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This was amazing rin! you write so well.

Very intense n yet in chartacter for both asya! pl continue

Originally posted by: Kaya13

Yaaa !!! Me first ...Awesum OS U really shud write more!!!

Thank u! 🤗
I will try to but this is just a OS. If any scene inspires me, ill definitely try write more! :-)

seriously awesoommee!!!!

Originally posted by: giee

Rin i knew u could write well...but that well????? 😲
okay i m at a loss for words to describe this os 👍🏼

i could actually imagine that scene
it was sensuous 😳
such an adrenaline rush i had while reading it
why didnt u mail this to cvs??

the way he pulled her
to the way he looked at her
from her heavy breaths
to her inner desire ☺️
i could imagine all of it

how badly i wish that they KISSED
n i loved the way he asked her i she really wanted to engaged
wohoaa it must have sent current through her body if it had happened actually 😳

but the way u explained their pov
is just simply FABULOUS 👏
i loved each n every word of it

soch mere pass words nhe hai to maine itna likh dia
if i had the correct words to mai thesis likh deti 😆
but rin babe u habe to write more n more 😃

okay so my exact reaction was this

OMG Sweetheart, Thank you for such an extra long review!! 🤗

Hahahaha... Im Sooo happy my OS effected you so much. It was what I was trying to do. I wanted you guys to actually imagine it happening. I usually suck at describing scenes.

Lol! I would totally made them kiss but Asad is still not ready for it 😛

Once again dear thank u for all the kind words and the extra long review!
Glad u liked my OS 😃

it is beautiful...could actually feel the intense chemistry

Fabulous...👏 I wish we cud see something like this in da show as well..😳

You write really well 😃 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Amri174

Sizzling.

Crackling with chemistry.

Red hot.

Engrossing.

On the whole, a well-knit tale!!!

wow. Thank u so much! 😃