kept whispering to her huskily as his lips moved along her face. His hand kept moving through her hair, slowly, and she found it difficult to breath, she lowered her head afraid to look into those eyes that could drown her. He lifted her chin and it was a shock to see his eyes dark and full of passion.
They looked at each other for god know how long, the air vibrating around them. She instinctively moved towards him and wrapped her arms around him. He hugged her back, held her tightly. Both had craved for this moment, the closeness, and the warmth of their bodies. He kissed her then, full on her lips passionately, it was an explosion, her head was full of stars, her body full of fire.

okay no comments on this part...in no frame of mind...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Jai lifting his head โ€“ Bani say it.

Bani choking on the words โ€“ Say wot Mr Walia?

Jai โ€“ that you need me too.

Bani โ€“ Mr Walia Iโ€ฆ

She was going to say I love you but Suddenly jai pushed her away, ran his hand thru his hair, bani was too shocked, too flustered to realize anything, jai looked towards the door, he had heard the keys being inserted bani followed his gaze and the door opened and Rishi entered. Rishi takes a look at both of them and at first is confused then is embarrassed

Rishi โ€“ I am really sorry, I saw the lights on and just thought maybe Bani is not back, I wanted some eggs, I dint have any and I was hungry I am sorry if I disturbed you guys, he was blabbering

Jai had turned his eyes back to bani, it was still dark but not with passion, passion was replaced by anger. Raging anger (baap re ab to mughe bhi dar lag raha hai, rishi to to cut le beta)

Jai snarls still lookin at bani โ€“ no you did not disturb anything important, in fact I was leaving, I just came to drop her, then looks at Rishi and says with voice full of sarcasm, why don't you have some coffee instead bani makes real good coffee. cmon jai show her some daya...bechari is more embarrased angry and scared than u will ever be!

Bani is shocked at the way he said that she feels sick at all that was happening, Jai walks off with a "I'll see you in the office"


here u go...i have 6 more parts to go!

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Posted: 19 years ago
Ha Ha Jai scared bani soooo much, serves her right for getting drunk and teasing him so much, i would of loved it if Jai was siniging to her like she was to him!!!!!

If you can update a again please do, i don't like waiting but i heard all good things come to those who wait so i guess i must learn this!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜‰

have a great time and come back soon. ๐Ÿค—

sharan XXX
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Posted: 19 years ago
sanam nice part
and cont ur ff there is internet facility in my India n if u cant find any come to my place n we will cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
AWESOME part as always!!! saw a bit off DDLJ there ๐Ÿ˜‰ luv the humor and teasing... uh huh jai... dil se pooch... jawab mil jayega ๐Ÿ˜‰ continue soon sam di!!! cho cute... khadoos finally in LUUUV!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 19 years ago
ds is mindblown plz don't end such a good ff

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