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1973anu thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
How do u imagine and create such sequences... excellent πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Senpoo

Hi all!!! I'm very happy at this hour to receive the FF of the Week award from "The Bhatnagar Chronicles"!! I would like to take this opportunity to thank all my ardent fans 😳for liking my FF!!


And ofcourse for giving wonderful feedback which keeps me going with the pages!!!
*Poo brushes off sweat from her forehead after a non-stop speech on the stage after receiving the award from the hands of Guru darling* πŸ˜‰

I would like to dedicate my award to all my wonderful readers!!! *Poo raising the award high up in air and kissing it* πŸ˜†Too much drama right!!! After all I am an NBT lover!!! πŸ˜‰



πŸ‘πŸΌ well deserved Poo πŸ€— U did hard work to achieve this goal...n now enjoy this moment... πŸ₯³

@Bold... *Peu is clicking Poo's pic with award* πŸ˜† wah...cool captured πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG πŸ‘ Can i Like this upate more than 1 time ?? πŸ˜› No...then count my 1 like as many times as u can 😳 I loved ur update sooo much πŸ˜ƒ πŸ€—

Wht else to say πŸ€” Okk...let me make list here πŸ˜ƒ

I love d Megha RJ part ❀️ Super adorable How RJ made Megha wait for long time ...thts was soo adorable shararat My fav part when Megha asked RJ abt Mohan's girl dates out of extra-quriosity πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

I love Mohan-Addu sensible talking πŸ˜‰

I love Mohan recieving Love letter n d description of his date on tarrace * i m blusing by imaging only*

I love Mohan-Nanhi teasingly play πŸ˜‰ Also Guru joined them 🀣 Sab tang khichte hai Majnu ka πŸ˜†

Last but not d least..U...U r awasome πŸ‘πŸΌ so many creative addings in 1 update...so far this is d best update πŸ˜› Keep imagine stuffs like this n keep adding them in every update πŸ˜‰

Thanks for d PM πŸ€—

P.S...Sorry for d delay in commenting 😳


Edited by Megher_Palok - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks everyone for super liking Page 13!!! Yeah I know, too many good things in a single page and that's why I'm unable to hold back the page thus posting it soon!! πŸ˜ƒ I think now I have put myself into trouble raising your expectations!!! πŸ˜‰ Hope to keep up with the same! Thanks all, once again!!! So sweet of you to provide detailed and lovely feedback that keeps me going as always! πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Senpoo

Thanks everyone for super liking Page 13!!! Yeah I know, too many good things in a single page and that's why I'm unable to hold back the page thus posting it soon!! πŸ˜ƒI think now I have put myself into trouble raising your expectations!!! πŸ˜‰Hope to keep up with the same!
[DIV][/DIV]Thanks all, once again!!! So sweet of you to provide detailed and lovely feedback that keeps me going as always! πŸ€—


Hahahaha πŸ˜† yeah u did πŸ˜‰ Obviously u had put urself in big trouble πŸ˜† But keep up d hard work n keep delivering us much better updates than 13 πŸ€— U can do it Poo...*Peu is cheering for Poo* 😳 πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

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"Jikki, Jikki"

"Who is this Jikki, sweetie?" Megha always found Rimjhim energetic and enthusiastic. Rimjhim had never missed an opportunity to express her love for Megha, in every way.

"It's you my dear Jhansi ki Rani!" Megha laughed out loud and wondered how Mohan was managing there without this little sparkler

When Megha decided to bring Rimjhim with her home for the next few days, Rimjhim had no bounds to her happiness. She liked Megha and wanted to be with her anytime of the day. When she entered the house, she met Renu who was practicing for a speech in English.

"Hello ladeej and gantlemen! It ij my pleajure to meet you all. Dhis is a spejial occajion for you as you gat to meet me today. "

"Haaa haaa! What a burfomance!!!" Rimjhim just burst out in laughter and claps

Though Megha tried to hold herself down, she could not help chuckling. Renu stared at them

"Who is this shaitan?"

"Who is this peepa?"

Jiji walked laughing at Rimjhim's instant response and said to Renu "Kids are like mirror! They reflect what you want them to! Look what happened" Renu ignored her and continued her practice.

"Jiji, this is Rimjhim, my favorite student from the Summer Camp. Sweetie, this is Jijibua"

Jiji understood her context and did not want Renu to know anything.

"Hi Jijibua! Can you make a nice dress for me too?" Jiji was surprised at her request and found Rimjhim checking the dress that she was holding in her hands.

"Sure I will, babyji!" Rimjhim gave a smile shyly at Jiji's address and she hugged her

"She is such a sweet darling and knows only to love" As Megha praised her, Rimjhim hugged her and said "Just like my Jikki"

Rimjhim settled comfortably in the living room when Megha took her things inside. Rimhjim noticed Renu standing on the table and talking, as if she's on a public stage. Mischievously Rimjhim just shook the table and Renu got terrified at the shake. She started chasing Rimjhim who laughed and ran around giving a challenge to Renu.

"Looks like Renu got some tough rival now" Jiji laughed telling Megha

*****
"Do you mind if I join you guys?" Nanhi and Beera turned as they heard the voice

"Spii Spii Spiderman!!!" Nanhi stammered

"Yes, yes! Spying Spiderman" Mohan pulled a chair to join them at the table

When Mohan was driving through the Coffee shop, he found Nanhi's new scooty parked there. As he had time in hand, he thought of giving a surprise visit to her, when she's lazing with her friends. When he found Nanhi alone with Beera, he wasn't sure what to make out of it. He thought of returning without disturbing them but then he went ahead to peep in their conversation, just out of curiosity.

"Hai! I am Beera. Nice to meet you" Beera pitched in knowing that no words are coming out of Nanhi

"Hello! I am Mohan. Are you sure?"

"What?"

"Are you sure it was nice meeting me here?" Mohan winked at him to which Beera was just smiling

"Hey Chavvanni, sunna! Looks like flies are getting inside your mouth! Close it" Mohan turned too Nanhi and patted her back. Beera was trying to control his laughter hearing the name 'Chavvanni'

"Hey Spiderman, sunna" Mohan and Beera both were astonished on this response from Nanhi

Mohan and Nanhi looked at each other; they remembered their good old days and cracked up leaving Beera no choice other than to join them in their laughter. Nanhi sensed that Mohan was evaluating Beera amidst their casual talks.

"What is this, Spiderman?"

"What is this, Chavvanni?"

Finally when Beera left, Nanhi and Mohan both let out at the same time, the question pestering them throughout their conversation.

"Do you doubt me?" Again they had the same words out at the same time. Both laughed at this situation which relieved the discomfort between them.

"Arrey yaar! Would you stop me from looking out for my little Chavvani?" Mohan pushed her on the forehead smilingly and put his arms around her shoulders, making her feel like his little girl

"I am grown enough to know what I am doing"

"Yeah I can see that"

"What do you mean?"

"Nothing! Just like that. Look at your dress! You used to wear that uniform and worry about it being short! Now, it's the same size but you never complain about it" Mohan teased at her looking at the skirt she was wearing

"Ufff!!! Spiderman, this is quite long enough for this generation. You should see those ultra miniskirts that my colleague Anu, wears! All the boys are behind her the moment she's in office"

"Good for me! Hope Beera is not one among them!" He said looking at somewhere to which Nanhi slightly swatted him with her palms

"Beera is a sweet guy. Do you remember the TV breaking story I told you? It is Beera. The day when I met him at the office was really very funny. He was holding his laptop tight enough to crush it as if saving it from me" Nanhi started laughing remembering those instances as she elaborated more about their petty fights and how they became friends now.

"I did not expect that he would turn out to be very good friend of mine" Mohan was looking at her as if judging her statements and matching it with her expressions

"By the way, what's the thing with this Beera?" Mohan went back to square one and started running asking this, Nanhi chased him both laughing like little pranksters

*****
"Look what I have in my hands" Addu was waving some tickets in front of his friends

It had been good days for Addu at the office since his interesting stint with Mohan. Addu found him putting in additional efforts to work towards the assignment, to make it the best. And he was surprised to know he is trying to impress Mohan, this time around, and not anyone else. He even started taking interest in his outlook which he was not worried about earlier. He did not have time to think about anything else apart from his work and he was happy about it.

"Hurray! Cricket? WOW!!" Jayesh grabbed the tickets to check the details

"Yeah! I am very happy and wanted to celebrate it with you all"

"Can I join your celebrations?" Addu turned to look at Mohan smiling at him

"Yes, yes Sir!" Addu managed to respond

"Just let me know the day and time. We will go together"

"Ok Sir"

Mohan did not stop by to check Addu's reaction to know whether he is happy or confused about his intrusion. And he did not want to bother about it too much as he wanted to spend some time with Addu. He thought he will make this opportunity special for both of them.

*****
"How do I look?" Megha was amazed to look at Rimjhim who was just reflecting her own image

"Perfect and Beautiful"

Rimjhim insisted on dressing up like Megha. When Megha managed to get all her styles implied on the little girl, she was stunned to see the transformation. She wondered whether Mohan too saw her own reflection in this little life around him. She found tears of happiness rolling down her cheeks burying herself in his thoughts.

"Arrey yaar! Hey Mirchi Madam!" Megha hastily wiped off her tears and raised her eyebrows at Rimjhim's call

"Ohhh! You too?"

"Why? Is it only Paapu who has the right to call you that?" Rimjhim teased her and Megha squeezed her nose then tickled her

Jiji was overwhelmed at this scene and thought 'Oh God! Let the same happiness stay with our family always'

*****
Mohan was again surprised to see an envelope inside his postbox. The moment he laid his eyes on the photo of Rimjhim dressed up like Megha, his eyes twinkled in joy and he could express it only by dropping a tear. As he checked the other photos, he turned pink and full of smiles on seeing Megha dressed up like Rimjhim in a pink jumpsuit. He blushed at the imagined sight of her in front of him.
Pages to be continued...
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Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant writing Poo!!!

Hearty congratulations for the FF of the week!!!
Edited by CapeBuffalo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant, more and more and more please !
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...loved RJ and Megha scenes..and i can well imagine the protective father Mohan ..nyc one poo😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
*Sigh* Megha-RJ so adorable...Renu-RJ hilarious one 🀣 (now i m dying to watch R-RJ on screen 😳 ) ...Mohan d Father...Beera Mohan frnds baan gaye kya? πŸ€” πŸ˜† ...Mohan Addu together 😲 ...Poo plz assure me tht there will not be any twist in d story 😳 πŸ˜†

I love Jijis word to Renu..."Kids are like mirror" 🀣

Spl mention of tht scene Mohan seeing Meghas photo in pink jumpsuit 😳 I hope zada shock naa laga ho Mohan ko 🀣

Thoda drama, thoda masti, thoda emotion, Superb update πŸ‘πŸΌ

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