Ariya::AASHIQUI-Tom & Jerry's Love Story(completed - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
nice update dr.

riya is in danger.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Wow!!! Nyc part!!!

Ek request hai... plzz Arjun aur Sikander k show down mein Riya ko damsel in distress nahi balki ek fighter dikhaana...!! Plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
amazing update :) loved it
love the way they were posing as couple
car scenes were so funny
riya shifting to arjun's home :) awesome
omg somebody hit riya on the head
and sikander has kidnapped her
hope riya is fine
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arjun & Riya::AASHQUI-Tom & Jerry's love story

Atlast Rathod speaks...

Rathod:-shree..Riya ka phone trace karo..

Shree:-koi fayada nahi he sir..phone usake purse mein he..aur purse yahi pe..(he look to dining table..)

Rathod:-arjun ko aaya hua phone trace karo..

Arjun:-nahi hoga..call sirf 20 second ki hi thi..we can't trace it..

Rathod:-ab kya kare..

Shree:-sir..meine Riya ko ek Ring di he..jisme transmitter fit he aur mike bhi..

Rathod:-that's really good job Shree..usse track karo..

Shree:-haa..sir..

He started his tab..they all waiting for some information from Shree..

Arjun(angrily):-15 minutes ho gaye he Shree..aur tum abhi tak usse track nahi kar paye ho..

Shree:-5 minutes more sir..

After sometime..

Shree:-sir..track ho gaya..mein mike bhi on karata hu..

Arjun:-usaki location kya he..?

Shree:-sir location track hone mein aur 10-15 minutes lagege..

Rathod:-damm..it..On the speaker shree..

Sikandar(tenderly):-aakhen kholo meri jaan..are koi paani dalo isape..

One man throw water on her face..she open the eyes..& sence pain in her head..

Sikandar:-uff..tumhari aakhen to badi hi khubsurat he..bilcul tumhari tarah..

Riya(angrily):-tum..muze yaha kyo laye ho..?kyo bandh ke rakha he muze?tum nahi janate mein kon hu..

Sikandar(coming near to her):-mein janata hu tum kon ho..ETF officer ho na..par usase bhi jayda Rawte ki GirlFriend ho,yeh baat jyada important he..

Riya(she understand that the man standing infront of her is 'Sikandar'):-chodo muze..kya chahiye tumhe?

Sikandar:-yeh kya..darling..meine tumhare bare me sari information nikal rakhi he..aur tumhe mere bare me kuch bhi pata nahi..kya tumhare BoyFriend ne tumhe bataya nahi ke ham dono itane acche dushman he..ke ek dusare ke sivay reh hi nahi sakhte..

Riya:-oh..stop it..apni bakwas band karo..aur muze yaha se jaane do..

Sikandar:-jaane to dunga..par tum apne ghar wapas nahi jaogi..ab tum sidhe 'Swarg' jaogi..bechara ACP ne pehale apni biwi ko marte hue dekha ab tumhe dekhega..

Riya:-uff mere seer mein itna dard kyo ho raha he..?

Sikandar:-oh..jaan bahot dard ho raha he..?thodi der aur seh lo..bas tumhare boyfriend ke aane tak..fir tumhe dard nahi hoga..kyo ki tum zinda hi nahi rahogi..

(Riya knows about the transmitter fit in her ring..she thinks perhaps..Shree has already started to track her..she has to wait for sometime..then her team will arrive soon..)

Riya:-tumhe kya lagata he tum aur tumhare ye 20 log unhe rok payege..?

Sikandar:-uff..kitana vishwas he tumhe apne pyar pe..lekin jaan..jaha tak muze yaad he..Rawte ek insaan he koi superman nahi jo ek sath 20 logo ko mar sakhe..

(he & his men started laughing loudly..)

She make a drama that she is fainted..

In Riya's house they all are hearing Sikandar & Riya's conversation..

Rathod:-she is very intelligent..ussane socha hoga ke ham log usse track karne ki koshish kar hi rahe honge..so usane jitani information woh hame de sakhti thi de di he.. usake sath 20 aadmi he..isaka matlab he 'Sikandar' ne puri planning kar rakhi he..

Shree:-hame bhi puri planning ke sath hi chalana hoga..

They all lost in their thoughts..

After 5 minutes..

Shree:-Sir Riya ki location track ho gayi he..

Arjun:-kaha ..?

Shree:-sir..Andheri me jo bada warehouse he waha..par woh exactly kon se godam he pata nahi..

Vishal (angrily):-agar Riya ko kuch hua na..toh Arjun aur Rathod mein tum dono ko nahi chodunga..meine pehale hi tum logo ko Riya ko iss mission par bhejane ke liye mana kiya tha..

Rathod:-plz..Vishal ye waqt aapas me ladane ka nahi he..let's think some plan..

Arjun's phone started Ringing..

Arjun(looking to Rathod):-unknown number..

Rathod:-usika hoga..speaker pe dalo..

He receive the phone & on the speaker..

Sikandar:-Rawte..itani der phone utane me..apni GF se pyar nahi he kya tumhe..?mein janata hu..ab tak tumne apni puri ETF team ko laga diya hoga kaam pe..par tum unhe itani takalif kyo de rahe ho..?ye tumhare aur mere bich ki baat he..agar tum unhe isame involve karoge toh..yaad rakhana tumhari biwi ki tarah tumhari GF ko bhi...(he laugh cruely..& cut the phone..)

Arjun:-Shree?

Shree:-no sir..call 60 seconds ki nahi thi..so I can't track it..

Arjun take a deep sigh..

Arjun:-tum sab log yaha se nikalo..

Rathod(angrily):-Rawte..?

Arjun:-haa..mein bilcul thik keh raha hu..tum abhi yaha se nikalo..woh zarur Riya ke ghar pe nazar rakhe hue he..usane tum logo ko mere sath yaha aate hue dekh liya hoga..Shree,tum meri har call pe nazar rakhoge..'Sikandar' zarur muze akele ko hi uss jagah pe bulayega..mein yaha se nikal jau..usake baad tum log Rathod ke ghar se nikalana..

Rathod:-agar sahi calculation kare toh isaka matlab he ke..tum 'Sikandar ke pass pehale pohchoge..aur fir usake sidhe 5 minute baad ham log waha par..usse shaq bhi nahi hoga ke ham tumhare piche aane wale he..

Arjun:-exactly..

Rathod:-ok..chalo guys..ham log chalate he..

They all leave except Arjun..

After half hour,Arjun's phone ring again..(shree & whole team is listing it at Rathod's home..)

Sikandar:-bahot acche Rawte..tumne apne team ko bhej diya..

Arjun:-ab tum usse chod do..tum jo kahoge mein woh karunga..

Sikandar(laugh loudly):-tumhari GF ke ghar ke bahar ek chitti padi he..usse utao aur aa jao apni GF ki maut ka tamasha dekhne..(he again laugh & cuts the phone..)

Arjun open the door & take the envelope lying on floor..he read it..

Again his phone rings..

Sikandar:-milgaya tumhe Address..?jaldi se aajao..tumhe milane ke liye..tumhe apne pyar ke liye tadapate dekhne ke liye mein bahot hi bekarar hoo..aur haa..apna ye phone wahi par chod do..mein nahi chahta ke tumhari team tumhe track kare aur unhe bhi tumhari GF ko tadapte hue dekhana pade..

(he cuts..the phone..)

Arjun take a deep sigh..& put his phone on dining table..& leave the home..

In Rathod's House:-

Rathod:-what is this..?ab ham Arjun ko kaise track karenge..

Shree:-don't worry sir..meine sir ko apana handset diya hua he..woh toh unake pass hi hoga..ham usse track karenge..

Rathod:-brillient Shree..chalo ham log bhi nikalate.he..

Shree smiles on Rathod's compliment..& they all leave..

Arjun reaches to the godam where Sikandar have told him..

He is holding gun..(he knows..his team will be there within 2-3 minutes..they will track him by Shree's mobile..)

He carefully taking each & every step..

Sikandar:-Rawte..apni gum niche rakho..(one man of sikandar standing behind Arjun point his gun to Arjun..)

Arjun:-Sikandar..usse chod do..mein aa gaya hoo..woh kaha he..

Sikandar:-are are..usse dhekhne ki itani jaldi..hogi bhi kyo na..woh he hi itni khubsurat..thik he..tumhari ye ichha puri kar dete he..(to his man)lekar aao usse..

That man goes..& come within a second..holding Riya's shoulder by one hand(she is still making drama that she is not conscious..)& putting gun to her head..

Sikandar:-bandh do usse..(the man tie her to a chair..)

Arjun(angrily):-meine kaha chod do usse..

Sikandar:-par pehale tum apni gun niche rakho..Rawte..

Before arjun can put his gun down..someone throw the smoking gas near sikandar(it's Vishal)..& the firing get started..

Due to the smoking gas the all men of Sikandar become helpless..but still they continue firing on ETF members who wares a mask to get protected from smoke..(Chotu throw a mask to Arjun also..)

The Sikandar's men not stand infront of them for very long time..almost all his men get died..& all other are thrown by Chotu to outside of 'godam' where inspector Patil is taking care of them..

During all this battle..noone is paying attension to Riya..she get safocated as the smoke gas is thrown very near to her..she is breathing heavily..& trying to untie the ropes by which she has tied to chair..(all ETF member is known that Riya is struggling..but they can't do anything..because near to her Sikandar & his 2 men are continuously firing on the team..)

Sikandar get angrily when he see that his strengths become low..his men are caught.. & he realized that all his bullets are finished ..he take a knife he run towards Riya...untie her(she again pretend to unconscious)

He hold her hand & pull near to him(he always keep a gun in his back pocket for backup..but now he don't want to use it..as he want to kill her like he kill Roshni..& want to give more pain to her & Arjun also..)

she drama that put his hand on his back for support but remove a gun from his back pocket & put the gun immigiately in her back pocket of jeans..

But before she can realize..he cut her hand near wrist by knife

Riya(yelled):-aaahh..

Arjun(hears her voice& shout):-Riyaaa...

Sikandar:-Rawte..abhi apni gun niche rakho aur sab ETF members bhi..(all comes in Sikandar's view now)warna ab sirf isake haat ko kata he..agali baar sidhe isaka gala katunga...

Rathod:-no..no..tum kuch mat karo..usse chod do..ham apni guns niche rakh rahe he..

They all keep their guns on floor including Arjun(one man points to Arjun Head & another is standing near to Riya with pointing his gun to Riya..Riya is still yelling & Holding her hand)

Rathod:-'Sikandar tum Riya ko chod do..'

Sikandar:-agar tum log muze yahase sahi salamat jane doge toh mein usse chod dunga..

Rathod:-thik he..lekin tum pehale Riya ko chodo..

(Riya come to know..they are leaving 'Sikandar' to save her..she is not going to just see this..she won't leave 'sikandar'..Sikandar has kept knife on Riya's neck now)

She make her mind..she remove the gun slowly from her pocket & before 'Sikandar can realize he fire him in his stomatch..he lye down on floor due to this sudden firing..the bullet hits from very near so he just crumble down on his leg..without wasting a second ..she use her karate skill & throw a back kick to a man pointing gun to her..shoot the man at his heart who is pointing gun to Arjun..

Arjun quickly take his gun..& shoot the man who is kicked by Riya & now he is again stand & trying to shoot her..Arjun saw 'Sikandar' is geeting up throwing knife to her..he shoot to his head..& kill 'Sikandar'

They all run to Riya..

Rathod:-Riya tum thik toh ho..?

Shree(hug Riya):-Ritz..?

Chotu(is checking 'Sikandar'):-he is dead..

Arjun look to 'Sikandar'..his all pain again starting hurting him..

Riya:-aaahh..

He look to Riya..her hand is full of blood..& her cloths also bloody..He remember Roshni's death..he can't see Riya now..he just leave from there hurrily..

Chotu(calling Arjun from behind):-Arjun sir..sir..

Rathod:-usse akela chod do..

Vishal(angrily):-tum log sirf dekhte rahoge ya..ambulance bhi bulaoge..dekh nahi rahe kitana khoon beh raha he usake haat se..

Chotu call to ambulance..

Riya is looking to Vishal..he is almost teary..& very worried..holding her unwounded hand..she kept looking him & close her eyes after a minute..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
awesome update :) loved it
sikander is so disgusting and cheap 😡
riya is really so smart
finally they tracked riya's location
awww shree was so happy when rathore complimented him :)
omg riya got injured 😭
love the way riya shot sikander and finally he is dead
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
thankgod riya is safe but i really hate vishal
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Nice update... Hope Riya s safe... finally Sikki dead...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
awesome updates
finally sik is dead😈
riya is so smart... poor her she got hurt😭
arjun couldn't see riya hurt & left
hate vishal😡 he is annoying so much😡
hope riya won't go back to him such a flirty guy
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
superb update...!!!
yayy...!!! finally sik is dead...!!!
loved riya's smart moves...!!!
ohh no she is hurt...!!😭 hope she is fine...!!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Nice update
do continue soon.

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